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| 01 Nov 2013 01:45 PM |
| It is due monday. I have started it out, and have a basic outline pretty much of what it is gonna be. It is suppose to be a mystery story, leaving off the killer/perpetrator w/e you wanna call it. So I have made the setting in Napolian Dynamite movie, with a story line similar to heavy rain(the game). I don't know how to start it though. my current start is where they are at the elections and pedro gets shot lol. but in the end napolian dynamite was the killer. so just give me some details on how to start the beginning better and get through the story |
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mrgboard
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| 01 Nov 2013 01:46 PM |
I'll write it for you for some pay.
Took AP English sophomore year |
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| 01 Nov 2013 01:55 PM |
@green
Stop being arrogant, seriously. I know it is easy. But I am asking for opinions. I don't really know how I want to start my paper, that's why I'm asking you. I already did 3 pages of it. |
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fruitshop
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| 01 Nov 2013 01:56 PM |
news report on speech
YOU BLOODY FRUIT SHOP OWNERS |
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| 01 Nov 2013 01:57 PM |
| If you already did 3 pages then how are u starting now, |
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| 01 Nov 2013 01:57 PM |
| Pardon me, but wrong forum maybe? |
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Prowling
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| 01 Nov 2013 02:01 PM |
He began his speech, uneasy, hands sweaty.
boom |
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| 01 Nov 2013 02:11 PM |
| I wrote 3 pages as a rough draft but I don't like the beginning. I feel as though there should be some sort of introduction instead of just them at the speech already |
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