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| 12 Nov 2013 04:36 PM |
It's 2985.Our nation has been divided into two. The Avengers and the Bandits. The Avengers get all of their weapons from the military and try to take out all of the bandits. The Bandits, as you may expect, kill innocent people and the Avengers. They get all of their weapons from spies in the Avengers. This war has been raging for over hundreds of years. It was started by something unknown.... Something you decided to find.
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| 12 Nov 2013 07:21 PM |
I'm going to try to help with your thread a bit..
It's 2985.Our nation has been divided into two. The Avengers and the Bandits.
Uhmm, why exactly did they divide? The Bandits were originally rebels, but due to the Avengers becoming a better people, they just stay rebels? What? What's the back story to this?
The Avengers get all of their weapons from the military and try to take out all of the bandits.
Wasn't the nation split into two, thus the Avengers do not depend on any individual military..? I mean, it's not like the Bandits are like rebels, and the Avengers are the government. It's split in two. Does that mean the Bandits and Avengers are each separate governments?
The Bandits, as you may expect, kill innocent people and the Avengers. So... Why do they kill them in the first place? An odd, random bloodlust?
They get all of their weapons from spies in the Avengers.
HOLD ON, HOLD YOUR HORSES. Imagine this: This war has been going on hundreds of years, years and years of seemingly infinite people smashing into people, armies firing cannons. Somehow, JUST SOMEHOW, the Bandits have smuggled over ENOUGH GUNS, WEAPONS, AND AMMO FOR THEIR OWN ENTIRE ARMY? WHAT THE HELL? HOW DO THE AVENGERS NOT NOTICE THIS? Either A.. This was a plot error. Or B, this means that the Avengers are damn blind..
This war has been raging for over hundreds of years. It was started by something unknown.... Something you decided to find.
Wait, what? If there was a war started by some "unknown thing", I think I would be way more focused on the war than actually finding the purpose..
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