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| 04 Nov 2013 04:32 PM |
Name- "My name is Tord Austin Brooke. I have no name other than my own." Gender- "Well duh, I'm a guy." Original Faction- "Candor." Your two choices in faction-( Including, are you a Divergent? ) » Divergent, yes.(Would this be fine?) I tested for Dauntless, Candor, and Erudite." Family- "I am an only child, but my mother's name is Anya, and my father is Calus." Personality- "I learned early on that truth wasn't what some of my faction favored, it was manipulation, twisting the truth so that it would appear better." Bio- "What's there to say, I grew up in Candor?" Appearance- "I have the appearance of a normal teenager, I suppose, with dark hair, and pale eyes. My hair is dark, chocolatey brown, and the hair style it is most often worn in is wavy, parted at the side, or if I choose spiky. My eyes are that of a river, always changing in hues of blue, but are always the same in structure; A slight almond shape. I have the appearance of my mother, as I share her structure in being tall and lean. I would say, that by human ethnicity I would be Caucasian, with my pale skin, darker hair, and light eyes. I stand at about 5'11, just an inch shy of 6 feet, and an underweight at 125 pounds. I have a small scar over my left eye. The scar is set into my forehead, and spans about an inch across, though not always visible as it is just a fraction under my hair line. I have a lean build; More accustomed to running then strength-related activities.
Normally I can be found wearing a white v-neck t-shirt and baggy black jeans. I have size 11 grimy dark grey vans shoes. I also have a zip-up black vest."
You follow all the dauntless through the doors, and watch as they run toward the train.
1] Hesitate 2] Cry 3] Run with them |
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| 04 Nov 2013 04:36 PM |
| Tord broke out into a full run, and ran with the others, his clothes streaming out behind him. |
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| 04 Nov 2013 04:40 PM |
| The train glides toward you on steel rails, its light flashing, the door of each car is open. You have to keep up with it. Run, and try to jump into a car. |
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| 04 Nov 2013 04:42 PM |
| Tord ran, hos eyes showing exuberance and something else. He jumped, and manage to grab onto the edge, pulling himself inside. |
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| 04 Nov 2013 04:43 PM |
| When you pull yourself into the train, you see a short Amity girl, who is so close to grabbing on. She shrieks in fear. |
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| 04 Nov 2013 04:45 PM |
| "Hold on!" He shouted, thrusting out his hand, in an attempt to grab her own. |
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| 04 Nov 2013 04:47 PM |
She grabs on tightly, and you pull her up. She breathes heavily, and instantly talks.
"That was rough." She stares at the her hands, they are red. You look down below at the train tracks again, to see a boy, too far behind. The train leaves him. He just became Factionless. |
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| 04 Nov 2013 04:48 PM |
| Tord nodded, then looked back at the boy, "Poor guy.." He murmured softly. |
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| 04 Nov 2013 04:51 PM |
The girl looks in the direction of the guy. "Thanks. For saving me, and all." She grins, and then extends a hand. "Ashley." She says. |
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| 04 Nov 2013 04:52 PM |
| Tord took it, and shook her hand, "Tord," he replied with a crooked grin. |
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| 04 Nov 2013 04:55 PM |
Ashley wears a Yellow shirt, with red jeans. Her shirt is tucked into her pants, and she lets her short hair, up to her shoulder flow out. The train heads toward Dauntless Head Quarters. |
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| 04 Nov 2013 04:57 PM |
| "So, you're from Amity?" He asked, inquiring about her backstory. |
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| 04 Nov 2013 04:58 PM |
"Yes. I needed to get away from all the peace." She laughs, and she sits her back against the train wall. "Candor?" |
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| 04 Nov 2013 05:00 PM |
| He nodded, self-consciously looking down at his clothes. "Yea," he replied, "But I always felt that everything was too...too, Oh, I don't know. Like our clothes, it was all black and white." |
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| 04 Nov 2013 05:02 PM |
"You're talking about colors?" She looks down at her body. "You want to get into that argument?!" She says, with a big smile on her face. |
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| 04 Nov 2013 05:05 PM |
| Tord laughed, holding up his palms, "No, no." He replied with a grin, "I'm fine." |
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| 04 Nov 2013 05:08 PM |
She laughs, and then the train stops suddenly, and we all fall back. Everyone runs, and jumps off the train. Ashley looks terrified. "What the... Jump?!" |
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| 04 Nov 2013 05:10 PM |
| Tord looked down, "We're on a rooftop." He screeched, nervously looking down below. |
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| 04 Nov 2013 05:11 PM |
A Candor rushes past Tord "OUTTA MY WAY!" The candor jumps. "I can... Can..." Ashley begins to look worried. She jumps, and screams. |
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| 04 Nov 2013 05:14 PM |
| Quieting his own fears, Tord took a running start, and jumped. |
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| 04 Nov 2013 05:17 PM |
Landing on a roof, Ashley is curled up into a ball. She holds her arm close. A man, Starts to speak. "Listen up! My name is Max! I am one of the leaders of your new faction!" Shouts a man, at the end of the roof. "Several stories below us is the entrance to our compound. If you cant jump off, you don't belong here." |
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| 04 Nov 2013 05:18 PM |
| Tord started towards her, "Ashley," he whispered, "Hey Ash. You ok?" |
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| 04 Nov 2013 05:22 PM |
"Ugggg..." Ashley gets up slowly. "Yea.. Maybe. Maybe just some scratches. Just scratches." She walks over to max. "Is there like water?" |
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| 04 Nov 2013 05:24 PM |
| He helped her gently to her feet, "We have to jump. You and I, we can jump together." He suggested shyly. |
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| 04 Nov 2013 05:27 PM |
"No water." Ashley looks shocked. She nods at you, and holds your hand slightly. Everyone else is backed up. "First to jump" Ashley says, smiling. |
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