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rike4321
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| 22 Oct 2013 06:56 PM |
Inspiring, catchy, I like it 9/9
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Ctou
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| Joined: 27 Mar 2013 |
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Ctou
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| Joined: 27 Mar 2013 |
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Dragonelz
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| 22 Oct 2013 07:06 PM |
7/10 I agree with Ctou. Still better then most of my other poems. |
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| 22 Oct 2013 07:07 PM |
I expected something cliche and awful, but I liked it.
Nice work. |
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Riku1257
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lava3321
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| 22 Oct 2013 07:13 PM |
as somebody who was awake in literature class:
inconsistent meter and lack of emphiasis wording |
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