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Beautiful.
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Inspiring, catchy, I like it
9/9

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What Ctou said.
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I agree with Ctou. Still better then most of my other poems.
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I expected something cliche and awful, but I liked it.

Nice work.
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10/10

deep bro
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as somebody who was awake in literature class:

inconsistent meter and lack of emphiasis wording
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