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spydermanj is not online. spydermanj
Joined: 04 Jul 2013
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12 Nov 2013 03:10 AM
It started like any other day.
Chase Vindio woke up feeling cold. He never got the chance to go to sleep. He just could not . He already knew his mom was gone before getting out of bed. She always was, he thought. Every morning he had to convince himself that mom needed the money. Every morning. God help me , he thought. He picked up his lamp and in a violent act of passion threw it through the window. *Crash!* Instantly the baby downstairs, as if on cue, starting crying. "Im such a screw-up." Chase often had extreme mood swings and he had one already. At six-thirty. He got up of the edge of his bed and stood up. This room is a mess he thought. It always was. All of a sudden he had a nasty feel in his abdomen. God, just let me get to the sink before throwing up. He didn't. He had to run to the window he just broke. He retched until he could not even stand. He looked down. The puke looked like art on the broken glass. He almost felt proud of himself. But he needed to freshen up now.
In the bathroom, his mind traveled to his dead father. "Dad where are you?" Only the air could answer. As washed his face be got the sick feeling all over again. Only this time it was not gonna be puke. It was in his heart. When his dad was alive he was one of the populars. Now,he was loser No. 1.
He brushed the thought out of his mind, while he brushed his teeth.
Then he went to check on his brother.


Stay tuned for chapter two in my new story Kidnapped: Three Kids, Two Captors, One Chance.
Original Story by spydermanj, all rights reserved.
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spydermanj is not online. spydermanj
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12 Nov 2013 03:27 AM
Hey guys feel free to comment tell me what you like or don't like, whats your favorite part, least favorite, give a rating(1-10) or whatev you want.
Believe me, i want any comments!
And thanks for taking time out to view my story!
Thank you!
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timpookie is not online. timpookie
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12 Nov 2013 03:52 AM
1-10.

Who would put copyrights on two hundred words anyway?

True fact: Humans are 50% bannana and 50% chair
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wrestlingforme is not online. wrestlingforme
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12 Nov 2013 04:10 PM
the same people who put copyrights on video game titles, and later sue a company for having a roll of papyrus in the title.
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