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| 09 Dec 2013 07:47 PM |
Introduction By Kailey There are many things about the Tolowa Tribe here are some things about them.Tolowa means People to the north.The Yurok Tribe gave the Tolowa Tribe its name.Tolowa is pronounced Taa-Laa-Wa.The Tolowa people lived way north by the Smith River and Klamath River by Oregon.They lived by rocky beaches.The
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lou222
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| 09 Dec 2013 07:49 PM |
| yeah, it is pretty bad. you should revise it before turning it in |
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Fairth
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| 09 Dec 2013 07:50 PM |
Look it up on an essay site Copy and paste Recieve a commended grade
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Fairth
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| 09 Dec 2013 07:54 PM |
I am reviewing the whatever tribe.
The whatever tribe has many unique facts. One of them is that another, equally unique tribe gave them it's name. The name whatever means People of the North. The whatever tribe is pronounced whatever. This tribe was located near the whatever.
This tribe is interesting because...
The tribe also has some really cool...
Add some stuff. Commended grade.
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| 09 Dec 2013 07:55 PM |
There are many interesting things about the Tolowa Tribe. Tolowa means People to the North (Why Is That Their Name?). The Yurok Tribe gave the Tolowa Tribe its name (Why?). Tolowa is pronounced Taa-Laa-Wa. The Tolowa people lived way north by the Smith River and Klamath River by Oregon. They Also lived by rocky beaches. (Sentences Are Too Short. Needs More Detail)
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| 09 Dec 2013 08:01 PM |
@omglol I'm 9 what do you expect I write short sentences. |
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| 09 Dec 2013 08:03 PM |
There are many things to know about the Tolowa Tribe. I am going to state some of the facts.The Yurok Tribe gave the Tolowa Tribe its name. Tolowa is pronounced Taa-Laa-Wa.The Tolowa people lived way north by the Smith River and Klamath River by Oregon. They lived by the rocky beaches of the rivers. They traditionally spoke the Tolowa language, one of the Athapaskan languages. Their subsistence was oriented around riverine and marine resources and acorns. Their society was not formally stratified, but pressure was on personal wealth. Tolowa villages were organized around a headman and usually were mostly populated by men. The men brought their wives in from neighboring tribes. The brides were usually related to them (Cousins, sisters ect.). |
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| 09 Dec 2013 08:05 PM |
@Thelab tl;dr My teacher would probably know I copied and pasted. Make it seem like a 9 y/o wrote it |
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| 09 Dec 2013 08:09 PM |
| Don't Say Things Like "Here Are The Reasons.." "I'm Going To Tell You.." Things That Involve You. Only State Facts. |
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Awkrin
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| 09 Dec 2013 08:12 PM |
"Kailey"
My mate spells it Kiley... I doubt you are real. |
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Fairth
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| 09 Dec 2013 08:12 PM |
Then consider yourself a genius. Tell her that you do your best work not being manipulated with noises from the children around you. Also, that it's neccesary to place you in a gifted group due to the fact that you can, by honest opinion, score commended.
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Awkrin
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| 09 Dec 2013 08:20 PM |
| Doubt it. There can only be one. |
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| 09 Dec 2013 08:23 PM |
that is unbelievable here i am in seventh grade writing better than these eleventh graders tsktsk
Perhaps you've heard of some foreign tribe on Discovery maybe, yet did you know there was a tribe that lived right here in Oregon? It goes by the name, the Tolowa Tribe, and is pronounced Taa-Laa-Wa. These people lived far north up the Smith river and Klamath river by Oregon. The rocky beaches provided shelter to some of the food this tribe needed to live, like fish.
i have no idea lelelell
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| 09 Dec 2013 08:23 PM |
I'm done tell me what I should change.
Introduction By Kailey Kwok The Tolowa Tribe has many unique fact. Did you know the Yurok Tribe gave the Tolowa Tribe its name? The name Tolowa means People of the North. The Tolowa Tribe is pronounced Taa-Laa-Wa. This tribe was located way up in the north by Oregon and rocky beaches.Some natural resources that was near them are acorns,shells,and seaweed.Since the Tolowa Tribe had 4 different areas the climate would be different in each area.This tribe spoke two languages Chetco-Tolowa and Siletz Dee-ni.Some tribes that lived near the Tolowa people are Yurok Tribe,Shasta Tribe,Hupa Tribe,and the Karok Tribe.
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Zeriten
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| 09 Dec 2013 08:25 PM |
"The Tolowa Tribe has many unique fact." AW YEAH JUST GOTTA LOVE DEM PLURAL.
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| 09 Dec 2013 08:27 PM |
| you're 9? oh, well i guess it's okay for a 9 year old |
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| 09 Dec 2013 08:28 PM |
| @mario yay it's too late11!! |
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dralion
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| 09 Dec 2013 08:38 PM |
There are many things about the Tolowa Tribe here are some things about them. -try opening it with a less-generic beginning. also, you basically said "here are some facts about the Tolowa Tribe" twice.
Tolowa means People to the north.The Yurok Tribe gave the Tolowa Tribe its name. -this is fine.
Tolowa is pronounced Taa-Laa-Wa. -why don't you put this at the very begining.
The Tolowa people lived way north by the Smith River and Klamath River by Oregon. -the Smith and Klamath rivers are both in California. why don't you just put that they're in California? also, you should take out "way north."
They lived by rocky beaches. -why don't you say that they lived near rocky beaches, since you already said that they live by the two rivers (don't use "by" two times in a row). |
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