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| 11 Nov 2013 08:30 PM |
[MONDAY 3:27 PM] Silver, a young lad lived in Blunder Court in "the bad side of town." For his 7th birthday his farther Windhuss, a strong kind-hearted blacksmith gave him a silver dagger with Silver's name incrypted in the blade. Silver loved the present so much he showed his best friends, Blue Jay and Frosthault. They decided to play knights and crooks. Silver was the knight. As he chased his friends his father came outside and yelled at him for trying to slice Frosthault with the dagger. He told Silver to help him with forging for the rest of the day.
[MONDAY 9:42 PM] Silver was finally done with the last customers of the day. He went to bed exhausted and tired. When he woke up the next morning he heard rattling in the kitchen downstairs. Since he was used to lots of clinging and clashing sounds around the forge he ignored it, but then he heard a scream that sounded like his father. He ran downstairs to find his father stabbed in the chest bleeding on the kitchen floor. For a blacksmith, Silver and his father were poor. They didn't pay someone to come and get them to the Life Mage across town, instead he got a rag and tried to cover the wound. They both knew this would be the last day Windhuss would see. He told Silver not to worry and let him rest tonight promising his son he would be fine and healthy in the morning.
[TUESDAY 6:14 AM] Silver couldn't sleep that night. He stayed up worrying about his father. He then started to realize that he heard no clinging or clashing that morning. Silver got up and went downstairs looking for the couch his father slept on. He saw his fathers legs hang off the couch and walked up to him. He wasn't breathing... Silver didn't have to deny that his father was dead. He quickly went from tears to pure rage. Silver had already lost his mother, Rose when he was only two. He was no longing thinking. He took the dagger his father had given him and walked outside. He swore to find the crooks that had killed him.
[5 YEARS LATER] After Silver had been on the run for days for stealing food and coins. He was caught. A knight from RedCliff had found him. He brought him back to the camp the soldiers were currently in to get ready to fight the Korbloxians once the more troops arrived. He brought him inside of camp to the leader of the army. He asked him what to do with the crook. The leader asked Silver why he was stealing food and coins. He told him the story when his father died. The leader had known Windhuss, he had met him when he was recruiting in Blunder Court. He asked to speak to Silver privately. No one really knows what happened in the conversation, but when the two came out they said a legend was born. Silver was young, but due to the stories he told to the leader, he was approved to join the fight to make up for stealing.
[THURSDAY 12:48 AM] The knights were ready to attack the Korbloxian fort, everyone was waiting for the signal to leap onto the pitch black battlefield and paint it with blood. "GO FOR THOSE NASTY BLUE EYES!" They shouted. The signal was given and everyone charged. Silver held back for a bit, then while everyone was busy he sneaked around the back of the fort and saw a Black Skeleton. Silver had no idea what a Korbloxian looked like. Most of the knights said they were beasts and evil beings. Silver guessed this was one. He ran up behind the skeleton and striked as hard as he could into the skull of the demon.
TO BE CONTINUED!
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| 12 Nov 2013 06:25 PM |
| Brilliant! Amazing! Better than mine could ever be! I loved it! |
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| 13 Nov 2013 03:08 PM |
| Thanks Aidan I'm going to add on to it later :D |
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| 13 Nov 2013 03:12 PM |
One: wrong forum. Two: EWW, YOU MADE A STORY ABOUT A CRAPPY MOD GROUP? |
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| 13 Nov 2013 03:39 PM |
Not the wrong forum,has,rp is for rping and stories. And has,how come you only post that it's the wrong forum on this post? You've never done that to other stories.
also can you add me in the story as a member of the empyreus dominus tribe |
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| 13 Nov 2013 03:54 PM |
| Sgt, stories belong in Movies/Books/TV. |
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| 13 Nov 2013 04:49 PM |
HAS STOP COMPLAINING ABOUT THIS STORY,YOU DON'T COMPLAIN ABOUT OTHER STORIES ON THE SUBFORUM
AND MOVIES/BOOKS/TV IS TALKING ABOUT MOVIES AND BOOKS AND TV,STORIES ARE NOT BOOKS |
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| 13 Nov 2013 08:45 PM |
"Does your robloxian belong on the silver screen, or in the pages of a novel?" Novel=Story Argument invalidated. |
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| 13 Nov 2013 09:33 PM |
| A story doesn't have to be a novel |
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| 13 Nov 2013 09:52 PM |
Honestly, stories can belong here. Movies/TV/Books are meant for TALK about those topics.
If you read the description of RP it says "The forum of storytelling," or something along those lines. Go read it if you don't believe me.
Not intending to be an arse and call you out on it, so I'm trying to put it in as nice a way as possible. |
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| 13 Nov 2013 09:53 PM |
"The forum for STORYTELLING and imagination."
That's the first sentence in the description of RP. |
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| 14 Nov 2013 06:28 AM |
| Has just wants to whine and complain about this story because it's about the official roblox groups. |
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| 14 Nov 2013 09:26 PM |
[THURSDAY 12:57] The demon turned around and looked at Silver as if he had killed an innocent. Silver stared at the body for a few seconds before moving on. He had found a hole dug out underneath a weak wall. Silver punched out spots above the hole to fit through. He looked around to see if any more of those demons around. Once the coast was clear he ran into a bunker near him. He found a spear with a blue crystal for a spear head. He touched the crystal and suddenly was flushed with memories. A group of men in the middle of a tundra... Then it changed to people eating crystals and rocks... After that a face of a demon appeared. Silver dropped the spear and decided not to use it. He ran to a storage house and decided to camp out inside.
[THURSDAY 1:43] Many screams were heard outside the storage house. Silver waited for everything to be quiet and peeped outside. He saw captive RedCliff Knights getting ready to be hanged. Without thinking Silver ran up and behind a crystal armored skeletal being and knifed it in his neck. He then threw his knife at another skeleton and hit it right in it's right eye. It screamed in pain and then died. Silver removed the knife from the skeleton and cut the ropes that tied the Knight's arms together. "Thank you, lad." said one of the knights. "We best be gettin' back to our camp, we need to report back to the main fortress." Silver and the RedCliff knights escaped the fort and walked back to their camp site.
[FRIDAY 7:31] Silver was woken up by one of the knights the next morning. "Silver, our camp leader wants you." Silver followed the knight out of his cottage and into the leader's rocky bunker. "Ah, I was wanting to speak to you Silver, thank you Rustblade. Silver never really talked after his father's death. He was to frustrated to. "You have rescued some of our best knights, what do you think about joining RedCliff?" Silver just stood there for a second and stared off into space. He didn't want to stay in this place. "Well, are you? We ain't got all day son." Silver was trying to force himself to speak to the camp leader. He finally found his courage. "Yes." The camp leader seemed excited. "You will start tomorrow as an apprentice." Silver nodded and left the rocky bunker. He would have a new life starting tomorrow. A very exciting one, too.
[SATURDAY 6:13] Silver woke up and went outside to see what was going on. He heard whispers among the crowd of RedCliff members. "Hes a thief!" "He saved us, calm down!" "He will betray us all!" They were fighting over Silver becoming an apprentice today. "SILENCE!" shouted the camp leader. "Silver please step forward." The crowd was silent and moved out of the way for Silver as he came through. "Today we will take upon a new member to our clan, Silver the apprentice!" The crowd was chanting his name now and seemed not to care for his past actions. "Silver! Silver! Silver!" The camp leader signaled silence again. "Who shall take this apprentice under their wing?" Most of the knights Silver had rescued stepped forward. "Hmm, Darkclaw step forward." The biggest knight stepped forward. "You shall take this new apprentice for you to pass on your experience." The bulky knight looked up. "Thank you sir."
TO BE CONTINUED! |
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| 14 Nov 2013 10:10 PM |
| PM me if you want to be in the story, put your RP name what you are and what you do. You can add details of your character and all that extra stuff if you want. |
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| 15 Nov 2013 05:01 PM |
[A WEEK LATER] Silver had been training hard with Darkclaw. They have worked on many attacks, blocks, and other combat skills. Today they were going to raid a DarkAge ninja storage supplies said to have dangerous weapons stored inside.
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| 15 Nov 2013 08:07 PM |
| You can write or add on or whatever you would like to. |
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| 15 Nov 2013 10:55 PM |
[A WEEK LATER] Silver had been training hard with Darkclaw. They have worked on many attacks, blocks, and other combat skills. Today they were going to raid a DarkAge ninja storage supplies said to have dangerous weapons stored inside. This was the last war Silver would have to fight before going back to the main fortress! RedCliff squads rallied up their men. Silver was with Darkclaw, Zelvon and Polos in squad Coral. They were supposed to take out the main archer towers at the main gates guarding the supplies and defend squad Axel while they get them. As they arrived outside the main gates in wagons, everyone planned on who does what. Once everyone was ready, they jumped off the horses and charged into battle. Zelvon was trying to shoot one of the archers down in the towers while Polos was rushing towards the gate with most of the other knights. Darkclaw and Silver were fighting two Elite Ninjas. Silver struck at the arm of one of the ninjas, he blocked him and uppercutted him. Darkclaw defended Silver slashing the ninja at his shins. He cut a deep wound into the ninja as he fled the battle. Silver than regained his strength and jabbed the other ninja with his knife his father gave him in his stomach, knocking him over as he bled out.
[Zelvon and Polos] Zelvon managed to wound an archer in the shoulder which retreated back into the camp for a quick patch up. While he was trying to aim at another archer an assassin snuck up at him. He heard her foot crumble on a fallen leaf, quickly turned around and shot her in the face. While he was turned around an apprentice charged up behind him, most likely to avenge his mentor. Before he slashed his sword at Zelvon a knight tackled the apprentice and slit his throat. Polos and the other knights were being flanked by reinforcements. Polos blocked a Ninja while trying to fight a Lower Ninja on his left. Zelvon saw Polos was in trouble and quickly shot an arrow at the Lower Ninja. It hit him in the shoulder and he cringed. Polos took the chance and slayed him. Polos didn't know but a Darkest Assassin well known in DarkAge Ninjas as Silverstreak ran up behind him. He tried to block but the Assassin cut deep into his leg. He crawled away, got up and tried to reach the wagons to get help. As he was limping an archer from the tower shot him in the back and he fell over. Polos tried with all his strength to crawl towards the wagons, but sadly bleed out before he reached them.
[Squad Coral] Silver, Darkclaw, and Zelvon fought off the remaining DarkAge ninjas until the gates finally were open. All the RedCliff knights rushed inside and fought the ninjas. As Squad Alex went to the Storage Room to get the supplies, they protected them. Darkclaw fought off two Lower Ninjas while Silver and Zelvon were busy with the final reinforcements. Darkclaw ducked a swing from one and stabbed the other in the heart. As the other fled he threw a spear the other Lower Ninja had at it nailing the ninja in the back. Silver ran up behind a Ninja and kicked him in the head knocking him out. He stabbed him in the head to finish him. Silver signaled Zelvon to fall back to the Storage Room. Squad Alex had loaded all the supplies and loaded them into a wagon. The knights still had to kill the remaining Ninjas to get out of the fort.
TO BE CONTINUED!
Special Thanks to: popcornhurricane, fearlessblacksword, and StoryTellerJr!
I will be planning on adding yall and sgtextremeALT to the next part.
(Sorry sgtextremeALT that I couldn't fit you in this part! You will be sure to be apart of the next one! |
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| 15 Nov 2013 11:28 PM |
| After I am done with the first "book" of RedCliff: Savage, I will do an alternative story about Darkclaw's life in first person. |
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| 15 Nov 2013 11:57 PM |
| Remember to PM me if you want to be in the story! |
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| 16 Nov 2013 05:22 AM |
.-. When you finished the story, make sure you do a grammar check.
Bleed out? Bled out*
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| 16 Nov 2013 05:40 AM |
| oh I thought this was based off the book |
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| 16 Nov 2013 05:03 PM |
| Will there be a link to the new "book?" |
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| 16 Nov 2013 10:13 PM |
| Yes, but that wont be until the alternative story of the first book is done. Blackclaw's Legacy |
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