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briar182
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| 01 Dec 2013 01:22 PM |
"A sunny day. A rainy day. A stormy day. A snowy day. It doesn't matter. One minute I am there, one minute I am not. One minute I am human, the next minute, I am not. I am --- something else, something besides myself. I am fiery hot, and ice cold. I am a speck of dust, and I am a mountain. I am an angel in heaven, and I am a demon of the deepest underworld."
His son runs in, hearing a scream, thinking his father has been murdered. It turned out that there was nobody there, just an empty chair next to a desk. There's a hole in the wall, leading out into the night. The chair is still in its normal place, so nobody could have grabbed the father and ran out in those few seconds. Where could he have possibly went?
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[Phone call] "Hi, I'm walking down a street, it's storming here.. Whoa, two strikes of lightning landed in the same area, at the same time. I'm confused, I'm going to look at what happened.. I found something, a hole.. Something is coming out out, it looks like a.. No, it ca- " "[signal lost]"
"..Dude, are you there...? I heard some impact, it sounded like you got punched.. Dang it, the signal is lost.."
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[Texting session] Person 1: Oh my god oh my god OH MY DEAR GOD Reese: What's going on? Person 1: There's a BLOODY GREAT crater right in my backyard! I think it was from last night, but how the heck did I not hear this happening?!?! Holy ****, it could have killed me! Person 1: [A picture of a crater in what seems to be the person's backyard.] Person 1: My mother! My mother is gone, I can't find her! Where did she go?!? Reese: Rachel are you freaken stupid, go call 911 or something Rachel: No she's GONE I swear it's like my father forgot her completely Rachel: He's all like "Who's this person" and I'm like "WTF!?!? U KNOW MOM!!!" Rachel: What should I do? What should I do????? wnaskdfajsfjasfsafdsaf Reese: I ALREADY TOLD YOU THIS. Rachel: Maybe she was murdered or something, I heard some horrendous screaming Reese: JUST GET YOUR FREAKEN CELLPHONE ALREADY Rachel: But it wasn't like normal horrendous screaming, more like one of those cheesy alien movie screeching or something Reese: wat Rachel: I think I'm going crazy, so I should probably hang myself, idk [The texting session ends]
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Most people think this world is normal, that nothing magical could possibly exist in the universe. The science proves it.. However, there are secrets not even the world governments know. Not even the most powerful man in the world knows. Some things that shouldn't of been revealed.
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"To find the countless emblems- One must look where no man dares look. To find the one who snatches- One must search where no man dares search."
Crest of Flame: Allows easy control of the element of fire, possibly other heat elements if mastered. One of the four elemental crests.
Crest of Water: Allows easy control of the element of water, could lead into boiling, freezing, and changing liquids into other substances. One of the four elemental crests.
Crest of Air: Allows easy control of the element of air, when mastered able to change the air pressure in the area. One of the four element crests.
Crest of Earth: Allows easy control of the element of earth, could lead into creating different solid substances. Also gives some degree of strength. One of the four elemental crests.
Crest of Time: Allows various powers that revolve around time to be used. When used effectively, can be very powerful, yet risky.
Crest of Heaven: A very powerful crest that contains the power of angels. Humans are known to pray to the creatures made from it. It Is known to be able to merge with other crests outside of the Demon Crest to make what was thought to be the Infinity Crest, this was disproved later in history.
Demon Crest: Not much is known about this crest, but is known to be the most powerful crest by itself. It is said to be hid due to it's separation from the other crests, but nobody knows if this is still true today.
Infinity Crest: This crest is said to be made when the Demon Crest is merged with the rest of the crests. It is said to give you the power of a god, but cause various levels of insanity and other harm to yourself. Of course, due to the fact that the Infinity Crest has never been made, it is still a theory. ------------------------------
Rules: -No godmodding/perfect characters (average RP rules)
-You aren't starting off as a 'DEEMOON SLAYYER YEAAAH AWEESOMMEEEEE.', and you certainly aren't going to get there in awhile. Your character should start off weak, and one demon could be a major problem.
-You can not start with any of the crests, or get them early on. They are hard to obtain, and the characters, for one, would not know about them, and two, be too weak to even try to obtain them from their current owner.
-Only up to four characters (you don't need 50 of them doing nothing, around four is okay if your skilled enough.)
-Whatever the admins say, goes. (because they are the admins)
-"It's not on the rules!" is not an excuse. (same as above.)
-13+ characters (We don't need 6 year olds in this situation, especially 6 year olds blasting millions of people into bits.)
-No insanely long names in CS (Don't need people with very long names that take forever to type here, and average names in RPs are first and second. We aren't purely fantasy roleplaying, thus we do not want "Greg Margantininaitniatn Gregifeier C'tantantantantan'Zoopdahoopeee The extreme awesome cool incredible awesome extreme awesome cool incredible dragon slayer of awesome extreme powers, who once slayed that really big dragon who was terrorising the land, but killed that dragon, so is really really cool and stuff yayayayayay")
-Ignore trolls (Because we don't want flame wars cluttered with RPing)
-No romance, this is action/horror/fantasy. No time to make love when there are demons ripping out your spine. If you really, really need romance, keep it to just hugs and stuff. Again, why would you be making love when there are demons ripping out your spine.
-Use the best possible grammar you can (We don't want to try and figure out what you're saying)
Admins:
briar182 (Made base of the RP) legomario365 (Wrote a major amount of story) LNG257 (Made a lot, edited most things, and fixed a lot of spelling errors) 1perrytheplatypus (Helped with the thread, didn't randomly stop posting..)
-Character Sheet-
Name:
Gender:
Age:
Physical appearance (Not clothing, unless your clothing is a part of your body..which is odd.):
Clothing:
Bio (Make it detailed, please. We can't tell where you come from if you write "ate cat when young"):
Home Country (Don't be all from America.):
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briar182
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| 01 Dec 2013 01:32 PM |
| (I know that there is notable formating issues. Sorry! :o) |
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TrayBerry
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| 01 Dec 2013 02:11 PM |
| ( Wait, I'm a bit foggy. Can you give me a bit of a synopsis on what this is about X3 ) |
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| 01 Dec 2013 02:13 PM |
((This seems fun!))
Name: Avery Jones
Gender: Female
Age: 27
Physical appearance (Not clothing, unless your clothing is a part of your body..which is odd.): Avery is 6'2" and weighs around 190 lbs of muscle. She has rather bulky shoulders and a more defined adams apple, she often gets mistaken for a man but she really doesn't care. Her hair is black and cropped very short. Her eyes are a very dark brown that look black. She has scars lining her body from her younger days, but the most noticeable one is the one on her cheek, a rather nasty one from a knife slash. She has various tattoos lining her arms, chest and back. She's rather mean looking. Her skin color is tanned as most Argentinians are.
Clothing: Her most basic layers are her red jeans, a light gray shirt with words that read 'Despite the look on my face you're still talking' in dark black print and some worn out sneakers with faded blues and reds. Over her shirt she usually wears a dark purple hoodie with an emblem on the front that looks vaguely like a W. The only piercing she has are on her ears, two on the left and three on the right.
Bio (Make it detailed, please. We can't tell where you come from if you write "ate cat when young"): Avery grew up in Argentina and she loved, still does actually, her home country. But her parents got into some trouble with the cartel, it wasn't really hard to do that, but they had enough money to immigrate to the United States when she was 10. In America, she always picked fights and because of her stature she was able to win most of her fights. She took up boxing when she was 16 despite people telling her a girl couldn't do it and began winning competitions. But, she made some unsavory friends and began picking fights, she got caught up in gang violence which is where all of her scars come from. At 23 she decided she should get her life back on track and has been clean from her old life for 4 years now. She doesn't trust easy and is brutally honest, if she doesn't like you, you'll know it.
Home Country (Don't be all from America.): Argentina
Other: She is an only child. |
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briar182
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| 01 Dec 2013 02:38 PM |
(@Tray People are being sucked into the demon realm for unknown reasons, and it is your job to survive and find the reason of all of this before you all become demons yourselves.
@Sweeter Accepted. I'll make my (rather crappy) CS later. Also, sorry for being a bit rude. :c) |
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| 01 Dec 2013 03:46 PM |
-Character Sheet-
Name: Janice Gise
Gender: Female.
Age: 23
Physical appearance (Not clothing, unless your clothing is a part of your body..which is odd.): http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/325/c/9/russian_girl_anime_by_ustinya_alekseev-d5lqqyu.jpg , except that the short hair is brown, (don't understand why anime girls have gray hair..)Under the really thick coat, Janice is a very thin and frail looking girl, due to past malnourishment. She is only 5'3. Due to how pathetically weak she looks, Janice is regularly bullied in school.
Clothing: Janice usually wears around a gray, hooded sweatshirt around as average clothes, along with gray, boring sweatpants. Underneath her sweatshirt, she normally wears a comfortable, red t-shirt with rainbow words saying "READ." Of course, she sometimes wears different clothes.
Bio (Make it detailed, please. We can't tell where you come from if you write "ate cat when young"): Janice grew up a sad life on the streets in Russia, having to live in poverty with no money. Janice and her families almost had to go to drastic measures to get money, until one day. Janice had to go out to get the daily piece of bread, and when she returned, her parents were gone. At this time, Janice was only 12, so she was sent off to an orphanage center. Nobody wanted her in Russia, and eventually, due to the orphanage becoming abandoned, with the town becoming bankrupt, she was shipped to America, where she went to an orphanage there. Now, she was 15, and was getting education by strict, private volunteer teachers, constantly snapping at Janice for the smallest of errors. Janice eventually learned never to talk to not get scolded, and it seemed to work out. Her grades were exceptional, however, due to a combination of a naturally smart brain, and the private teachers. Eventually, she was adopted by Jimmy and Ingrid Blasmith, the story getting even worse from here. It appears that these two weren't actually ready to have a child, let alone a teenager, so they treated her basically like a rebellious, dirty teenager, and gave her a large closet to sleep, read, and work in. In school, she is constantly bullied by fellow students. The only upside in this period of time, is that for her 16th birthday, she got a decent tower-computer to do her homework, as Jimmy and Ingrid were tired of her borrowing their computer. With the computer to help education/minor social life, and the teachers being her only real friends, Janice is now very antisocial, with her tendency to talk very little not helping at all.
Home Country (Don't be all from America.): Russia, traveled to America.
Other: Janice has a brother, though I didn't include him in this CS for two reasons:
1. I typed the bio, before forgetting I wanted her to have brother, and I really don't want to work him in..
2: It's Janice's CS, not the brother's.
(The next CS will be typed soon, unless briar doesn't want Janice having a brother for some strange reason.) |
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| 01 Dec 2013 03:50 PM |
| ((@briar182, pfft, don't worry about it, you're not rude at all!)) |
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briar182
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| 01 Dec 2013 04:04 PM |
(@Candy :/ Okay. @Perry Janice can have a brother. I don't mind. @All I'm writing my 3 CSs right now, give me a bit. >.<) |
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| 01 Dec 2013 04:26 PM |
-Character Sheet-
Name: Artur Gise.
Gender: Male.
Age: 26
Physical appearance (Not clothing, unless your clothing is a part of your body..which is odd.): https://encrypted-tbn3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRWQH7HMqdGjKxhUOf9i0082shkZLtEH2Ppfeuse00ePE6aGp23 (That is only for the face. Google has disappointing me.) Artur is a strong, young man, with broad shoulders. He has thick arms, though not extremely thick like those athletes, just natural from a life of hard work. Various scars cover his body, most work accidents, though one from a bar fight. Most of his body-mass is muscle, and he ate most of the family diet, so no malnourishment for him. Artur has sad eyes of an old man except younger.
Clothing: Like his sister, Janice, he wears around sweatshirts all of the time. In particular, he wears a black, large and hooded sweatshirt. Under it, he wears a white undershirt, all aimed for comfortable purposes. For pants, he wears simple, blue sweatpants. Like his sister, he wears only basic clothing.
Bio (Make it detailed, please. We can't tell where you come from if you write "ate cat when young"): Artur was the Gise family favorite, and thus got the most food when he was younger. This meant that he didn't have as much as a food problem on the streets. In order to get money, he had to work his entire life in places such as coal mines and construction, giving Artur various lung medical conditions. Due to this, he doesn't talk a lot, along with his sister, in order to save precious oxygen for his body. In order to connect with Janice's disappearing family story, he was simply working when their parents disappeared. At the end of the work day, when he came home, he saw Janice crying where their family usually stayed. He was sent off to the orphanage. Basically, the same exact thing as Janice, but instead of concentrating on education, he has dedicated his entire life to helping his sister. In Ingrid and Jimmy's house, he sleeps in a even smaller closet. School-wise, he is always seen around Janice, and keeps most of the bullies away from her, though he can't protect her all of the time. Artur usually gets C-Bs in school.
Home Country (Don't be all from America.): Russia.
Other: He is Janice's brother. Did you know that? |
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briar182
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| 01 Dec 2013 04:47 PM |
(When I finish my CSes. Planned time is around 7:00 because of laziness)) |
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| 01 Dec 2013 04:59 PM |
(Going to post the first two right now. I'll put the next one in the next post I make.)
Name: Rachel Wilson
Gender: Female
Age: 13 years old
Physical appearance (Not clothing, unless your clothing is a part of your body..which is odd.): http://www.roblox.com/some-girl-that-has-a-bow-item?id=32852092 (If you can't see it) Rachel Wilson has almost-bleach blond hair, with very (almost black looking) dark brown eyes. She is around 5'3, being a slight bit short compared to other girls she knows. She has a light neutral skin color (resource can be linked to for how I got the name, shes caucasian), which somewhat blends in with her hair. Her hair is long and quite dirty, reaching all the way to her own back. She is slim, not showing much athletic effort on her own part, due to her own interests. Unlike Janice, not many people in her school really gave much of a crap on her pitiful appearance, most likely because she ended up with girls very similar to herself. Her face-and her whole body-is rather bland, except for maybe a cut or two from daily accidents, and some questionable bruises. A notable one at the moment is a medium sized slice on her cheek, seemingly from a knife.
Clothing: Ever since she was around 8 years old, Rachel has been the master of wearing aviator goggles. This dimmed-glass brown-strapped goggles are often found sitting on her head, though sometimes she can be found wearing them. Rachel is also known for wearing bland clothing that is typical of the generic American family, often wearing ripped, blue, bootleg jeans and black t-shirts spouting the words "Aeropostale" in English. Her shoes are rather generic, and rather boyish, featuring black-and-red colors.
Bio (Make it detailed, please. We can't tell where you come from if you write "ate cat when young"): Rachel is like most middle-classed teenage girls. She wakes up in the morning, goes the school, comes back, does stuff until a certain time, then sleeps. However, unlike other girls, she realizes that she's different. She might have a slightly rude sister, and a practically useless father, but what mattered was that there was someone to care for her. Which, in most cases, ended up being her mother. Even Reese, Rachel's own sister, wasn't even as connected to her as Rachel was to her own mother. Her mother's eventual disappearance one day devastated her, making her go in a slight state of depression. During this time, Rachel and Reese constantly got into little battles between each other. The day right before Rachel apparently disappeared from existence itself, they had what they think to be their worst-which ended up getting Rachel a bad gash on her cheek after Reese got a fist smashed in her face. Before Reese even knew it, Rachel disappeared from existence-like a light bulb which flickered away. Nobody knows where Rachel and Reese went, thought Reese doubts that it wasn't a good place..
Home Country (Don't be all from America.): CALIFORNIA GIRL-I mean, America. I'm unoriginal.
Other: She's Reese's younger sister, even though they have their differences. -------- Name: Reese Wilson
Gender: Female
Age: 14 years old
Physical appearance (Not clothing, unless your clothing is a part of your body..which is odd.): http://www.roblox.com/Meet-Reeses-Puffs-item?id=137304559 (Pic is here, but here is some description if the picture doesn't load or if you just can't see it) Reese Wilson's eyes are a faded dark blue, which is somewhat like her own mother's eyes. She has black hair, much unlike her sister, which is awfully long, even more so than her younger sister, as her hair reaches almost to her legs. She has the same small shoulders as her sister. Reese is around 5'7 feet. She has the same hair color as her own sister. Although she looks around as slim as her own sister, she as a bit athletic, as she has been a cheerleader for almost as long as she remembered. Being a cheerleader (and having a bland sense of humor) allowed her to climb the rather weak social ranks of her school, making the world "perfect" for her. She doesn't wear any make-up, unlike the picture shown, unlike the other "preppy" cheerleaders (she doesn't like the word "prep", as she thinks it's a sign of stupidity).
Clothing: As Rachel is the master of aviator goggles, Reese is the master of knit hats (which look like http://www.roblox.com/Knit-Hat-item?id=20298816), though she doesn't take much pride into it. Due to most of her sister's clothing actually being hand-me-downs, it is easily shown that Reese wears around the same clothing as her younger sister. Her shoes are around the same as her sister, but instead of being black and red, they are black and blue.
Bio (Make it detailed, please. We can't tell where you come from if you write "ate cat when young"): Reese felt like she had a life better than the rest of the world. Her family had enough money to make the world go round', she actually HAD a family, she had friends, and she belonged to school which actually wasn't full of violence and crime (mostly drugs). However, it seemed like she changed her mind when her mother went missing. Everyone seemingly forgot about her, making it like they were only a single-father-and-two-children family. For some reason, her social status dropped, and her own sister was beating on her, frustrated and yet emotionally depressed. No longer were the days of the silly, good ol' Reese. The day, which was the most prominent to her, was the day before her own sister's disappearance. Reese ended up being temporarily cracked after that bout-she was better a couple days later, though her sister still had a gash on her cheek. Rachel's disappearance, however, made things worse for her, as now she the only, lone child of the family, with no one left to talk to, other than her almost non existent father. And yet, she wonders..what ever happened to Reese, and her own mother?
Home Country (Don't be all from America.): She's from the same country as Rachel.
Other: *ate cat when young* |
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| 01 Dec 2013 05:14 PM |
Name: Greg Margantininaitniatn Gregifeier C'tantantantantan'Zoopdahoopeee The extreme awesome cool incredible awesome extreme awesome cool incredible dragon slayer of awesome extreme powers, who once slayed that really big dragon who was terrorising the land, but killed that dragon, so is really really cool and stuff
Gender: M
Age: 18
Physical appearance (Not clothing, unless your clothing is a part of your body..which is odd.): blonde hair, blue eyes, strong muscles
Clothing: pair of jeans and boots
Bio (Make it detailed, please. We can't tell where you come from if you write "ate cat when young"): ate hamster when young
Home Country (Don't be all from America.): america
Other: pooop |
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briar182
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| 01 Dec 2013 05:16 PM |
(@steg http://www.roblox.com/You-Tried-item?id=120394653) |
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| 01 Dec 2013 05:26 PM |
(There's a reference in here somewhere. Points to you if you can guess who my char is based off of.)
Name: Lupo Mando
Gender:Male
Age: 27
Physical appearance (Not clothing, unless your clothing is a part of your body..which is odd.): Lupo is a sinewy, Hispanic man with wild, brown eyes and buzzed, brown hair. A scar runs from the corner of his left eye all the way back to his cerebellum. He also has a messy, unkept brown bear, where some hair is longer in on side, and bald in the other.
Clothing: He almost always wheres a red, ripped tanktop and black, ripped jeans. If he isn't, he's probably naked. His shoes are brown leather, covered in dried blood and brain bits.
Bio (Make it detailed, please. We can't tell where you come from if you write "ate cat when young"): After being driven insane by his sister, who tried to be intimate with him, he became a druglord in Ciudad Juarez, Mexico. After leading a three year campaign in selling drugs and killing innocents, he was caught by the American military during his trip to Los Angeles. Because of his highly unstable mental condition he was instead put in a mental asylum rather than being executed. After staying there for another 3 years he escaped mysteriously, from the straight jacket and the rubber room that held him. Because of his reputation in both America and Mexico, he resulted into moving to Canada, killing anything that stands in his way...literally.
Home Country (Don't be all from America.): Mexico
Other: -Resident of Canada, barely able to maintain a low profile. -He had always dreamed to be a pirate -His most recent crime was when he killed a man, then captured a girl and a man named Liza and Ollie. This reeled in the man's brother, Jason, to save his girlfriend and friend. When he entered the building, the whole thing collapsed and killed all three. |
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drpece231
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| 01 Dec 2013 05:35 PM |
| I KNOW FOR A FACT THAT ALL THE CHARS ARE GOING TOO BE MARY SUES |
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| 01 Dec 2013 05:35 PM |
i use swagmeter to blow up the world and everyone dies
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| 01 Dec 2013 05:36 PM |
| LOL ROLEPLAYING IS TERRIBLE |
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Xanbie
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| 01 Dec 2013 05:36 PM |
| You are hurting my feelings |
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| 01 Dec 2013 05:36 PM |
| you're an idiot and your argu I personally found your posts, on viewing it, extremely flawed. My eyes flashed with the numerous amount of words in front of me, and I was blown away by how you could present such an uncontributional post. I looked down, in the beginning, the middle, and near the end, to find that all of the post was infact widespread, and could have been shortened down to around three sentences. Furthermore, why would you post something like this on a Forum where people are lazy and usually won't read something that is more than five sentences? You really need to reconsider your post, or nobody is ever going to read it. Judging from the subject of your thread, it doesn't matter anyway, because the post would be so pointless and stupid to even waste my time reading it. You aren't going to get any decent replies, because you made the post content faaaar too long, and didn't even consider people who might have reading disablities. What about them, huh? Infact, just like them, all we see is a bunch of letters on the screen where you have mindlessly typed your long and boring post, while you will later wonder why you got no replies. Well, that's the reason. The post drags on for an extreme amount of lines, and it could easily be shortened down, which is why I'm so angry about it. You could also atleast include some paragraphs to give our eyes a rest, look at this huge wall of text, it is practically impossible to read. I feel like I'm having some sort of seizure as I look through all the words, flashing around. I'm getting lost in the content of your post repeatedly, and I think you should really reconsider what you have done. This is in no way helpful to your thread, as you can't get the point across in your thread's main content. If that is happening, then it is already too late, because even if people do read it, they'll probably be too exhausted to read the post anyway. If I was you, I'd clear out this wall of text into paragraphs, shorten it down to an easy-to-read point, and not include the same thing over and over to make the post longer. It was so long, even I'M not going to consider placing my eyes upon this monster to read it.I personally found your post, on viewing it, extremely flawed. My eyes flashed with the numerous amount of words in front of me, and I was blown away by how you could present such an uncontributional post. I looked down, in the beginning, the middle, and near the end, to find that all of the post was infact widespread, and could have been shortened down to around three sentences. Furthermore, why would you post something like this on a Forum where people are lazy and usually won't read something that is more than five sentences? You really need to reconsider your post, or nobody is ever going to read it. Judging from the subject of your thread, it doesn't matter anyway, because the post would be so pointless and stupid to even waste my time reading it. You aren't going to get any decent replies, because you made the post content faaaar too long, and didn't even consider people who might have reading disablities. What about them, huh? Infact, just like them, all we see is a bunch of letters on the screen where you have mindlessly typed your long and boring post, while you will later wonder why you got no replies. Well, that's the reason. The post drags on for an extreme amount of lines, and it could easily be shortened down, which is why I'm so angry about it. You could also atleast include some paragraphs to give our eyes a rest, look at this huge wall of text, it is practically impossible to read. I feel like I'm having some sort of seizure as I look through all the words, flashing around. I'm getting lost in the content of your post repeatedly, and I think you should really reconsider what you have done. This is in no way helpful to your thread, as you can't get the point across in your thread's main content. If that is happening, then it is already too late, because even if people do read it, they'll probably be too exhausted to read the post anyway. If I was you, I'd clear out this wall of text into paragraphs, shorten it down to an easy-to-read point, and not include the same thing over and over to make the post longer. It was so long, even I'M not going to consider placing my eyes upon this monster to read it.I personally found your post, on viewing it, extremely flawed. My eyes flashed with the numerous amount of words in front of me, and I was blown away by how you could present such an uncontributional post. I looked down, in the beginning, the middle, and near the end, to find that all of the post was infact widespread, and could have been shortened down to around three sentences. Furthermore, why would you post something like this on a Forum where people are lazy and usually won't read something that is more than five sentences? You really need to reconsider your post, or nobody is ever going to read it. Judging from the subject of your thread, it doesn't matter anyway, because the post would be so pointless and stupid to even waste my time reading it. You aren't going to get any decent replies, because you made the post content faaaar too long, and didn't even consider people who might have reading disablities. What about them, huh? Infact, just like them, all we see is a bunch of letters on the screen where you have mindlessly typed your long and boring post, while you will later wonder why you got no replies. Well, that's the reason. The post drags on for an extreme amount of lines, and it could easily be shortened down, which is why I'm so angry about it. You could also atleast include some paragraphs to give our eyes a rest, look at this huge wall of text, it is practically impossible to read. I feel like I'm having some sort of seizure as I look through all the words, flashing around. I'm getting lost in the content of your post repeatedly, and I think you should really reconsider what you have done. This is in no way helpful to your thread, as you can't get the point across in your thread's main content. If that is happening, then it is already too late, because even if people do read it, they'll probably be too exhausted to read the post anyway. If I was you, I'd clear out this wall of text into paragraphs, shorten it down to an easy-to-read point, and not include the same thing over and over to make the post longer. It was so long, even I'M not going to consider placing my eyes upon this monster to read it.I personally found your posts, on viewing it, extremely flawed. My eyes flashed with the numerous amount of words in front of me, and I was blown away by how you could present such an uncontributional post. I looked down, in the beginning, the middle, and near the end, to find that all of the post was infact widespread, and could have been shortened down to around three sentences. Furthermore, why would you post something like this on a Forum where people are lazy and usually won't read something that is more than five sentences? You really need to reconsider your post, or nobody is ever going to read it. Judging from the subject of your thread, it doesn't matter anyway, because the post would be so pointless and stupid to even waste my time reading it. You aren't going to get any decent replies, because you made the post content faaaar too long, and didn't even consider people who might have reading disablities. What about them, huh? Infact, just like them, all we see is a bunch of letters on the screen where you have mindlessly typed your long and boring post, while you will later wonder why you got no replies. Well, that's the reason. The post drags on for an extreme amount of lines, and it could e ments have absolutely no value for now on because you made a typo so obviously you dont know how to spell at all. I'm not even going to try to read what you said because you probably misspelled all of that too! I'm just going to correct your typo and act like you didn't say anything else. |
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| 01 Dec 2013 05:36 PM |
why am i even joining in this
http://www.roblox.com/Horo-place?id=64731446; https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6dLcJewOBS8 ~uguu |
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| 01 Dec 2013 05:37 PM |
i twerk on everyone
with love ♥ |
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