Olama5
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| 08 Dec 2013 02:17 PM |
>Note: I do not care about spelling errors, imagine there are no errors. I am tired of this.
>Chapter 1: Perfect Day
The sun started to rise as it turned morning. The sun shined through the window of Brian's bedroom.
"Good Morning, World" Brian said as he woke up and stretched. It was a summer morning. Birds chirping, Worms worming, and the bugs buzzing through the air. He thought it was the perfect day. |---------------------------------------------| Brian got up and out of bed. He got dressed and called his friend, Jake. Jake was a good friend of Brian. They met only in Kindergarten. Jake was a bit bossy at some times, but they always made up after those kinds of fights. Brian waited for Jake to answer. As soon as Jake answered, Brian started to talk. "What's up Jake?" Brian said. "Nothing much, just laying here bored," Jake responded. "Jake, meet at the park at three, 'kay?" "Okay." |---------------------------------------------| Brian was sitting on a bench in the park when Jake walked up slowly, with his hands in the pockets of his Jacket, and sat down. "So, what is this about?" Jake said, in a very clear voice. "Nothing, I just wanna have fun!" Brian said, jumping up out of the bench. "Ok, so what do you want to do first?" Jake said. "AMUSEMENT PARK!!" Brian said,"And I know the place." Jake followed Brian to the Amusement, and which to Jake's amusement, it was Andent's Amusement Park. Andent's was a popular Amusement park. It is open everyday and night unless it rains, snows, hails, tornados, etc. Brian never came back here because of what happened here in 2nd grade. Brian was too short to ride the Super-Cool-duper Ride, and since he was the shortest in his class, the others were tall enough. At school, Brian got teased and bullied all because of that. He vowed never to return here again, until today. As Jake was in his thoughts, Brian went to an unsecured Roller Coaster Control Panel and pressed colorful buttons. That was Brian, Jake thought. As soon as Brian pressed a big red button, a rumbling sound began. Jake started to wish he would've stopped Brian from doing that. Brian thought he did something bad, but it wasn't his fault, and it sure wasn't anyone's. Everyone started to scream as the earth started to crack. |
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| 08 Dec 2013 02:17 PM |
| Needs better spelling and Grammar!!11 |
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Olama5
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| 08 Dec 2013 02:19 PM |
SHUDDUP!! I get tired off your crap azn! |
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Olama5
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| 08 Dec 2013 02:21 PM |
| (That's why you should play along) |
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| 08 Dec 2013 02:25 PM |
You nod more paragraph
to be butter writer!!!1onene |
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| 08 Dec 2013 02:27 PM |
| Why would a giant red button in an amusement park make the Earth crack? Would the ancient Mesopotamian people think that a wormhole to another universe could be hidden in an amusement park? |
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| 08 Dec 2013 02:28 PM |
Because it was hidden centuries ago.
by the mysterious |
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Olama5
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| 08 Dec 2013 02:30 PM |
Ancient people: Where would we hide a giant earth destruction device... Some place that no one would ever PRESS
Ancient idiot: An amusement park? *troll face*
Ancient people: Oh my god... THATS GENIUS. |
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| 08 Dec 2013 02:31 PM |
Yeah the lost civilization
which was the Mayans |
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Olama5
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| 08 Dec 2013 03:15 PM |
>Note: This Fancy Text is better.
>¢нαρтєя 2: ωнαт'ѕ ηєχт?
αѕ ρєσρℓє яαη ѕ¢яєαмιηg, נαкє gяαввє∂ вяιαη'ѕ αям αη∂ ∂яαggє∂ нιм ιηтσ тнє ¢αя. נαкє ѕтαятє∂ тнє єηgιηє αѕ нє нυяяιє∂. тнє єηgιηє ωσυℓ∂η'т ѕтαят ση тнє σℓ∂ ¢αя. тнє ¢яα¢кѕ ¢αмє тσωαя∂ тнє ¢αя. נαкє нυяяιє∂, ωнιℓє вяιαη ѕєємє∂ ℓιкє нє ραѕѕє∂ συт. נαкє ƒιηαℓℓу gσт тнє ¢αя ѕтαятє∂, αη∂ тнєη нє ƒℓσσяє∂ ιт. αт 120мρн, тнє нιgнєѕт тнє ¢αя ¢συℓ∂ gσ, тнє ¢яα¢кѕ ωєяє ѕтιℓℓ ¢σмιηg ιη ƒαѕт. тнє ¢яα¢кѕ тнєη ¢яα¢кє∂ αяσυη∂ тнє ¢αя, ¢αυѕιηg נαкє тσ тαкє α¢тιση, gяαввιηg вяιαη αη∂ ∂яαggιηg нιм. тнєу яєα¢нє∂ тнє є∂gє, αη∂ вєℓσω ωαѕ αвσυт α мιℓℓιση ∂єgяєєѕ σƒ ℓανα. נυѕт αвσυт 5 ƒєєт αнєα∂ ωαѕ тнє σтнєя ѕι∂є. вяιαη яєgαιηє∂ ¢σηтяσℓ, αη∂ ωαѕ яєα∂у тσ נυмρ. "נυмρ," נαкє ѕ¢яєαмє∂, уєℓℓιηg αѕ нє נυмρє∂. нє тнєη ℓαη∂є∂, ωιтн вσтн ƒєєт, ση тнє σтнєя ѕι∂є. вяιαη тσσк α ℓєαρ αη∂ ∂ι∂η'т мαкє ιт. ιηѕтєα∂ вяιαη ωαѕ нσℓ∂ιηg ση ƒσя ∂єαя ℓιƒє. נαкє тнєη gяαввє∂ вяιαη'ѕ нαη∂ αη∂ ωιтн αℓℓ нιѕ ѕтяєηgтн, ρυℓℓє∂ нιм υρ. тнєу ℓαѕтє∂. тнє єαятнqυαкє ѕтσρρє∂, αη∂ тнє ωσяℓ∂ ωαѕ ѕтιℓℓ. |---------------------------------------------| נαкє gσт нσмє ƒιη∂ιηg нιѕ ƒανσяιтє тяєє ѕρℓιт нιѕ нσυѕє. "вяιαη, ¢αη ι ѕℓєєρ αт уσυя ρℓα¢є?" נαкє αѕкє∂. "ѕυяє," вяιαη яєѕρση∂є∂, ѕσυη∂ιηg ѕσ нαρρу. נαкє ωαѕη'т яєαℓℓу ѕυяє ωнαт нє ωαѕ нαρρу αвσυт. нє αℓмσѕт ∂ιє∂ αη∂ тнє ωнσℓє тσωη ωαѕ ηєαяℓу ∂єѕтяσує∂, мαувє єνєη тнє ωσяℓ∂. |---------------------------------------------| נαкє gσт нιѕ ѕтυƒƒ тσ вяιηg ωιтн нιм. ѕυ¢н αѕ нιѕ ℓαρтσρ, тнαт яαη ωιη∂σωѕ 8. ρєσρℓє нαтє∂ ωιη∂σωѕ 8, вυт ησт נαкє. נαкє ℓσνє∂ ωιη∂σωѕ 8. нє ωαѕ ¢σηƒυѕє∂ σƒ ωну ρєσρℓє ∂ση'т ℓιкє тнє ¢нαηgє. вяιαη тнєη ∂яσνє נαкє. ιт'ѕ вєєη α ℓσηg ∂αу. ιт ωαѕ 8:50 ρм, αη∂ ∂αяк συт. "ωє ѕнσυℓ∂ ρяσвαвℓу gєт ѕσмє яєѕт, ιт'ѕ вєєη α ℓσηg ∂αу," נαкє ѕαι∂, ℓαуιηg συт нιѕ вє∂ ση тнє ¢συ¢н. "тяυє, gσσ∂ηιgнт, ℓєт мє кησω ιƒ уσυ ηєє∂ αηутнιηg," вяιαη яєѕρση∂є∂, ωαℓкιηg ιηтσ нιѕ яσσм αη∂ тυяηιηg συт тнє ℓιgнт. נαкє gσт ¢σмƒσятαвℓє, αη∂ тнєη ¢ℓσѕє∂ нιѕ єуєѕ. αѕ ѕσση αѕ нє ∂ι∂, нє нєαя∂ мσαηιηg, αη∂ ιт ѕσυη∂є∂ ℓιкє ιт ¢αмє ƒяσм α¢яσѕѕ тнє ѕтяєєт. נαкє'ѕ мιη∂ ωαѕ мєѕѕιη' ωιтн нιм. нє нєαя∂ α ѕє¢ση∂ мσαη, тнєη α тнιя∂. тнєяє ωαѕ ѕσ мαηу ιт ωαѕ нαя∂ тσ ¢συηт тнє тσтαℓ. נαкє gσт υρ αη∂ ℓσσкє∂ тняσυgн тнє ωιη∂σω. тнєяє ωєяє zσмвιєѕ... |
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| 08 Dec 2013 03:16 PM |
| or some other if there is. |
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Olama5
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| 08 Dec 2013 03:19 PM |
| Congrats, you posted the same time I posted Chapter 2 In Fancy Text. |
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Olama5
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| 08 Dec 2013 03:25 PM |
| Well, if you see something that breaks the rules let me know. I see nothing so I had to use fancy text to post it. I saw nothing wrong. |
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rose6666
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| 08 Dec 2013 03:25 PM |
| ogm u needz bettah spellng and grammr!11!1!1!1!1!!!!1! |
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Olama5
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| 08 Dec 2013 03:26 PM |
| Googlez Chrovme haz shpel chekar 4 meh. |
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rose6666
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| 08 Dec 2013 03:31 PM |
| The word that was blocked was m0aning. |
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Olama5
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| 08 Dec 2013 03:33 PM |
Nothing wrong with that word so why it block |
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Olama5
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| 08 Dec 2013 03:35 PM |
Word = Hospitals Hospitals = Blood Blood = Scared little children |
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| 08 Dec 2013 03:37 PM |
| Surprised that that is not even |
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Olama5
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| 08 Dec 2013 05:08 PM |
>Cʜᴀᴘᴛᴇʀ 2: Wʜᴀᴛ's ɴᴇxᴛ? (SmallCap Text)
As ᴘᴇᴏᴘʟᴇ ʀᴀɴ sᴄʀᴇᴀᴍɪɴɢ, Jᴀᴋᴇ ɢʀᴀʙʙᴇᴅ Bʀɪᴀɴ's ᴀʀᴍ ᴀɴᴅ ᴅʀᴀɢɢᴇᴅ ʜɪᴍ ɪɴᴛᴏ ᴛʜᴇ ᴄᴀʀ. Jᴀᴋᴇ sᴛᴀʀᴛᴇᴅ ᴛʜᴇ ᴇɴɢɪɴᴇ ᴀs ʜᴇ ʜᴜʀʀɪᴇᴅ. Tʜᴇ ᴇɴɢɪɴᴇ ᴡᴏᴜʟᴅɴ'ᴛ sᴛᴀʀᴛ ᴏɴ ᴛʜᴇ ᴏʟᴅ ᴄᴀʀ. Tʜᴇ ᴄʀᴀᴄᴋs ᴄᴀᴍᴇ ᴛᴏᴡᴀʀᴅ ᴛʜᴇ ᴄᴀʀ. Jᴀᴋᴇ ʜᴜʀʀɪᴇᴅ, ᴡʜɪʟᴇ Bʀɪᴀɴ sᴇᴇᴍᴇᴅ ʟɪᴋᴇ ʜᴇ ᴘᴀssᴇᴅ ᴏᴜᴛ. Jᴀᴋᴇ ғɪɴᴀʟʟʏ ɢᴏᴛ ᴛʜᴇ ᴄᴀʀ sᴛᴀʀᴛᴇᴅ, ᴀɴᴅ ᴛʜᴇɴ ʜᴇ ғʟᴏᴏʀᴇᴅ ɪᴛ. Aᴛ 120MPH, ᴛʜᴇ ʜɪɢʜᴇsᴛ ᴛʜᴇ ᴄᴀʀ ᴄᴏᴜʟᴅ ɢᴏ, ᴛʜᴇ ᴄʀᴀᴄᴋs ᴡᴇʀᴇ sᴛɪʟʟ ᴄᴏᴍɪɴɢ ɪɴ ғᴀsᴛ. Tʜᴇ ᴄʀᴀᴄᴋs ᴛʜᴇɴ ᴄʀᴀᴄᴋᴇᴅ ᴀʀᴏᴜɴᴅ ᴛʜᴇ ᴄᴀʀ, ᴄᴀᴜsɪɴɢ Jᴀᴋᴇ ᴛᴏ ᴛᴀᴋᴇ ᴀᴄᴛɪᴏɴ, ɢʀᴀʙʙɪɴɢ Bʀɪᴀɴ ᴀɴᴅ ᴅʀᴀɢɢɪɴɢ ʜɪᴍ. Tʜᴇʏ ʀᴇᴀᴄʜᴇᴅ ᴛʜᴇ ᴇᴅɢᴇ, ᴀɴᴅ ʙᴇʟᴏᴡ ᴡᴀs ᴀʙᴏᴜᴛ ᴀ ᴍɪʟʟɪᴏɴ ᴅᴇɢʀᴇᴇs ᴏғ ʟᴀᴠᴀ. Jᴜsᴛ ᴀʙᴏᴜᴛ 5 ғᴇᴇᴛ ᴀʜᴇᴀᴅ ᴡᴀs ᴛʜᴇ ᴏᴛʜᴇʀ sɪᴅᴇ. Bʀɪᴀɴ ʀᴇɢᴀɪɴᴇᴅ ᴄᴏɴᴛʀᴏʟ, ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴀs ʀᴇᴀᴅʏ ᴛᴏ ᴊᴜᴍᴘ. "JUMP," Jᴀᴋᴇ sᴄʀᴇᴀᴍᴇᴅ, ʏᴇʟʟɪɴɢ ᴀs ʜᴇ ᴊᴜᴍᴘᴇᴅ. Hᴇ ᴛʜᴇɴ ʟᴀɴᴅᴇᴅ, ᴡɪᴛʜ ʙᴏᴛʜ ғᴇᴇᴛ, ᴏɴ ᴛʜᴇ ᴏᴛʜᴇʀ sɪᴅᴇ. Bʀɪᴀɴ ᴛᴏᴏᴋ ᴀ ʟᴇᴀᴘ ᴀɴᴅ ᴅɪᴅɴ'ᴛ ᴍᴀᴋᴇ ɪᴛ. Iɴsᴛᴇᴀᴅ Bʀɪᴀɴ ᴡᴀs ʜᴏʟᴅɪɴɢ ᴏɴ ғᴏʀ ᴅᴇᴀʀ ʟɪғᴇ. Jᴀᴋᴇ ᴛʜᴇɴ ɢʀᴀʙʙᴇᴅ Bʀɪᴀɴ's ʜᴀɴᴅ ᴀɴᴅ ᴡɪᴛʜ ᴀʟʟ ʜɪs sᴛʀᴇɴɢᴛʜ, ᴘᴜʟʟᴇᴅ ʜɪᴍ ᴜᴘ. Tʜᴇʏ ʟᴀsᴛᴇᴅ. Tʜᴇ ᴇᴀʀᴛʜǫᴜᴀᴋᴇ sᴛᴏᴘᴘᴇᴅ, ᴀɴᴅ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴏʀʟᴅ ᴡᴀs sᴛɪʟʟ. |---------------------------------------------| Jᴀᴋᴇ ɢᴏᴛ ʜᴏᴍᴇ ғɪɴᴅɪɴɢ ʜɪs ғᴀᴠᴏʀɪᴛᴇ ᴛʀᴇᴇ sᴘʟɪᴛ ʜɪs ʜᴏᴜsᴇ. "Bʀɪᴀɴ, ᴄᴀɴ I sʟᴇᴇᴘ ᴀᴛ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴘʟᴀᴄᴇ?" Jᴀᴋᴇ ᴀsᴋᴇᴅ. "Sᴜʀᴇ," Bʀɪᴀɴ ʀᴇsᴘᴏɴᴅᴇᴅ, sᴏᴜɴᴅɪɴɢ sᴏ ʜᴀᴘᴘʏ. Jᴀᴋᴇ ᴡᴀsɴ'ᴛ ʀᴇᴀʟʟʏ sᴜʀᴇ ᴡʜᴀᴛ ʜᴇ ᴡᴀs ʜᴀᴘᴘʏ ᴀʙᴏᴜᴛ. Hᴇ ᴀʟᴍᴏsᴛ ᴅɪᴇᴅ ᴀɴᴅ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʜᴏʟᴇ ᴛᴏᴡɴ ᴡᴀs ɴᴇᴀʀʟʏ ᴅᴇsᴛʀᴏʏᴇᴅ, Mᴀʏʙᴇ ᴇᴠᴇɴ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴏʀʟᴅ. |---------------------------------------------| Jᴀᴋᴇ ɢᴏᴛ ʜɪs sᴛᴜғғ ᴛᴏ ʙʀɪɴɢ ᴡɪᴛʜ ʜɪᴍ. Sᴜᴄʜ ᴀs ʜɪs Lᴀᴘᴛᴏᴘ, ᴛʜᴀᴛ ʀᴀɴ Wɪɴᴅᴏᴡs 8. Pᴇᴏᴘʟᴇ ʜᴀᴛᴇᴅ Wɪɴᴅᴏᴡs 8, ʙᴜᴛ ɴᴏᴛ Jᴀᴋᴇ. Jᴀᴋᴇ ʟᴏᴠᴇᴅ WIɴᴅᴏᴡs 8. Hᴇ ᴡᴀs ᴄᴏɴғᴜsᴇᴅ ᴏғ ᴡʜʏ ᴘᴇᴏᴘʟᴇ ᴅᴏɴ'ᴛ ʟɪᴋᴇ ᴛʜᴇ ᴄʜᴀɴɢᴇ. Bʀɪᴀɴ ᴛʜᴇɴ ᴅʀᴏᴠᴇ Jᴀᴋᴇ. Iᴛ's ʙᴇᴇɴ ᴀ ʟᴏɴɢ ᴅᴀʏ. Iᴛ ᴡᴀs 8:50 PM, ᴀɴᴅ ᴅᴀʀᴋ ᴏᴜᴛ. "Wᴇ sʜᴏᴜʟᴅ ᴘʀᴏʙᴀʙʟʏ ɢᴇᴛ sᴏᴍᴇ ʀᴇsᴛ, ɪᴛ's ʙᴇᴇɴ ᴀ ʟᴏɴɢ ᴅᴀʏ," Jᴀᴋᴇ sᴀɪᴅ, ʟᴀʏɪɴɢ ᴏᴜᴛ ʜɪs ʙᴇᴅ ᴏɴ ᴛʜᴇ ᴄᴏᴜᴄʜ. "Tʀᴜᴇ, ɢᴏᴏᴅɴɪɢʜᴛ, ʟᴇᴛ ᴍᴇ ᴋɴᴏᴡ ɪғ ʏᴏᴜ ɴᴇᴇᴅ ᴀɴʏᴛʜɪɴɢ," Bʀɪᴀɴ ʀᴇsᴘᴏɴᴅᴇᴅ, ᴡᴀʟᴋɪɴɢ ɪɴᴛᴏ ʜɪs ʀᴏᴏᴍ ᴀɴᴅ ᴛᴜʀɴɪɴɢ ᴏᴜᴛ ᴛʜᴇ ʟɪɢʜᴛ. Jᴀᴋᴇ ɢᴏᴛ ᴄᴏᴍғᴏʀᴛᴀʙʟᴇ, ᴀɴᴅ ᴛʜᴇɴ ᴄʟᴏsᴇᴅ ʜɪs ᴇʏᴇs. As sᴏᴏɴ ᴀs ʜᴇ ᴅɪᴅ, ʜᴇ ʜᴇᴀʀᴅ ᴍᴏᴀɴɪɴɢ, ᴀɴᴅ ɪᴛ sᴏᴜɴᴅᴇᴅ ʟɪᴋᴇ ɪᴛ ᴄᴀᴍᴇ ғʀᴏᴍ ᴀᴄʀᴏss ᴛʜᴇ sᴛʀᴇᴇᴛ. Jᴀᴋᴇ's ᴍɪɴᴅ ᴡᴀs ᴍᴇssɪɴ' ᴡɪᴛʜ ʜɪᴍ. Hᴇ ʜᴇᴀʀᴅ ᴀ sᴇᴄᴏɴᴅ ᴍᴏᴀɴ, ᴛʜᴇɴ ᴀ ᴛʜɪʀᴅ. Tʜᴇʀᴇ ᴡᴀs sᴏ ᴍᴀɴʏ ɪᴛ ᴡᴀs ʜᴀʀᴅ ᴛᴏ ᴄᴏᴜɴᴛ ᴛʜᴇ ᴛᴏᴛᴀʟ. Jᴀᴋᴇ ɢᴏᴛ ᴜᴘ ᴀɴᴅ ʟᴏᴏᴋᴇᴅ ᴛʜʀᴏᴜɢʜ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡɪɴᴅᴏᴡ. Tʜᴇʀᴇ ᴡᴇʀᴇ Zᴏᴍʙɪᴇs... |
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