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SwedishLemon is not online. SwedishLemon
Joined: 19 Nov 2008
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07 Dec 2013 09:51 PM
Loosely based off of the videogame Hard Time, and created in three days with AlixeTiir.)

As you walk through the large metal gates, you can still hear the judge's gavel slamming down.

"Guilty!" He yelled. It might have been your imagination, but it was like everyone in the courtroom laughed as you were dragged off, their faces distorting as your shackled hands were grabbed by two burly courtroom-security officers.

You snap out of your daydream as they unlock the door to your cell, tossing you in and locking the door behind you.

The year is 2020, and the crimerate has risen to the point of prisons closing due to an overflow of prisoners. At this point, even the smallest crime could land you in Blackgate Correctional Facility, the more secure and largest prison ever created. The conditions are horrid, and guards are at every corner.

Over 300 people die every week in Blackgate, but at this point every criminal is thought to be scum, even by Human Rights inspectors. Impossible to escape, the only way to get out is to serve your sentance, or die trying.

You are an offender. Guilty or innocent, it doesn't matter. You must serve your sentance or die trying, but is the impossible escape truly... possible?

Welcome to Blackgate, prisoner.


-SOUTH BLOCK-

Designed for low-level offenders; people who committed crimes such as speeding, littering, driving without a license, and not paying a parking meter, the South Block is the smallest and least dangerous out of the cell blocks, as most who enter usually become so hardened by prison life they're moved to another block, for committing murder or some form of worse crime during their stay. They wear blue jumpsuits to symbolize innocence, and most prisoners did simple things like speeding or littering.

The South Block is 50 square miles, having a total of 10,000 prisoners. Each cell is constructed out of concrete and is fairly large, with polished wood planks installed for flooring, and has a seperate room for the bathroom and sink, as well as a padded bed.. Wallpaper ranges from a purple backround with pink flowers, to amber spirals on a creme backround. The South Block has two floors, and 5,000 baton-wielding guards.

South block prisoners are allowed eight hours of unsupervised and unrecorded recreational time.


-WEST BLOCK-

The west block was designed for white-collar offenders; people who comitted crimes like fraud, identity theft, computer hacking, falsifying information, counterfeiting, and forging paperwork. The west block isn't much more dangerous than the south block, considering that most of the prisoners are just nerds who wanted to print their own money or steal someone else's. The prisoners of the west block wear green jumpsuits to symbolize their greed and what it has done to them.

The West Block is 80 square miles, and it houses 16,000 prisoners. Each cell in the west block is made of concrete, with no wallpaper or special flooring(just concrete), and each cell is equipped with a bunk, a toilet, a computer with no internet access, a bookshelf, and reading material. The West block has three floors, and 8,000 armed guards.

West block prisoners are allowed six hours of unsupervised recorded recreational time.


-NORTH BLOCK-

North Block prisoners are generally guilty of major blue-collar crimes, from theft, to [CONTENT DELETED], and even murder. The criminals that go here include people who commit grand theft auto, disturbing the peace, causing riots, assault, murder, or anything else that carries the intent of chaos and mayhem. They wear orange jumpsuits to represent the chaos they sowed before being jailed.

The North Block is 90 square miles, and six stories tall and houses 25,000 prisoners per floor. Each north block cell is crammed so that prisoners have to walk single file with their bunkmate in order to exit, and contains a toilet, a sink, and a bunkbed. Each floor of the north block has 11,000 guards, armed and trained in both firearms and hand-to-hand combat.

North block prisoners are allowed four hours of supervised and recorded recreational time.


-EAST BLOCK-

Only the worst possible prisoners are ever sent to the east block - mass murderers, [CONTENT DELETED]ists, often both. Prisoners of the east block are violent, generally insane, and guilty of massively violent crimes like creative serial killings. They wear red jumpsuits to symbolize the violence they commit, and the blood they shed which can never be returned.

The East Block is 20 square miles, and one hundred stories tall, housing prisoners 1,000,000 in total. Each East Block cell is so small that it can only fit a single padded bed, with no room for even walk-space. The East Block is entirely operated by machines, with a hole in the wall that gives water-bottles every half-hour and nutrition pills every five hours. When an East-Block prisoner gets recreational time, a highly trained team or guards are required to use specially designed keys to activate the only way up or down in the East Block; a small elevator only able to carry three at a time, lacking walls and instead having a small multi-directional pad so the magnetic elevator can move to the correct cell.

East Block prisoners are allowed two hours of heavily guarded and extremely recorded recreational time.

The only known way to escape the East-Block is to somehow open the cell to your door, and jump to your death.


-LOBBY-

The entrance to Blackgate, it has highly secured metal doors which require the Warden's key to open from the inside. Prisoners can come and go into the lobby as they please, but it doesn't have much other than a computer, a couch, and a T.V. It has nine doors, four of which are marked with a letter designating which cell block it is. The East Block is locked, requiring an East Block recreational officer to unlock it.

Two security guards guard the metal exit door, but even if a prisoner was to kill them they would still require the Warden's key.


-LIBRARY-

The fifth door in the Lobby, the Library is small compared to the rest of Blackgate due to few prisoners entering it. The Library has three computers with internet access, many educational books, and a single pen connected to the computer table.

The Library is about the size of a school library, but has mostly only educaitonal and rehabilitation books.


-WORKSHOP-

The sixth door in the Lobby, the Workshop resembles a foreign sweatshop, with poor working conditions and abusive guards. Prisoners can lower their sentance by working here and also gain a few bucks to purchase items online through the library computers, but most come here to try and smuggle the items they created into their cells.

The Workshop is required to have one guard watching over every table of six workers. The Workshop is about the size of an industrial factory, and East Prisoners are forbidden from entering.


-HOSPITAL-

The seventh door found in the lobby, the Hospital is, well, a hospital. It's the size of a hospital, and has prison doctors as well as guards crowding every room to treat fatal wounds and to make sure a prisoner isn't faking it to get some drugs or weapons.

The Hospital is forbidden to enter, even during recreational times. The only way to get in is to get wounded, or to fake it.


-SHOWERS-

The eighth door found in the Lobby, the Showers aren't really anything special. They're one giant group shower, with several urinals on the wall behind them, The Showers are as big as the Workshop.

Most injuries happen here, due to guards being forbidden to enter unless chasing a potential breakout,

-YARD-

The ninth door in the Lobby, the Yard is a yard. It's as big as twelve football fields, has a basketball court, weights, small park benches and tables, and water fountains. It has grass which is extremely well-cared for by Blackgate staff.

The Yard has 300 fully trained prison snipers on the large metal black wall surrounding the entire prison, to prevent riots and people attempting to climb the Yard fence, not like they could get past the second wall anyways.


-RULES-

No prison romance, however unmentionable prison acts that are pretty common are allowed as long as you only imply them.

A stab to the kidney will probably kill you.

No godmodding.

No random OP skills when you're a simple West or South prisoner.

East prisoners are allowed brutal and deadly skills, but are probably the hardest to play and escape.

Escape is nearly impossible, just keep that in mind. You can attempt an escape, but it may fail and end with you moving into North or East block.

If you're already East block and start killing more, you'll get a death sentance and die.

You get one character at a time. If your character dies, you can make a new one, but you cannot control more than one at a time.

Don't randomly pick fights. You might get respect, but you'll probably die.

Say 'Is there a secret word?' in Other.

IF YOU DON'T HAVE FUN I WILL MURDER YOU! Just kidding, but don't start acting like an idiot just to ruin the RP.

Admins are me, AlixeTiir, Soardlo, Kseeking, and bebithetuffle (who probably won't join).


-CHARACTER SHEET-

Name:
Cell Number: (Found on the back of your prison jumpsuit.)
A.ge:
Physical Appearance: (You only wear your prison jumpsuit, so clothing is unnecessary.)
Gen.der:
Cell Block:
Crime:
Guilty or Innocent:
Plead:
Sentance:
Skills:
Bio:
Other:


-SWEDISHLEMON'S CHARACTER SHEET-

Name: Jared Delamark

Cell Number: Cell 13, first floor. S-13 is found on his prison jumpsuit.

A.ge: 27

Physical Appearance: Jared weighes 155 pounds, is 5'4 tall, and has hazel eyes. He has black hair which he wears in a ponytail, and is very thin, even with his small size. He isn't fat or skinny, but not muscular in the slightest. He could only be described as 'average'. His eyes have a tilt to them that always gives him a slight aggressive look to him, enhanced by his thin eyebrows. Jared tries to keep himself as clean as possible, but prison life is beginning to give him jagged nails.

Gen.der: Male

Cell Block: South

Crime: Nearly hit a pedestrian, and instead rammed into a parking meter.

Guilty or Innocent: Guilty.

Plead: Innocent

Sentance: Five years with parole possibility.

Skills: An arcitect, Jared had a small part in building the prison, and thus knows a limited degree of it's weak points. Jared also is a handy-man, able to make makeshift objecs provided he has some tape or some nails.and a hammer.

Bio: An arcitect, Jared didn't get much money with his jobs. A daycare here and there, an office building every five years or so, and a bit of school cafetaria remodeling. However, he got his big break when he was hired to be one of the arcitects to work on Blackgate.

He didn't get much of a job compared to the size of the prison, but if it was any other prison he would have made the entire thing due to such a large part he got compared to regular sized prisons.

He was on his way to his new house he bought when he nearly hit a pedestrian, and crashed into a parking meter. He pleaded innocent, but he was guilty and was sentanced as such.

Other: Is there a secret word?



-ALIXETIIR'S CHARACTER SHEET-

Name: Melbourne Smith

Cell Number: Cell 33, the number on his jumpsuit reads B-33

A.ge: 28

Physical Appearance: Melbourne is of average build, 5'8, 170 pounds. He has facial features that would be described as 'blocky', such as a broad jaw and mid level cheekbones, and a huge forehead. Melbourne has long blonde hair that resembles a sand dune filled with hay because he doesn't treat his hair right. He has dull blue eyes that make him seem like a moron at first glance. Melbourne has incredibly thick eyebrows and a wide brow. He looks like a freaking thug, to be honest. You'd never had expected that he wasn't convicted of violence against humans.

Gen.der: Male

Cell Block: North

Crime: Eating twelve cats while under the influence of [PIRATE POWDER]

Guilty or Innocent: He's only guilty of eating three of the cats. His dog ate the rest.

Plead: Guilty

Sentance: 20 years with possibility of parole.

Skills: Physics and chemistry, mostly, although his mechanical inclinations have given him some minor skills with locks in the past.

Bio: A physics professor at CalTech, Melbourne decided to delve into chemistry one day, since they were firing him. That chemistry experiment changed everything since he accidentally created some [PIRATE POWDER], which, as you may know, enhances cognitive function temporarily as well as adding a number of deletirious effects.

Of course, once he had his first taste, he needed more. and the more. and more. Eventually, he had to move out of his nice house and into a cheap apartment, and since he was still using [PIRATE POWDER], he ended up eating three cats with his dog.

Other: Is there a secret word?
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shadowblade1234567 is not online. shadowblade1234567
Joined: 13 Jun 2011
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07 Dec 2013 10:24 PM
Name: "My name is Commons Renegade."

Cell Number: "Cell 521, the number on the jumpsuit says A-521."

Age: "I am 23."

Physical Appearance: "I'll try my best to describe me. I have a bruise on my leg, a few freckles dotting my face, and a kind, yet serious look on my face. My eyes are green and light green, genetic of Hectrocromia Iridum, were the eye colors are different. I am 6'1, with a regular build, and an even stubble. My nose is short, yet hard, and my face is slightly chiseled. My hair color is tinted red, and it's long. My ears are short, and my eyebrows are of a medium size. It's noted that some people say I look like a cat, or just looking good."

Gender: "I don't think it's hard to tell I am a man.:

Cell Block: "In the South Block."

Crime: "I punched a guy square in the eye, kicking his private spot in a meeting."

Guilty or Innocent: "I did it because I was enraged at the comment he said about my family."

Plead: "Guilty. I was hoping for innocent, mainly cause you know you would do that too, if someone said that about your family."

Sentence: "I'm in for 4 years, and I think I can get parole if I show lessened anger."

Skills: "I have been in fights before, as a lawyer, I was pretty charismatic, and I had 'secret' talents that I did when I was younger. Mainly for pranks, mind you, but I still have a slight recognition of those skills. I am intelligent, as you can't be as smart as a brick to be a lawyer."

Bio: "I was a lawyer. I often saved my clients, and I picked them depending on the evidence, and whether my gut screamed 'Help him/her! They didn't do it!' One of my rejected clients had swore at me, and said those things about my family.

Enraged, I was moving fast and got a few punches in. He blacked out about half a minute after I kicked his private spot with all my force, and I was found. Here I am."

Other: Is there a secret word?
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AlixeTiir is not online. AlixeTiir
Joined: 18 Nov 2008
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07 Dec 2013 10:32 PM
I'm sitting around in my cell gargling some mouthwash.

Cat doesn't taste very good.
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SwedishLemon is not online. SwedishLemon
Joined: 19 Nov 2008
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07 Dec 2013 10:41 PM
(Accepted.)
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AlixeTiir is not online. AlixeTiir
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07 Dec 2013 11:38 PM
bump
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Kataoka is not online. Kataoka
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07 Dec 2013 11:45 PM
Saaaaaved
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hugeboo322 is not online. hugeboo322
Joined: 21 Sep 2010
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07 Dec 2013 11:46 PM
(Will make CS later tonight)
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PawzKat is not online. PawzKat
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07 Dec 2013 11:57 PM
--Marked. Cat-eating, who knew it was a crime.
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hugeboo322 is not online. hugeboo322
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08 Dec 2013 12:19 AM

-CHARACTER SHEET-

Name: Suzanna Mey
Cell Number: 104
A.ge: 20
Physical Appearance: Long red hair reaching her chest, green eyes, a face too pretty for a tough place like prison. A birth mark on her mid thigh. Caucasion skin. 5'6, 130 pounds. Her apperance makes it seem as though she would be reporting people to the police to Content Deleted, not being reported to the police.
Gen.der: Female
Cell Block: North block
Crime: Repeated assault and vandalism
Guilty or Innocent: Guilty
Plead: Guilty
Sentance: 7 years and 6 months of house arrest
Skills: Not much, a dirty fighter...thats about it
Bio: A aggressive pretty girl, Suzanna has had been known to have mental breakdowns in relationships...little did people know she would go as far as to destroy and entire apartment and mug her ex-boyfriend's new girlfriend. She even added irony in it, using her ex's baseball bat to smash lamps, break windows, a TV, and, miraculously, her fridge and oven. The baseball bat was the struck over the head of the woman, then on the stomach repeatidly. And even worse....she attacked the first cop to try to restrain her by choking him with the bat. It took 2 police and a tazer to get her yield.
Other: Is there a secret word?
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MICHAEL936 is not online. MICHAEL936
Joined: 10 Oct 2009
Total Posts: 5086
08 Dec 2013 12:29 AM
- Character Sheet -

Name: John Kane
Cell Number: 48, reads N-48 on suit
A.ge: 37
Physical Appearance: Bruise above eye, white, brown hair, blue eyes. 6'2, 148 lb.
Gen.der: Male
Cell Block: North Block
Crime: Murder, Theft of over 90,000$, unmentionable acts, aggravated assault
Guilty or Innocent: Guilty
Plead: Guilty
Sentence: 55 years in prison
Skills: Feels no guilt, not really a skill, but no guilt
Bio: Injured as a child, grew up to be a murderer
Other: Is there a secret word?
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MICHAEL936 is not online. MICHAEL936
Joined: 10 Oct 2009
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08 Dec 2013 12:32 AM
Whoops, make that cell block east block

sorry,
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Mycousinblade is not online. Mycousinblade
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08 Dec 2013 12:35 AM
Name: Riley "Jesus" Lazarus.
Cell Number: 923
A.ge: 34
Physical Appearance: He has a full beard, with long hair reaching to his chest. This has given him the appearance of Jesus, with his green eyes overseeing his work. He is moderatly fit, but is working to improve that.
Gen.der: M.
Cell Block: West.
Crime: He robbed many people with a Virus known as "ScottProtection," a pretend security system. FBI are currently working to defeat it, bt it is elusive. Multiple people have tried fixing it themselves, going as far as to pulling their computer apart. This induced an electric shock, killing all who tried fixing it.
Guilty or Innocent: Guilty.
Plead: Guilty.
Sentance: 12 years, many threatened another decade if Riley messes up.
Skills: A god-like skill in computer work, from fixing to hacking, he also keeps up his good skill at playing basketball.
Bio: At the age of six, Riley had hacked into his parents bank account and attempted to buy a laptop that he so dearly wanted. His mother had deactivated the account before he could, so he was put into therapy. When he turned 12, his parents had made the mistake of giving him a laptop. By the age of 18, he had hacked into many college kids credit cards, phones, computers and even his school newsletter, putting rather inappropiate words on there. As he grew older, he had landed in prison three times, for minor cyber offenses.
Other: Is there a secret word? Is there really a secret word? Come on, just tell me, it won't be a secret if it's not.
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Mycousinblade is not online. Mycousinblade
Joined: 14 Mar 2011
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08 Dec 2013 12:37 AM
(Forget his height, 6'2. And, I know this may seem silly, but can we try not to take unforgivable intimate acts as a joke? This has happened to my nana.)
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AlixeTiir is not online. AlixeTiir
Joined: 18 Nov 2008
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08 Dec 2013 12:48 AM
I pace around in my cell a bit and start doing pushups since there's nothing else to do right now.
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MICHAEL936 is not online. MICHAEL936
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08 Dec 2013 12:49 AM
Alixe, can you accept my character sheet?
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hugeboo322 is not online. hugeboo322
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08 Dec 2013 12:51 AM
(Same for me)
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PawzKat is not online. PawzKat
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08 Dec 2013 12:51 AM
--Oh course, the only securer Prison is Furnace Penitentiary[Did I spell that right, hmmm]
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hugeboo322 is not online. hugeboo322
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08 Dec 2013 12:52 AM

-CHARACTER SHEET-

Name: Suzanna Mey
Cell Number: 33, jumpsuit reads A-33
A.ge: 20
Physical Appearance: Long red hair reaching her chest, green eyes, a face too pretty for a tough place like prison. A birth mark on her mid thigh. Caucasion skin. 5'6, 130 pounds. Her apperance makes it seem as though she would be reporting people to the police to Content Deleted, not being reported to the police.
Gen.der: Female
Cell Block: North block
Crime: Repeated assault and vandalism
Guilty or Innocent: Guilty
Plead: Guilty
Sentance: 7 years and 6 months of house arrest
Skills: Not much, a dirty fighter...thats about it
Bio: A aggressive pretty girl, Suzanna has had been known to have mental breakdowns in relationships...little did people know she would go as far as to destroy and entire apartment and mug her ex-boyfriend's new girlfriend. She even added irony in it, using her ex's baseball bat to smash lamps, break windows, a TV, and, miraculously, her fridge and oven. The baseball bat was the struck over the head of the woman, then on the stomach repeatidly. And even worse....she attacked the first cop to try to restrain her by choking him with the bat. It took 2 police and a tazer to get her yield.
Other: Is there a secret word?
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Joined: 22 Apr 2012
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08 Dec 2013 01:12 AM
Name:
"Collyn Aitord Orikrans, at your service, I don't tolerate nicknames."
Cell Number:
"Or, better know as W-1717, which is centered on my green jumpsuit."
A.ge:
"Oh, yes. I just turned eighteen, rendering me eligible for a cell here."
Physical Appearance:
He's short, around 5'6, and weighed a lightweight 102 pounds. He had one of those scrawnier frames, a lithe build which one could tell was unused to the activities which were usually played by an average boy. His hair could simply be described as frazzled, go a mess of dark brown curls that seemed to lean every which way, yet had an oddly hypnotic effect. His hair was cut just past his ears, which, instead of being rounded, had a pointed effect, making him appear to be one of those fairytale elves. Though, if I were to choose the most interesting fact about this boy, it wouldn't be his shape, hair, or, he'll, even his ears. No, it would be his eyes.

When this young man had been born, he had been birthed with the genetic mutation known simply as hectcromia, in which he inherited two different iris colours. His right eye was a light hazel, or faded 'gold' as his mother called it, it was true, for instead of being a dark chestnut, his eye took on a more yellow tinge, ringed with a darker colour of the same side. His left eye, though a much more common colour, was unusual as well. A stormy gray, flecked with bits of what appeared to be liquid emerald crystal. His eyes were a wide almond shape, framed by his impossibly long lashes, whose colour resembled that of midnight. Freckles dappled his face, crossing the bridge of his nose, with some even falling into his cheeks.

His skin colour could be me described as radiant, an even olive-tone.
Personality:
[Irritable] Though it may not seem like it, Collyn has a short fuse, when something is directly involved in him. He'll explode over the simplest of comments, and will begin screaming in other people's faces.
[Stubborn] Undyingly stubborn, he refuses to give up, and to try his best when he can, even if he doesn't like what it is. He refuses to back down, always standing his ground when he believes in it. This, on occasion, has led to some minor authority problems.
[Loyal] Loyal to the end, he refuses to give up on a friend, even if they gave up on him longer before. He'll strand by them, for better or for worse, and will help put when he can. This however, can cause him to be blind to that friend's not-so-good traits.
[Nomadic;quiet and reserved] His trait above is countered by this one, as the boy struggles in making, and painting strong friendships due to his dislike of crowds, and his craving for silence.
[Spitfire] Unpredictable at times, you never know what Collyn's next move is in life, whether it's to yell at a teacher, or doing something random.
[Intelligence; cunning] An intelligent young man, he often channels that energy into petty tricks.
[Bravery] Not afraid to stand up to authority, or too try something completely new if he puts his mind to it.
Gen.der:
"Um, what do you think? I'm not a girl."
Cell Block:
"West Block, green block."
Crime:
"Computer Hacking, I, uh, bypassed the mainframe of an important website. Of course, this one the only one they found. "
Guilty or Innocent:
"Well. I suppose I'm guilty, although, if I can say in my Defense, I was asked. By who? Well, that's what you get to find out."
Plead:
"[sigh]I'm a good Samaritan. I pleaded Guilty."
Sentence:
"That 'important website' wasn't exactly happy. I'll get out when I'm well into my forties."
Skills:
"Known skills?
[]Computer hacking, programming, whatever you want to call it. Let's just say 'gaming' skills.
[]Art, believe it or not. It's what I kinda wanted to major in[okay, backup major] because my first was going to be Computer Programming. Well, that probably won't be happening."
Bio:
"Erm. I was born in Chicago, Illinois. My mom and dad wern't exactly rich, and we bounced around from area to area. I kinda helped gain us money by doing hacking jobs."
Other: Is There a Secret Code?
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AlixeTiir is not online. AlixeTiir
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08 Dec 2013 01:15 AM
Hugeboo:Accepted
Michael:Expand on your appearance and change to north block, not east block. Unless you do those things on a massive scale, you're not bad enough for east.
Cousin:Accepted
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08 Dec 2013 01:16 AM
Suzanna looked at her cellmate.
"Hellooo?"
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08 Dec 2013 01:19 AM
(Coolios, thanks.)

Jesus sat in his cell, typing up the rotational guard schedule on his computer. He took out a handball from his desk, and threw it up to the roof before catching it. He continued this process for a while.
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AlixeTiir is not online. AlixeTiir
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08 Dec 2013 01:20 AM
Pawz: Your appearance is kind of outlandish. The heterochromia is fine except that you can't have a grey eye, because if it were grey it'd be deprived of nutrition somehow and it'd be blind. Unless it got damaged somehow, I see no justification.

your elf-like ears are fine, but I'm feeling a little odd about the olive skin tone. I mean, who has olive-toned skin?

Other than that, your character sheet seems to be great.
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AlixeTiir is not online. AlixeTiir
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08 Dec 2013 01:21 AM
I look back at Suzanna and say "Hello. What are you in here for? I'm in here for eating cats."

"I only ate three of them, I swear. My dog ate the rest."
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08 Dec 2013 01:23 AM
"I'm here for using a baseball bat" She smiled evilly.
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