sillylego
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| 31 Jul 2012 12:37 AM |
There're going to be grammatical mistakes. Please don't mind them, I am on my phone.
{::-Date: April 14th, 3143. Scout Frigate: Enclosure-::}
[Chapter 1: Encounters]
Advisor Flint Clërik (Zac4545) is in command of the RAA Frigate: New Horizon. The ships is admirable among the Synoan people, state of the art shields and weapon systems, along with one of the best cloaking system their technology had to offer. The ship has a peaceful setting to it, with many markings, and symbols to express the great technology of which the military has.
A few Synoan Spec Ops personnel has been assigned to go along on this mission to scout out planets that deemed worthy for colonization. The ship has been in hyperspace for quite some time, the ships radar sends out signals to detect planets that have any signs of life. When the signal returns the ship will stop and head in the direction of where the ping was located. After a few months in hyperspace, a signal has returned.
As the ship heads toward the signal, a meeting has been called among the higher staff to discuss this signal. As they all gather in the room, the specialist who retrieved the signal says to the staff: "This ping that has returned has something very strange about it, it seems to have picked up other signals also." The staff around look at each other with a hesitating face, and Flint speaks out: "I would say we keep moving, it could have been from the Vaktovian system, they're decently close to this sector." The staff agree along with him and do not bother to ask questions. He speaks again and says: "I however, believe we should activate the cloaking system. We wouldn't want any unneeded aggression.
A few days later, the ship halts at a strange planet where the ping had returned from. The planet seems swampy and grim to the eye. The staff all around the ship stare at this planet with a gesture of shock and interest to it. Flint signals the Spec Ops to head down to the planets surface wearing the exosuit. The team leader is Ashlee Havrök, a veteran Spec Ops soldier. The team gets suited up and gets into the Pelican; they're all calm and are not worried about what could be on the planets surface.
[[Not gonna Tl;dr it, I'll post it now so i dont lose my spot.]].. Sorry about that |
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fordo800
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| 31 Jul 2012 12:38 AM |
| You wrote this on your phone. ._. |
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E981
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sillylego
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| 31 Jul 2012 12:39 AM |
Yes
Been nearly 45 minutes now |
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E981
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| 31 Jul 2012 12:40 AM |
| I should make a story sometime. |
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sillylego
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| 31 Jul 2012 12:40 AM |
Oh and E9
I plan on making us both look bad ass |
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| 31 Jul 2012 12:40 AM |
| Why does a frigate have state of the art shields and some of the most advanced technology your clan has to offer? |
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| 31 Jul 2012 12:41 AM |
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=74103826
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| 31 Jul 2012 12:41 AM |
| Its a good story though, I like where its going. |
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sillylego
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| 31 Jul 2012 12:42 AM |
Oh, sorry mr.
Due to the fact its a scouting vessel, we sometimes might encounter hostile forces. |
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| 31 Jul 2012 12:43 AM |
| Hey i just met you, and this is crazy RAA is a clan, so leave it maybe? |
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| 31 Jul 2012 12:44 AM |
I see, but wouldnt you put that stuff on a flagship?
Unless you have a different way of doing things. Please tell me so, if you do. |
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E981
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| 31 Jul 2012 12:44 AM |
| Just keep true to the Octavius Prime lore: nano infection plague. |
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| 31 Jul 2012 12:47 AM |
| O O O O O O O octavians are soo technoliciallyizzz advanced they like try some experiments to boost there capicitiy and liek boom JOVIAN DISEASE BEST STURY EVA |
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sillylego
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| 31 Jul 2012 01:14 AM |
--Continue--
[Chapter 2: Investigation]
After a few hours, the pelican finally reaches the surface. The scouting team steps out of the ship lead by Ashlee into a thick, swampy, heavily vegetated jungle. The team gets in a circle formation, their training is starting to kick in; they all watch eachothers backs and continue into the thicket.
After a few minutes, one of the soldiers decides to admire one of the very beautiful flowers that was sitting on a deathly overgrown tree. The flower is blue, with pink stripes and has 4 very soft looking petals going around it, it seemed to be in an odd place for something as beautiful as it is. When he goes to pick it, the flower snatches his armor with amazing force, it seemed to be crusing his steel plated wrist bracer! He quickly grabs his knife and cuts the flowers stem, after a moment of the plant removed from its nutrient source, it relieves its grip and falls gently onto the green tinted water below him. The team rushes to assist the fellow member, but he seems to have it under control with no injuries thankful for his armor.
As they progress through the heavily vegetated jungle swap, one of the members discovers a cloth that has a strange symbol on it. Ashlee picks it up and investigates the alienated cloth, which is has been in the elements for quote some time and the symbols on the cloth for the most part has faded away. Ashlee says to his soldiers: "I believe gentleman, we're not alone on this planet. The cloth would have went with the planets natural circle, we wouldent have discovered it, if it wasn't lost recently."
They continue into the grim surround, the soldier that was attacked by that flower earlier is a tad shooken up, but he wipes it off and continues on. As they progress, they discover more strange things: statues, broken down machines, and flags with a strange symbol that was no clear as day, with the highlighted sentence "Respect through Allegiance." The soldiers take pictures of the object; and one of the soldiers speaks out using the radio, saying: "I have a feeling we're not alone guys.." he says this very monotone, not seeming like he's very worried of what it might be. |
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sillylego
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Alec3323
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| 31 Jul 2012 01:23 AM |
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Hey i just met you, and this is crazy RAA isn't a clan, so leave it maybe? |
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ClassicIb
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| 31 Jul 2012 01:34 AM |
Weridoooo
If you can dodge a wrench, you can dodge a ball! |
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sillylego
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| 31 Jul 2012 01:45 AM |
--Continue--
As they continue, some of the other soldiers are getting the same chill the first soldier had. Some of them are getting a bit more fiesty and are starting to get taunting of whatever might be following them. They however keep their focus and continue going on, until they eventually hit a seemingly abandoned base. The plant life around it seem to be taking its toll and is starting to tear down the magnificently crafted walls which had numerous symbols and designs crafted into it. Again, they take pictures and one of the soldiers discovers the enterence on their scouting run around it. He pings his location to the other conrad's and they journey inside the broken down base.
As they continue through the base, they start to discover something attacked here, with gaping holes in the wall with a strange glittering dust below it. One soldier takes a sample and continues moving in, eventually one of the soldiers hears a "dink" on the metal floor around the enterence way. He makes haste to tell the others that they're obviously not alone. He raises his guard up and makes his way back towards his brothers in arms.
An hour has passed and they are starting to get annoying something won't reveal themselves, they however, carry on but keep their guards up, watching eachothers backs One of the soldiers finds a locked room, and has strange symbols above the door. Ashlee signals the breaching of the door, they grab a tiny explosive managable to break down even the heaviest of metals. They place the explosive and walk back, bracing themselves for the shock. Ashlee presses the trigger and the blast destroys the door without harming the contents inside. They look around at numerous swords and bows, and the soldier that was attacked by that plant grabs one of the bows and discovers there are no arrows to be found. So he plainly pulls back the string and a green circle surrounds the crosshairs of the bow. He kept it held back and then releases, a green stream goes across the room and easily goes through the heavy metal door. He is flabbergasted, and the other soldiers are in shock of what great power the bow had. He puts it on his back and then uses a sword, when he welds it and green light surrounds the metal around it and he swings with great force at a peice of metal. It goes clean through and he says it felt like butter. |
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ToberDam
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| 31 Jul 2012 01:54 AM |
| Wait, How did RAA manage to get enough active troops to even get them there in the first place? O.o |
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