Olama5
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| 07 Dec 2013 06:34 PM |
>Story Information: You wondered different things as you thought about the end of the world, but what you don't know, it that the End of the world it's just the end.
A quick thought up story by Olama5.
>Chapter 1: Perfect Day
The sun started to rise as it was morning. The sun shined through the window of Brian's Window.
"Good Morning, World", Brain said as he woke up and stretched. It was a summer morning. Birds chirping, Worms worming, and the bugs buzzing through the air. He thought it was the perfect day. |---------------------------------------------| Brain got up and out of bed. He got dressed and called his friend, Jake. Jake was a good friend of Brain. They met only in Kindergarten. Jake was a bit bossy at some times, but they always make up after those kinds of fights. Brain waited for Jake to answer. As soon as Jake answered, Brain started to talk. "What's up Jake?", Brain said. "Nothing much, just laying here bored", Jake responded. "Jake, meet at the park in three, k?" "Okay." |---------------------------------------------| Brain was sitting on a bench in the park when Jake walked up slowly, with his hands in his Jacket, and sat down. "So, what is this about?", Jake said, in a very clear voice. "Nothing, I just wanna have fun!", Brain said, jumping up out of the bench. "Ok, so what do you want to do first?", Jake said. "AMUSEMENT PARK!!", Brain said,"And I know the place." Jake followed Brain to the Amusement, and which to Jake's amusement, it was Andent's Amusement Park. Andent's was a popular Amusement park. It is open everyday and night unless it rains, snows, hails, tornados, etc. Brain never came here because of what happened here in 2nd grade. Brain was too short to ride the Super-Cool-duper Ride, and since he was the shortest in his class, the others were tall enough. At school, Brain got teased and bullied. He vowed never to return here again, until today. As Jake was in his thoughts, Brain went to an unsecured Roller Coaster Control Panel and pressed colorful buttons. That was Brain, Jake thought. As soon as Brain pressed a big red button, a rumbling sound began. Brain thought he did something bad, but it wasn't his fault. It wasn't anyone's. Everyone started to scream as the earth started to crack. |
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| 07 Dec 2013 06:35 PM |
Brain went to an unsecured Roller Coaster Control Panel and pressed colorful buttons. .... but it wasn't his fault. It wasn't anyone's. Everyone started to scream as the earth started to crack.
Nope. That's clearly Brains fault. He pressed the colourful button. |
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SUNSHlNE
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| 07 Dec 2013 06:37 PM |
inb4 common sense
Too late. Common sense is too fast for you. |
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| 07 Dec 2013 06:38 PM |
There was some writing errors that could be fixed.
Such as: "The sun shined through the window of Brian's window"
Should be: "The sun shined through the window of Brian's house, into his bedroom." or something like that. |
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Olama5
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| 07 Dec 2013 06:39 PM |
| CRAPPPP!!! I KNEW I FORGOT SOMETHING!!! ABANDON ALL HOPE!!! |
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| 07 Dec 2013 06:40 PM |
The sun shined through the window of Brian's window
Gasp! A windowed window!
Must resit urge to... Must res...
Hey dawg. I heard you like windows so we got a window to go in your window so you can window while you window. |
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Olama5
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| 07 Dec 2013 06:42 PM |
| I am trying to create a story with no no spelling errors in 1 whole thread. I failing. 1 more time. And last new thread. Ignore this and go to the real one. Just make random threads about mtvb and cover this up. |
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| 07 Dec 2013 06:44 PM |
I am trying to create a story with no no spelling errors in 1 whole thread.
That's easy. Here I'll make one right now. |
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| 08 Dec 2013 02:36 AM |
| I are honestly think it a good story. |
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