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| 16 Oct 2013 07:11 PM |
Farseer- A school of young adults, children, and more who have to learn to predict the future.
Humanity would be doomed without it, with constant attacks from a barbaric race of arachnoid.
The remainder of Humanity lives on one massive 5 kilometer ship, dating back thousands of years. A small amount of people can live on it due to limited space, however, and everybody is part-time farmers.
How humanity became how it was will be revealed when the students learn about the tendrils of time.
There are no weapons on the ship, and no weapons can be researched. They can use powerswords, swords with a field of energy around them, and laser pistols that smash apart a human, but they barley effect the archanoid species. They have to live by hiding, mostly.
The art of farseering is a rare genetic defect, though it's more than a defect. It allows to to interact with time itself, seeing into the very future.. and past.
In order to stay in order, there are multiple paths, the names self explanatory: Path of the Warrior (gaurds), Path of the Serviceman (cooks, janitors, etc..) Path of the Farseer (derp wats dat), Path of the Full-Time-Farmer.. etc
How is it so far? It's just notes right now, though I'll invite trusted people for a piratepad. |
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| 16 Oct 2013 07:16 PM |
"path of the serviceman"
i'm in |
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| 16 Oct 2013 07:18 PM |
| you seem to really like maids and stuff.. |
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| 16 Oct 2013 07:19 PM |
Since the ship is a essential plot element, the destruction of the ship is pretty much impossible and all tension is removed because there is no chance of failure.
The concept is great; though the fact that you can not really fight back effectively is assurance that the thread will die out faster. |
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| 16 Oct 2013 07:39 PM |
@parry
don't forget janitors and mailmen
anyways i do like the concept, if we develop it a bit more im sure it'll work out |
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