Zorthe
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| 28 Nov 2013 09:02 PM |
Not the finished product: /4xJq7jH
Rate 1-10
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Dravum
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SatansGun
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Zorthe
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AlexR1212
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Zorthe
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| 28 Nov 2013 09:23 PM |
Thanks
Could you give reasons? Can you criticize, please?
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AlexR1212
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| 28 Nov 2013 09:26 PM |
Sure m8. the shirt collar looks sloppy & too small. the folds on the jacket look too idk how to say this not smooth I suppose. the shading is nice. Also, is it just a shirt or a button up?(black one) |
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| 28 Nov 2013 09:36 PM |
| Only one thing to say if you want criticism. If you want to make it more futuristic or modern but in a technological way, unless you want to make it a regular coat, which I think is what you're going after since the title says "simple". |
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Zorthe
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| 28 Nov 2013 10:05 PM |
@Alex - The collar is what I was going for, I realize it is small. I was already fixing the folds. And the shirt is a button up, I just haven't added that. Thanks!
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| 28 Nov 2013 10:06 PM |
Over 9000/10
Sorry it just looked too kewl. |
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Zorthe
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