Pengu8
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| 08 Dec 2013 09:12 PM |
The project is due tomorrow, I need someone to correct my paragraph. This:
Para mantener la salud, es necessito hacer ejercicio. Ejercicio es importante, ustedes deben ejercicio para ciento cincuenta minutos o más o menos una hora. A veces galletas, hamburguesas, tocino, perrito calientes y pizza son muy sabrosos. ¡Pero, la comida es muy horribles para la salud! Tú debes prefieres las saludables comidas. Siempre caminas las verduras, frutas y saludables bebidas para mantener la salud. ¿Tengo hambre? ¡Caminas los huevos con pan, o sopa de verduras, verduras con pizza o sandwich! ¿Tengo sed? ¡Bebo agua o jugo de frutas! Por supuesto, la saludables comida sin “saludables” es nunca buena para mantener la salud. ¿Verdad? ¡Ser optimista cada día y comer saludable!
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Pengu8
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| 08 Dec 2013 09:14 PM |
| I'm serious. I really need a native speaker to correct this. It's due tomorrow and it's worth 30 percent of my grade |
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Aludra
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| 08 Dec 2013 09:42 PM |
| Roblox isn't the best place. |
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Pengu8
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| 08 Dec 2013 09:46 PM |
| lol i know but i'm getting desperate and YA is taking too long |
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| 08 Dec 2013 10:20 PM |
sorry
i don't speak taco
http://www.roblox.com/Horo-place?id=64731446 ~uguu |
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| 09 Dec 2013 06:21 AM |
Oh god, my eyes. This is horrible. |
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Aludra
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| 09 Dec 2013 05:17 PM |
| Yahoo Answers is arguably worse. |
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Midmyst
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| 09 Dec 2013 05:20 PM |
Use google translate. C:
(PS: It was a joke. Please do not use google translate unless you want to fail.) |
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jjj344
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| 09 Dec 2013 06:39 PM |
Okay. Let me translate that. To maintain health, need to do is exercise. Exercise is important, you should exercise for one hundred and fifty minutes or more or less an hour. Sometimes cookies, hamburgers, bacon, hot dog and pizza are very tasty. But, the food is very horrible to health! You should prefer the healthy meals. Always walk the vegetables, fruits, and healthy drinks to maintain health. Do I Have hunger? You walk down the eggs with bread, or vegetable soup, vegetables with pizza or sandwich! How do I get thirsty? So I drink water or fruit juice! Of course, the healthy food without "healthy" is never good to maintain health. Isn't it? We must be optimistic every day and eat healthy!
Always walk the vegetables, fruits, and healthy drinks to maintain health. lol Why did you put in walk? LOL! /e laugh
Other than that, you get a A for being funny and being pretty good! |
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jjj344
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| 09 Dec 2013 06:43 PM |
| Waiting in your PM box with the same exact msg only for storage puposes. |
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jack34235
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| 09 Dec 2013 06:46 PM |
I Will Fix It For You. No Need To Thank Me.
Para mantener la salud, es el ejercicio necessito. El ejercicio es importante, usted debe ejercitar por más de ciento cincuenta minutos o una hora. A veces las galletas, hamburguesas, tocino, perros calientes y pizza son tasty.But, la comida es horrible para su salud! Usted debe preferir alimentos sanos. Siempre camina verduras, frutas y bebidas saludables para mantener la salud. ¿Soy hambre? Caminas huevos con pan o sopa de verduras, verduras con la pizza o un sandwich! ¿Estoy sediento? Beba agua o jugo de fruta! Por supuesto, la comida sana y sin "saludable" Nunca es bueno para mantener la salud. ¿Cierto? Ser optimista todos los días y comer sano! |
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| 09 Dec 2013 06:46 PM |
| @jack Your english is bad enough... |
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jack34235
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| 09 Dec 2013 06:53 PM |
| Goblark You're Um Sort Of A Noob. So Back Off. |
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| 09 Dec 2013 06:55 PM |
*Goblark you're sort of a noob, so back off. I rest my case, "noob". |
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jack34235
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| 09 Dec 2013 06:57 PM |
| You're Speaking English Wrong. I Have A PhD In English So Uhhhh You're Wrong. You're Supposed To Capitalize Every Letter At The Beginning Of A Sentence. |
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Midmyst
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| 09 Dec 2013 06:59 PM |
| Exactly, at the beginning of a sentence. Not the beginning of every word! (this does not apply if it is a proper noun, however.) |
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| 09 Dec 2013 07:02 PM |
@jack Except you're capitalizing every word. You might have a PhD in english, but I speak it. |
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jack34235
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| 09 Dec 2013 07:06 PM |
| These Are Sentences. This Word Right Here Is A Sentence. Please Go Back To Kindergarden. |
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jjj344
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jack34235
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| 09 Dec 2013 07:12 PM |
| Capital Means Awesome So Thank You. |
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| 09 Dec 2013 07:13 PM |
No, it doesn't. Grammar-wise, it means the opposite of lowercase. But, the latin root "Capit" means "Head of", you can figure out the rest. |
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jack34235
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| 09 Dec 2013 07:14 PM |
| Head Of All. (Al = All). So That Means I'm Awesome And Rule Over Everyone. Thanks Goblack! |
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