L3G1Tguy
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| 20 Nov 2013 03:32 PM |
The day they knew was about to turn into shadows. As a woman named Victoria was making dinner for her family of five. As she was draining the water out of a pot of broccoli. She saw a red substance emerging from the sink. Victoria was curious and never saw anything like it, she watched it come out and form into a human, she was scared and dashed to her husband, Johnny. As Johnny came into the kitchen there was nothing and thought Victoria was crazed. After looking around the kitchen they saw a faint red trail leading to their laundry room. Victoria told her three kids to go hide in the basement, without hesitation they went into the basement and they were hiding behind their couch. As Victoria and Johnny searched the house for hours, they came up with nothing. Victoria was trying to recap the substance coming out of the sink as it morphed into a human figure, she thought it was just her tired self. As Victoria and Johnny walked down into the basement, they saw the faint red trail again. Johnny grabbed a knife and was ready to to defend his family. As they went down into the cold basement, they saw two of the three kids, Will, their 7 year old son, and Kim, their 15 year old daughter, dead. Half eaten. Victoria shredded tears and shoved her face into Johnny. A few moments later, they heard a bump in a closet, they braced themselves for the worst. Johnny ripped open the door and there was, the third child. Magnus, the thirteen year old was huddling in the corner, crying. His blood stained pink unicorn shirt smelled vial, Magnus looked up and saw his parents, jumping up and jumped into their arms. Everyone was crying. Victoria turned to Johnny and asked, “What do we do?” Johnny replied, “We go find somewhere safe.” Victoria helped Magnus up the stairs and Johnny, looked at their to dead children, he didn’t know what to do, so he dragged them into the bathroom, and locked the door. He went upstairs to see that Victoria and Magnus were staring outside looking and were devastated, the red substance was only one of the many more blob substance morphed into humans, but these were their neighbors, in a thin layer of the red substance, Magnus was looking at all the kids that turned into these violent blobs, and saw his best friend, turned and stared at Magnus. He limped towards them, groaning, Magnus shut the door and ran to the couch and cried even more. Victoria calmed Magnus down and said, “It’s okay, everything is going to be alright.” She brought Magnus to the dinner table and Johnny followed, the three of them, silent. Victoria looked up at Johnny and saw that he was thinking, hard. He always got that one look when he was thinking. Victoria broke the silence and said, “What are you thinking about?” Johnny replied, “Where to go, we don’t know anything about this, and we don’t know where is safe and were is just crawling with whatever those things are.” Victoria then turned to Magnus, thinking what his future would be like, she then whispered, “Go upstairs and pack some clothes and whatever else you want, just make sure nothing is big.” Magnus nodded, got up, and walked upstairs. Victoria followed leaving Johnny by himself, still thinking. He got up and started upstairs, toward the master bedroom. He opened up his drawer, picked up some clothes and threw them on the bed. He then found his handgun, and ammo. He got that and shoved it in his back pocket. He looked all over the house for pocket knives and found four. He then went into his garage and opened his gun safe, their laid a muzzleloader which he used for his hunting and got a shotgun. He cleaned out the safe and put everything in one bag. He shoved it in the back of the trunk of the car and slammed it shut. He walked back to the master bedroom and saw Victoria packing. Johnny said softly, “I cleaned out the safe.” Victoria replied, “Okay.” Victoria was still trying to grasp the fact that their two children were half eaten, and Magnus was still alive. She didn’t want to live with that through the rest of whatever that was happening. Victoria and Johnny walked down and found Magnus, laying down on the sofa, watching the news, it was switched to an emergency message. It said “Warning, Warning. For those who are listening to this, a blob apocalypse has started. It started with scientists experimenting a virus that turned humans into zombies that have a thin layer of a red gooey substance, the problem is trying to be solved. Please go to Washington D.C, its safe their.” The broadcast turned off. Victoria turned to Johnny and he quickly said, “No, we’ll never make it.” Victoria thought Johnny was right, they lived across the country and knew that it would be a long journey until they got their. Victoria and Magnus got the bags of clothes, and put them into the car with the weapons. They came back to see Johnny, looking at a map of the United States. He stared at the map with his expression of thinking. he pointed at an airport, he said, “It looks like if we leave now, we could get there by tomorrow night. This thing just started, so they have to still be flying those planes.” Victoria asked, where would we go?” Johnny replied, “Wherever they’re taking people.” Victoria nodded. The remaining three of the family got in their car, opened the garage, and drove off. Victoria turned to Magnus, who was in the back seat, he was sound asleep, still in his blood stained shirt. When they got on the highway, Johnny had a hard time getting through, cars, buses, everywhere, they were motionless. Every car they looked into, was one or more dead body, Victoria turned away from the side window, Magnus was still sound asleep. This family didn’t have a clue at what they were getting into next, and their lives were at stake, with the blobs.
To be continued...
Please Comment on what you think about my new story "The Walking Blob: The World We Knew is Gone" I will be releasing my second story as Johnny, Victoria, and Magnus try desperately to get to the airport.
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zepher32
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| 20 Nov 2013 04:03 PM |
AHhhHHHh too many words, and no paragraphs. It's probably good, but it hurts to read it, so... |
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| 20 Nov 2013 10:40 PM |
| Zapher all I see is "The Matrix" when I read stuff with no paragraphs. |
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L3G1Tguy
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| Joined: 24 Sep 2011 |
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| 21 Nov 2013 05:49 AM |
| Forum doesn't allow me to tab. |
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zepher32
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| 21 Nov 2013 12:00 PM |
Hey zephyr mind if I ask you.
Are you a girl? |
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| 23 Nov 2013 08:51 PM |
| It was really sad but I wanna see the rest. |
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Kipec
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| 23 Nov 2013 09:02 PM |
Wait, wait, wait HOLD DA PHONE! If you didn't have TAB, and you didnt know about enter how did you do this?
"their lives were at stake, with the blobs.
To be continued...
Please Comment on what you think about my new story "The Walking Blob: The World We Knew is Gone" I will be releasing my second story as Johnny, Victoria, and Magnus try desperately to get to the airport."
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Kipec
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| 23 Nov 2013 09:05 PM |
| This was actually a very good story :3! |
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iPortia
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| 23 Nov 2013 09:44 PM |
| I actually am anxious for the second part. o3o |
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L3G1Tguy
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| 27 Nov 2013 05:34 AM |
| No I can tab and enter, but my enter is a little bit non sensitive. For ROBLOX forum, it won't let me Tab. |
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| 29 Nov 2013 08:05 AM |
| Pretty good, though you need to learn some transitioning skills. |
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zepher32
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| 19 Dec 2013 03:35 PM |
Almost a month later and still can't read it.
I'm not a girl, I'm an independent black woman who don't need no man. |
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| 04 Jan 2014 02:51 AM |
Nice L3, Finally a story I didn't waste my time! I want to see the rest.! |
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| 04 Jan 2014 07:09 AM |
| Try writing the next part on Microsoft word, but if you do when your starting a new paragraph tap enter twice because when you copy and paste with only a one line space it comes out as no lines,,,, |
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