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orangerichard56 is not online. orangerichard56
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07 Dec 2013 03:14 PM
Hey guys i spent some time on this hope you enjoy



Crash of the Alaska

A Prequel to the asylum of the daleks


Doctor: Tenth Doctor


Featuring: Oswin (clara) Oswald


Enemies: The Daleks and the Vashta Nerada

Oswin was nervous. She had never been on the alaska, this would be her first time out.

Oswin was no ordinary girl she was one of the other lives led by clara oswald when she entered the timestream of the doctor.


Claras actions were a paradox since the doctor met oswin first before the real clara, the other lives of clara he'd met first caused him to meet the original clara.




However Oswin had no memory of her previous life at all.


"come on oswin" said Harvey "We're gonna be late".



"I'm just coming" said oswin.

Oswin was holding a leaf a leaf she had been found with at birth which the parents of the original clara had been brought together by.


However oswin had no memory of this the leaf she has was one of many echoes of the original.


"Its time to go" said harvey.


Oswin boarded the ship and stepped into her office. She was the junior entertainment manager meaning she was the Trainee in charge of entertertainment.



They stopped for a while at the Library which was a planet of books eternal books.


She saw a man who was known as the doctor (The tenth doctor) She had no idea who he was.


Then The lights started going out it meant that the vashta nerada were coming.



The ship left and was set on course to Barclona (The planet)



There was a Shake the whole ship shook.


They were heading to a planet with a forcefield which would mean as soon as the planet touched the forcefield it would blow.


The ship plummetted the executives had no choice other than to lower the forcefield by force.




Oswin woke up it turned out her crew were acting strange.


Then oswin realised that this was the asylum of the daleks.

Harvey was dying of the crash he had so bad injuiries and he fell to the ground.

Then the eyestalk had come out of his head he had been turned into a dalek puppet which could activate themselves as sleeper agents.

Harveys memories reavtivated.


"Clara where am i" said Harvey "Who's Clara" Said oswin.

"Who I don't know but i think you The immpossible girl" Said harvey


"what do you mean" said oswin


"You are part of a puzzle" said harvey "You are just one life of one impossible girl your just a echo right now the impossible girl is you she has many lives none of them remember."


"GET AWAY FROM ME" said oswin


"I AM ME I AM NOT SOMEONE ELSES LIFE IM ME ME ME ME"


"The Leaf" said harvey


"I was born with it" said oswin

"it is the thing that brought her parents together every one of you is born with it" said harvey

"GO AWAY I KNOW YOU DONT KNOW IT BUT YOU ARE DEAD YOU ARE A DALEK IT LIKE YOU HAVE ONE INSIDE YOU WAITING TO POP OUT OF YOUR HEAD you wont remember your soul can be reactivated if they want you in a trap" said oswin.



The eyestalk comes out of harveys head.


Oswin runs she feels she is becoming one of them she sees hallucinations.



****

Oswin wakes up.


"where am i" she says.

"You will become one of us" said the dalek.


Oswin undergoes dalek transformation.


"I AM HUMAN I AM NOT A DALEK I AM HUMAN" said oswin

Oswin's body turns into that of the organic parts of a dalek.


Oswin couldnt live like this so she locks herself away in a dream.


The Dream:

Day 1: "made more souffles"


Read the news paper.


Headline: Silence WILL FALL.
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aznguyitran is not online. aznguyitran
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07 Dec 2013 03:15 PM
There is a lot of spaces which is bad
but for me it is easier to read

so good job 10/10
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orangerichard56 is not online. orangerichard56
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07 Dec 2013 03:18 PM
Aww thanks


What do you want me to do next?
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aznguyitran is not online. aznguyitran
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07 Dec 2013 03:19 PM
do whatever bro
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orangerichard56 is not online. orangerichard56
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07 Dec 2013 03:24 PM
Just give me a idea i could give you:

How i helped the man find the blue box.


How i randomly nearly tripped him up in a park (Srsly she did do this )


How i Warned him about something in his wingmirror





The claras do you know what they did

Not only helping him they overwrote the echoes of the GI so most of the echoes did nothing just overwrite the GI.


Ik the second one is a stupid joke but i could add many elements to the story to make it better
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orangerichard56 is not online. orangerichard56
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07 Dec 2013 03:25 PM
I wanna do a story called


umm idk
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aznguyitran is not online. aznguyitran
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07 Dec 2013 03:26 PM
You helped by walking past one earlier.

and telling where it was.
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orangerichard56 is not online. orangerichard56
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07 Dec 2013 03:27 PM
ok you mean the one on gallifrey behind the 4th doctor

idk enough about that episode but


I suppose i could put something together in a different setting
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07 Dec 2013 03:32 PM
Ok


Sarah JANE SMITH!




Sarah Jane: Hmm i have found strange readings at this place.



Sky: What are they

Sarah Jane: I dont know as if someone is prodjecting themselves throughout time like they live other lives in the nexus of someone else.

The source is from a planet known as trenzalore



Sky: Whats that

Sarah: no idea at all.


Sarah: its from this care home.


Old Clara: who are you


Sarah jane: Hello My name is Sarah Jane smith i am here to investergate strange things going on here.


Old clara: What exactly.


Sarah: readings as if time winds tour someone into a million pieces.


Old Clara: My Heart


Sarah: are you ok

Old Clara: I need a doctor.


The doctor: You mean me....

Normal Clara: HELLO ME


Opening credits role
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07 Dec 2013 03:35 PM
*Cries at corniness*
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orangerichard56 is not online. orangerichard56
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07 Dec 2013 03:38 PM
The Doctor: Sarah Jane Smith long time no see.


Clara: Theres nothing we can do i remember nothing at all she is dead.


Sarah Jane: i know you from somewhere before. I remember the doctor tripped up once and you put him back to normal there was killer insects all over the floor ready to infect the cut.


Clara: Brief memory of that really, Its complicated



I HAD A IDEA im stoppping there


THE ULTIMATE COMPANION CATFIGHT.


THERE ALL ARGUEING OVER HIM AND THEY THINK THERE SPECIAL

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07 Dec 2013 03:44 PM
Martha Jones: I am here to treat a patient she is dying of a heart attack.

Donna noble: I REMEMBER NO HELLLLLLPPPPP ME


Sarah: give her this it will sustain her memories for a while.


Rose: where am i

Clara: They Look Familiar

Amy and rory: thats oswin oswald the junior entertainment manager of starship alaska.


SHE NEARLY STOLE YOU FROM ME SHE DID.


Clara: Well i sorta did but that wasnt rlly me sorta.

AMY: HOW DARE YOU YOU STUPID IDIOT.


Rose: now you calm down


amy: SHUT UP YOU STUPID CHAV.


ROSE: STOP IT.

Martha: we all need to calm down guys.

Martha: oh no its you he kept talking about you he wouldnt stop.


ROSE: SHUT UP.



RIVER: DOCTOR HOW DARE YOU REPLACE ME WITH HER but i cant fight ima ghost.



They all have a big fight

Sarah jane: Well as we said the youngsters always fight over him us older ones are more mature.


Susan: Yes it is.


TO BE CONTINUIED
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orangerichard56 is not online. orangerichard56
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07 Dec 2013 03:48 PM
omg so sorry i forgot the firey donna


DONNA NOBLE: THATS IT SUNSHINE I HAD ENOUGH OF YOU I AM NOT JUST A TEMP FROM CHISWICK AND YOU ARE JUST A STUPID GIRL WHO HASNT GOT A BIT LEFT IN YOU.


Jo Grant and the rest of the classic companions have tea with the doctor and then Professor Mcgonagall comes in at random (I saw the downton abbey trailer on tv ok im adding random stuff in)


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SUNSHlNE is not online. SUNSHlNE
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07 Dec 2013 03:50 PM
"THATS IT SUNSHINE I HAD ENOUGH OF YOU I AM NOT JUST A TEMP FROM CHISWICK AND YOU ARE JUST A STUPID GIRL WHO HASNT GOT A BIT LEFT IN YOU."

But I didn't do anything :(
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orangerichard56 is not online. orangerichard56
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07 Dec 2013 03:53 PM
This is becoming so random now


Colin Baker: Im gonna do a impression of mickey mouse at random.


John Hurt: im just randomly turning into a dragon for my role in Merlin.


Back to the fight


Rose: SHUT UP MARTHA.

AMY: GO AWAY CLARA.

Donna: OK THATS IT I WANT YOU ALL TO SHUT UP NOW CUZ I AM GONNA FORGET ALLL THIS AND I DONT WANNA STOP IN MID SENT....


Donna: Hello Where am i


Donna: i remember no im gonna die

*she dies the end
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aznguyitran is not online. aznguyitran
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07 Dec 2013 03:54 PM
The ending was sad and creative.

yes
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orangerichard56 is not online. orangerichard56
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07 Dec 2013 03:55 PM
Orange: Donna wasnt meant to be talking to you she was talking to clara or someone else but since you insulted my story she is going to rip you apart.


Sunshine: stupid temp


DONNa: SHUT UP AND GO AWAY SUNSHINE OR I AM GOING TO KILL YOU


Sunshine; im sorry Cries cries


Winnie the Pooh: Well hello elonia so nice to see you,

Elonia SITTIN ON THAT TOILET


CLara: SITTIN ON THA TOILET.


NOW FLUSH


end of episode
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07 Dec 2013 03:56 PM
why am i in the fanfic omg :C
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orangerichard56 is not online. orangerichard56
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07 Dec 2013 04:04 PM
now we're going rlly random


Mickey Mouse; CAN I SIT ON THE TOILET


SIT ON THE TOILET


SIT ON THAAAA TOILEETTTTTTTTTTTt



clara: of course


Clara finds the door to the toilet is blocked by poooppppp
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zepher32 is not online. zepher32
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07 Dec 2013 04:14 PM
'Lil Doctor Who fanfiction fact:

David Tennant got in trouble a lot
during school because he'd always
write Doctor Who fanfics for his essays.
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orangerichard56 is not online. orangerichard56
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08 Dec 2013 02:51 AM
Oh Really but you see this isn't school is it i can write what i want
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aznguyitran is not online. aznguyitran
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08 Dec 2013 03:14 AM
type whatever want to yes
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orangerichard56 is not online. orangerichard56
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08 Dec 2013 03:18 AM
The Lights are going out



Felman Lux: Don't Worry My Dear you'll be ok

(He wires her up to a data core)


CAL: So i need to save everyone to the core.

Felman: ok



JUST BEING RANDOM
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08 Dec 2013 03:22 AM
i random most the times
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