JFCODY
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| 23 Nov 2013 10:25 PM |
The Abstastic Adventures of JFCODY: The Search For The Building
One day, JFCODY woke up, seeing all the fatness in this world, he was in despair. He went outside to flex, but he felt empty, he felt like his life had no meanings. He remembered the talks about the building, the legends spoke about it. JFCODY then decided to get to the building.
He went to get info from his trustworthy abs flexer, known as Vexonus, for more infos about the building. When he arrived to Vexonus's gym, something horrible happened. KFC terrorists attacked the gym while Vex and the other flexers tried to repel them. Vex was trying to flex his way out, but to no avail.
JFCODY decided to help the flexer and recover the gym, using his legendary UFC moves. After flexing every KFCs away, he went to Vexonus, who told him this. "idk wats a buildin, sry" JFCODY was devastated. He had to go to his old comrades to find some answers, but he didn't see them for a long time.
He went for his comrades, the first one being Magmorticus, which had changed name, and was leading a new army to a war, he had little to no infos about the building. JFCODY felt lost, and asked more people. He asked one of his old comrade, ToberDam, but no answer was answered.
JFCODY felt hopeless, has he couldn't find nothing about the building. But when he asked Wargoney, he had something very scary to say. "Oh it has many gaurds and they all follow a emperor who they think is a god. THeya re all faciist and will die in his name. they have a tank guarding the entrance that has 18 cannons on it and 15 inchs of steel plate, But it move slike a snale"
"They have these guys that are buff as The Terminator, But buffer at the same time. They were golden armor of super soldierness and have spears that also counter as guns, so be careful. Good luck m8 and make sure u bring lots of big guns, lots of them. Walk softly and carry a big gun is what I always say."
After thanking him about his infos, it was time to find all the answers ever in the building! (To be continued) |
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JFCODY
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JFCODY
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| 23 Nov 2013 10:45 PM |
Finally Someone that actually used paragraphs. |
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| 23 Nov 2013 10:48 PM |
| I lost interest with the 2nd paragraph. |
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oomtm450
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JFCODY
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| 23 Nov 2013 11:01 PM |
i always put paragraphs im a professional
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| 23 Nov 2013 11:07 PM |
Yes, A Professional you are. |
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JFCODY
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| 23 Nov 2013 11:34 PM |
| Too bad they couldn't flex themselves to victory and lost by 1 pt. |
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JFCODY
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| 23 Nov 2013 11:35 PM |
| Too bad the Jets flexed more than the Caps. |
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carlosaq
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| 23 Nov 2013 11:46 PM |
| Dat was beautiful I think I'm gonna cry :P |
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JFCODY
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Zypherous
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JFCODY
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| 24 Nov 2013 02:41 PM |
| I always write quality bestsellers, like Twillight and 50 shads of grey. |
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| 24 Nov 2013 07:24 PM |
| I give this Novel a 10/10. |
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JFCODY
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| 25 Nov 2013 09:11 PM |
| thanks you for your good critic dear sir |
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JFCODY
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| 28 Nov 2013 10:43 PM |
| even the blak man is gonna cry |
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