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LeslieVernon is not online. LeslieVernon
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12 Nov 2013 12:00 AM
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EXT. LOUISIANA SWAMP - DAWN

The camera swerves through trees and bushes as if it were a bird. It follows a stream to a bridge and stops.

SMASH TO BLACK:

BEGIN TITLES

FADE IN:

We see an unidentifiable MAN walk across the bridge and follow a path which leads to an old tavern of sorts. Inside he sees MARIO, the bar tender.

MARIO
Hi, name's Mario. Friends call me Mar. What can I do you for?

MAN
I am here from out of town. I was aware you had quite the specials to offer.

MARIO
Sure do. Best damn gumbo in the south.

MAN
I mean your other specials.

The two stare at each other momentarily until a door slams open and reveals ARMAND VERNON.

ARMAND
Then you want to talk to me.

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swiftattak7 is not online. swiftattak7
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12 Nov 2013 12:08 AM
*claps*
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LeslieVernon is not online. LeslieVernon
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12 Nov 2013 12:11 AM
CUT TO:

ARMAND handing the MAN a brown bag. The MAN gladly walks out of the tavern.

MARIO turns to ARMAND.

MARIO
How do you get the ingredients for that crap anyway?

ARMAND pauses.

FLASHBACK:

Check My Brain by Alice In Chains plays as -

ARMAND is shown slamming an axe wildly into animals and people alike. Screams echo throughout the forest.

ARMAND is shown making fine powders out of their bones and mixing it together with the strangest of chants.

ARMAND finishes making the drug with an eerie chant.

PRESENT:

ARMAND unpauses.

ARMAND
None of your damn business, Mar. Now get back to selling that gumbo before it stinks up the place.

CUT TO BLACK:
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LeslieVernon is not online. LeslieVernon
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12 Nov 2013 12:12 AM
Made a typo.

"strangest of chemicals" not chants. =x
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swiftattak7 is not online. swiftattak7
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12 Nov 2013 12:16 AM
Not bad.


But what did the man pay Vernon?
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LeslieVernon is not online. LeslieVernon
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12 Nov 2013 12:24 AM
All in good time.
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swiftattak7 is not online. swiftattak7
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12 Nov 2013 04:16 AM
Awlright den.
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LeslieVernon is not online. LeslieVernon
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12 Nov 2013 05:00 PM
I love how no one cares to respond to the actual screenplay but when people just post what characters they want to be that'll get like two pages.

Makes sense.
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NilPirate is not online. NilPirate
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12 Nov 2013 05:17 PM
it seems a bit candid for horror, but whatevs man
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GleamingGauntlet is not online. GleamingGauntlet
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12 Nov 2013 05:18 PM
it seems more like a parody of horror
but what do i know
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LeslieVernon is not online. LeslieVernon
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12 Nov 2013 05:23 PM
The story ultra came up with was more or less horror.

However im also going to add in a 60s/70s thriller/cop/action feel by switching ultra's role around. Sorry, ultra, but it works better. He and swift will be two detectives entering not only the drug underworld but the voodoo one as well.

Swift & Crash. Best detective names ever, am I right?
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MarioDude0123 is not online. MarioDude0123
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12 Nov 2013 06:04 PM
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Ultracrash is not online. Ultracrash
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12 Nov 2013 06:10 PM
this is so awesome

like words cant describe how excited I am right now
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LeslieVernon is not online. LeslieVernon
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12 Nov 2013 06:42 PM
David Dorfman ... Mario

Angus Sutherland ... Armand

That's the cast so far as no other major characters have been introduced as of yet.
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LeslieVernon is not online. LeslieVernon
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12 Nov 2013 09:59 PM
(V.O.)
CRASH
Hey, turn that music down. Giving me an earache.

(V.O.)
SWIFT
An earache? That's a new one. Most people just say headache.

FADE IN:

INT. CAR INTERIOR - DAY

CRASH
Yeah, well I'm- Hey, stop the car. I think I see someone!

SWIFT pulls the car over on the side of the road and the two quickly get out.

SWIFT
What the hell?

Crash is already checking his pulse.

CRASH
He's dead. No visible wounds or injuries.

SWIFT
Stroke or heart attack, maybe?

CRASH
Don't know. Might be connected to our case.

SWIFT
Overdose?

CRASH
Don't know. But like I said, might be connected to our case. Come on, help me get him off the road.

FADE OUT:
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SwiftsProtectionSuit is not online. SwiftsProtectionSuit
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12 Nov 2013 10:03 PM
I'm bursting with excitement.


But wooop, I control the radio!
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LeslieVernon is not online. LeslieVernon
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12 Nov 2013 10:06 PM
I should have also written down that they saw a body before Crash checks the pulse. Also that the body is the same guy who bought the bag of stuff in the opening.

Also working on picking out actors for you two.
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LeslieVernon is not online. LeslieVernon
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12 Nov 2013 10:08 PM
Logan Marshall-Green ... Crash

Michael Fassbender ... Swift
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SwiftsProtectionSuit is not online. SwiftsProtectionSuit
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12 Nov 2013 10:11 PM
Jared Padalecki as Detective Crash
Jensen Ackles as Detective Swift

Or something.



Also if a girl is introduced.


Gillian Anderson-as girl.
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LeslieVernon is not online. LeslieVernon
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12 Nov 2013 10:15 PM
2Bad

Already casted
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SwiftsProtectionSuit is not online. SwiftsProtectionSuit
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12 Nov 2013 10:15 PM
Wait the other ones you just picked are great too.
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SwiftsProtectionSuit is not online. SwiftsProtectionSuit
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12 Nov 2013 10:15 PM
Wait atleast take SCULLY!!!
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LeslieVernon is not online. LeslieVernon
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12 Nov 2013 10:17 PM
Just a quick change to ultra's.

Jon Bernthal
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SwiftsProtectionSuit is not online. SwiftsProtectionSuit
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12 Nov 2013 10:18 PM
Looks great with a suit.
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Ultracrash is not online. Ultracrash
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13 Nov 2013 05:07 AM
I do don't I? This is awesome.
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