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| 04 Dec 2013 11:23 PM |
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=119533977
Should I PP this? |
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LNG257
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| 05 Dec 2013 12:20 AM |
| Meh. It's good, but I feel like it might be missing something. No idea what though. |
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| 05 Dec 2013 12:25 AM |
Missing plot and backstory. That's for sure. I'd say I'm proud with the groups and locations and all. I'll need help with more depth in the backstory.
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