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Re: My Simple Personal Coat

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Zorthe is not online. Zorthe
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28 Nov 2013 09:02 PM
Not the finished product: /4xJq7jH

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~Z [Uniforms]
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28 Nov 2013 09:03 PM
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Zorthe is not online. Zorthe
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28 Nov 2013 09:19 PM
c;

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28 Nov 2013 09:21 PM
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28 Nov 2013 09:22 PM
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Zorthe is not online. Zorthe
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28 Nov 2013 09:23 PM
Thanks

Could you give reasons? Can you criticize, please?

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AlexR1212 is not online. AlexR1212
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28 Nov 2013 09:26 PM
Sure m8.
the shirt collar looks sloppy & too small.
the folds on the jacket look too idk how to say this not smooth I suppose.
the shading is nice. Also, is it just a shirt or a button up?(black one)
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Gunner1888 is not online. Gunner1888
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28 Nov 2013 09:36 PM
Only one thing to say if you want criticism. If you want to make it more futuristic or modern but in a technological way, unless you want to make it a regular coat, which I think is what you're going after since the title says "simple".
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Zorthe is not online. Zorthe
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28 Nov 2013 10:05 PM
@Alex - The collar is what I was going for, I realize it is small. I was already fixing the folds. And the shirt is a button up, I just haven't added that. Thanks!

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Noelzilla1 is not online. Noelzilla1
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28 Nov 2013 10:06 PM
Over 9000/10


Sorry it just looked too kewl.
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Zorthe is not online. Zorthe
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28 Nov 2013 10:06 PM
Thank you

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