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MushyRambo is not online. MushyRambo
Joined: 09 Jul 2012
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29 Nov 2013 06:22 PM
Got bored

Some rappers these days are starting to fade
Their only microwave hot, and I'm always shooting gamma rays
I open them up and eat them like a bag of lays
Sorry to chucky for ruining your day
Because I making this look a lot like child's play

I drown my sorrows with the positive in my life
My mind stays as sharp as a knife
I stand up for what's right
Always ready to fight
And this is only the beginning of a long life

Helpful Criticism would be nice
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Jared343 is not online. Jared343
Joined: 02 Mar 2009
Total Posts: 9030
29 Nov 2013 06:29 PM
Oh look, something you can easily edit and think about what you're writing, this is a true freestyle!
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Sonicjr723 is not online. Sonicjr723
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29 Nov 2013 06:35 PM
"Oh look, something you can easily edit and think about what you're writing, this is a true freestyle!"

He makes a good point.


OT: Your first couple of lines (specifically your first two) were good, then things got fairly basic. It's hard to comment on anything else because it was short.
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MushyRambo is not online. MushyRambo
Joined: 09 Jul 2012
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29 Nov 2013 10:01 PM
Appreciate the advice.
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SilverMudkip123 is not online. SilverMudkip123
Joined: 25 Aug 2011
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29 Nov 2013 10:08 PM
If you were to grow up and become a rapper, I might listen to you. Mostly because your one of the few that don't talk about drugz, "happy, happy, fun time", or how rich they are. Right now I only listen to EMIN3M, and thats about it.
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Eterra is not online. Eterra
Joined: 23 Nov 2012
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29 Nov 2013 10:09 PM
if that's the only reason you listen to eminem, you're probably missing out somewhere
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SilverMudkip123 is not online. SilverMudkip123
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29 Nov 2013 10:13 PM
Go be a troll somewhere else, I can like someones music for whatever reason.
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civilizationfreak is not online. civilizationfreak
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29 Nov 2013 10:20 PM
there are a lot of other rappers/hip hop producers who still make music and don't swear a lot
I would recommend tyler the creator, but he swears some
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SilverMudkip123 is not online. SilverMudkip123
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29 Nov 2013 10:21 PM
EMIN3M swears... well... ALOT! So I am ok with a lil' swearing. Ill check him out soon sometime, ty. Now try and focus on the main part of this topic.
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EvilNoobKitty123 is not online. EvilNoobKitty123
Joined: 23 Sep 2010
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29 Nov 2013 10:23 PM
I CAN RAP BETTER!!

Everyone is chunky
Looking like a monkey
Swallowed your key set
BEEP BEEP I bet
Meow meow
Purr purr
Hiss hiss
NEEEEAAH NEEEEAAH
I'm a little kitty
Purrs little kitty
As a little kitty
Tear off the kitty's skin and
Eat
It
Raw


C:
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SilverMudkip123 is not online. SilverMudkip123
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29 Nov 2013 10:25 PM
You need help.
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Johnny17095 is not online. Johnny17095
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29 Nov 2013 10:26 PM
I shall devour your kittens whole and poop them out just in time for Christmas..
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SilverMudkip123 is not online. SilverMudkip123
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29 Nov 2013 10:27 PM
I then shall call animal control.
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Johnny17095 is not online. Johnny17095
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29 Nov 2013 10:37 PM
I was kidding... qq
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EvilNoobKitty123 is not online. EvilNoobKitty123
Joined: 23 Sep 2010
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29 Nov 2013 10:41 PM
THOSE ANIMAL CONTROL FREAKS WON'T GET A HOLD OF MY ILLEGAL HORSE MEAT FROM MY BUTCHERING BARN!!!! >:O
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Johnny17095 is not online. Johnny17095
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29 Nov 2013 10:42 PM
Da heck.
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EvilNoobKitty123 is not online. EvilNoobKitty123
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29 Nov 2013 10:44 PM
I mean, fresh cow meat LEGALLY processed with no hormones added to the cows c:
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SilverMudkip123 is not online. SilverMudkip123
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29 Nov 2013 10:52 PM
I can never drink milk again.
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EvilNoobKitty123 is not online. EvilNoobKitty123
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29 Nov 2013 10:53 PM
Your milk cartons are filled with bull milk... q.q
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SilverMudkip123 is not online. SilverMudkip123
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29 Nov 2013 10:54 PM
Staph, STAPH, I DONT WANNA HEAR WHATS IN MY MILK!
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EvilNoobKitty123 is not online. EvilNoobKitty123
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30 Nov 2013 08:31 AM
and in the milk are rat feces for flavor and dog skin for the thick texture...
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FIRECAKE is not online. FIRECAKE
Joined: 28 Feb 2009
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30 Nov 2013 11:11 AM
"Their only microwave hot, and I'm always shooting gamma rays"

its funny because

1. They're*
2. neither microwaves nor gamma rays are "hot," rather they accelerate particles that they come into contact with causing the particles to generate energy, mainly in the form of heat.
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SilverMudkip123 is not online. SilverMudkip123
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30 Nov 2013 11:13 AM
You just got the award for...

Being a complete nerd.
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FIRECAKE is not online. FIRECAKE
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30 Nov 2013 11:37 AM
thats like 6th grade science but ok
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Sonicjr723 is not online. Sonicjr723
Joined: 03 Aug 2008
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30 Nov 2013 12:45 PM
"'its funny because

1. They're*
2. neither microwaves nor gamma rays are "hot," rather they accelerate particles that they come into contact with causing the particles to generate energy, mainly in the form of heat."

You missed the point, the point is that on a scale of energy gamma rays are > microwaves. The "microwave hot" was on its own, not connecting to the gamma rays half of the line.
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