rose6666
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| 10 Dec 2013 12:34 PM |
We ran down the dirt road, making sure that whoever killed Mario, Olama and possibly Sunshine couldn't get us.
After about 30 minutes of running, we found the cabin that Azn had told us about. It was pretty big for a cabin, and we would all be able to fit inside it. The oak structure was obviously worn and old, but it would do.
We got inside and each took our separate rooms, despite the fact that a psycho killer is after us and this is the exact way that people die in horror movies.#
Knowing that, I decide to stay in a room with some others.
"Hey, Veronica, Swift, Azn! I think we should stay in the same room tonight... You know, just for safety."
"Yeah, good idea!" Says Veronica.
We go into the biggest room together, and lay down mats for ourselves.
I close my eyes, and drift off to sleep.
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Rose...
Someone was whispering my name.
Rose...
I could feel something seeping into my lungs... Something smoky.
"ROSE!" Swift's voice cuts me out of my sleep, and I jerk up to find that our surroundings were covered in orange flames.
"Rose, someone set the cabin on fire while we were sleeping!" Azn informs me.
I approach the room's door and help Veronica and Swift push it open. We succeed, and dash out.
As we head to the door, we see Capri crawling across the floor with a massive gash in her back, and burns all over her face.
"Guys, get outside! I'll help Capri!" Swift orders us, and we obey as he runs over to Capri and helps her up.
Me, Azn and Veronica make it outside of the burning cabin, followed by Swift carrying Capri.
Leslie, Ultra and Thepop were already outside.
"Where are the others?!" I ask them.
"Dead... They're all dead... They either burnt alive or were slaughtered by the man who broke into the house." Thepop looked down at Capri, and gasped.
I knelt down and tried to help her by pushing down on the wound to stop the bleeding, and felt Leslie's cold hand on my shoulder.
"We can'r save er'"
"Yes we can! I can't let another person die! She CAN'T die!"
Leslie looked off into the forest, apparently looking for something; even though it wasn't there.
"Sometimes, dead is bettah!"
I push his hand off my shoulder, and turn to face him.
"DON'T GO ALL JUD CRANDALL ON ME, LESLIE!" I look back at Capri as she utters her last dying breath.
And then her head rolled back, and her eyes stared off into the distance.
Veronica starts to cry, and Swift comforts her.
"We need to keep going... To the gas station, the map also said there was a motel there. They've got to have a phone we can use to call the police or something." I look around at Thepop, Veronica, Ultra, Leslie, Azn and finally Swift. "Lead the way, Swift."
And so, we carry on walking down the dirt path, leaving the burning cabin and our many dead friends behind.
But someone was watching us... Someone who wouldn't rest until we were all dead.
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| 10 Dec 2013 12:51 PM |
NOOOOOO CAPRRI!!!!!!
And I have a bad feeling that I'm going to die in the next part. |
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| 10 Dec 2013 01:28 PM |
| Also props on the story, this is the most enjoyable fanfic story I've read so far. |
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| 10 Dec 2013 02:40 PM |
| I hope you don't do what I think you're going to do with my character, because if you do then that'll be an amazing plot twist c: |
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rose6666
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| 10 Dec 2013 04:24 PM |
| So more than 5 people died in this chapter, I think that's a record. |
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| 10 Dec 2013 05:03 PM |
Well, you know what they say.
Sometimes dead is better. |
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| 10 Dec 2013 05:08 PM |
i DIED NOOOOOOO -cries-
i cant find part 2 or 3 woOPS
but this chapter is good and it seems like a good story
so uh, how's your baby rose? |
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| 10 Dec 2013 06:32 PM |
rip capri ;-;.
my goodness, this is intense. |
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timpookie
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| 12 Dec 2013 12:58 AM |
I just found this series, and I was mentioned once in it. Yay for me.
This is the last day before the Bannanachair goes extinct! |
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