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Re: Any advice for my next story?

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adventuretime08 is not online. adventuretime08
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30 Oct 2013 02:42 PM
Like what should i add?
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XxThundagaxX is not online. XxThundagaxX
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30 Oct 2013 02:44 PM
g-g-g-g-g-g-g-g-ghoooosts!
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adventuretime08 is not online. adventuretime08
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30 Oct 2013 02:44 PM
Hmmm Ok. Anything else?
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XxThundagaxX is not online. XxThundagaxX
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30 Oct 2013 02:45 PM
z-z-z-z-z-z-z-ooombiees!
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adventuretime08 is not online. adventuretime08
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30 Oct 2013 02:46 PM
Ok.. But this really isn't a horror story.
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Thepopon8r is not online. Thepopon8r
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30 Oct 2013 02:47 PM
T-t-t-t-t-talent!




"TEAM POSSUM!
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adventuretime08 is not online. adventuretime08
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30 Oct 2013 02:49 PM
Guys i'm being serious... Give me some ideas
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XxThundagaxX is not online. XxThundagaxX
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30 Oct 2013 02:49 PM
c-c-c-c-c-c-c-c-character development!
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XxThundagaxX is not online. XxThundagaxX
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30 Oct 2013 02:55 PM
Okay that got old.

Write about a news crew that gets to interview kids in Africa, and the main character ( a blonde woman ) bonds with the smaller, bullied kid while reading him a kid's story. The teacher comes over, noticing the little one playing with the main character's hair and says: "That's blonde hair, blondes are just trouble you know!" in all silliness.

Then they get raided, and all the kids have to be evacuated to the bus, so she grabs the kid and runs to the bus with him on her back.

They hear gunfire and shouting, but they make it and everything is okay.

She lays the kid down in the seat next to her, and he says: "Read the story again!" and then slowly closes his eyes.

The bullet shot before they got on the bus was meant for her (the only white one)but hits the small, bullied kid instead. She only finds out after he closes his eyes while they're on the bus, and never opens them again.

After she returns from africa, she remembered what the teacher said, "blondes are only trouble!" and shaves off all of her hair, then goes into a spiraling depression and kills herself.

The end.
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adventuretime08 is not online. adventuretime08
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30 Oct 2013 03:05 PM
What? No!
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XxThundagaxX is not online. XxThundagaxX
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30 Oct 2013 03:07 PM
Okay okay okay.

I have a tendency to write sad stories.

Write about a girl who- OH NO. That's way too dark.

Okay, what about that one where... nooooo... not that one.

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XxThundagaxX is not online. XxThundagaxX
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30 Oct 2013 03:09 PM
I got nothing.
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adventuretime08 is not online. adventuretime08
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30 Oct 2013 03:10 PM
No. Tell me the dark one. And make sure it's ROBLOX related.Or at least make it ROBLOX related...
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Thepopon8r is not online. Thepopon8r
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30 Oct 2013 03:19 PM
Here's a suggestion.

WRITE ABOUT STORIES THAT DON'T HAVE TO DO WITH ROBLOX.




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XxThundagaxX is not online. XxThundagaxX
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30 Oct 2013 03:24 PM
A girl moves in to Pine Woods.

This girl finds every teacher, counselor, and student besides her act immensely strange. They all love, Patrisha Waters. She has never met her yet, and she didn't intend to because she sounded like one of those 'popular girls'

Later she finds out that Patrisha is controlling all of the students, making them do... *cough* things to her. So all of the school and town are all sax-slaves to this one girl.

The main character walks in on all of them, and goes like "omg wtf" and starts to run away.

But two guys under patrisha's spell grab her and do unspeakable things to main character now.

after that, she gets infected, and becomes one of them.

The end.

(Keep in mind that I think these up while bored in class or whatever, most of them suck but I do have my gems.)
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30 Oct 2013 03:52 PM
Thunda.

Please post this uncensored on something.




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XxThundagaxX is not online. XxThundagaxX
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30 Oct 2013 03:54 PM
Lol, noooo thanks.
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adventuretime08 is not online. adventuretime08
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30 Oct 2013 06:34 PM
... No. i already started the story.
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LordGleam is not online. LordGleam
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30 Oct 2013 08:33 PM
thunda
that first one
did you come up with that yourself
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aznguyitran is not online. aznguyitran
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30 Oct 2013 09:22 PM
Just enjoy story
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bud390 is not online. bud390
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30 Oct 2013 10:34 PM
Idk, but i just finished my short story about a man and a mute girl. I enjoyed writing it
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adventuretime08 is not online. adventuretime08
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30 Oct 2013 10:35 PM
Heres the link to it (Next post) I'm doing 2 chapters everyday,1 chapter on Halloween.
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adventuretime08 is not online. adventuretime08
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30 Oct 2013 10:36 PM
http://web.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=116796019
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aznguyitran is not online. aznguyitran
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30 Oct 2013 10:42 PM
wow good job with those stories adventure.
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swiftattak7 is not online. swiftattak7
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30 Oct 2013 10:55 PM
Damit I was too late.
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