StanAdam
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| 15 Oct 2013 02:36 PM |
Please check for mistakes and correct them.
What I wrote in French: Bonjour. Je m'appelle Adam. J'ai [AGE TAKEN OUT FOR MY SAFETY] ans et mon anniversaire est le vingt novembre. Je né en automne, à [HOSPITAL TAKEN OUT FOR MY SAFETY] en Angleterre. Je suis anglais (mais je suis 1/4 de seychellois parce que ma grand-mère est née aux Seychelles). J'habite en Angleterre, à [CITY TAKEN OUT FOR MY SAFETY], en ville. J'ai les yeux noisette et j'ai les cheveux brun foncé. Je suis de taille moyenne et je suis bavard et marrant mais parfois je suis timide.
What I mean by it: Hello. My name is Adam. I am [SAFETY] years old and my birthday is November 20th. I was born in fall/autumn, in [SAFETY] in England. I am English (but I'm a quarter Seychellois because my grandmother was born in the Seychelles). I live in England, in [SAFETY], in the city/town. I have hazel eyes and I have dark brown hair. I'm average height and I'm talkative and funny but sometimes I'm shy. |
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| 15 Oct 2013 02:40 PM |
and before you tell me "no seriously i need to know if its good"
i take french too
it actually looks pretty good
i dont know all the vocab in there but other than that it's good |
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StanAdam
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| 15 Oct 2013 02:40 PM |
Thanks, orlorx2222.
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Cool2353
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| 15 Oct 2013 02:40 PM |
NOT BAD AT ALL....
Lime is like the "Mini-Mutated" version of Lemon. I AM A TWO-FACED NEWBAG. |
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StanAdam
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| 15 Oct 2013 02:41 PM |
Merci!
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| 15 Oct 2013 02:41 PM |
| idiot just use freaking google translate. |
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StanAdam
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| 15 Oct 2013 02:42 PM |
Google Translate doesn't work properly. Everyone, please don't trust it.
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| 15 Oct 2013 02:42 PM |
Okay, i think you got it right. I took your french words and translated them (With my mind) to english-
hello. my name is adam. I [age taken out for my safety] years old and my birthday is November 20. I was born in fall, [hospital taken out for my safety] England. I am English (but I'm 1/4 of Seychelles because my grandmother was born in the Seychelles). I live in England, in [city taken out for my safety] in town. I have hazel eyes and I have dark brown hair. I'm average height and I'm talkative and funny but sometimes I'm shy |
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StanAdam
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| 15 Oct 2013 02:43 PM |
Thanks, TheLabScientist. I appreciate it.
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mothimas2
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| 15 Oct 2013 02:48 PM |
"Je né en automne"
If your a first time french speaker/writer, this is ok, but in the future, you might want to use the past tense for this phrase.
"J'ai né en automne"
meaning "I was born in automne.
Otherwise, all is well for you. |
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StanAdam
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| 15 Oct 2013 02:51 PM |
@mothimas2
Merci beaucoup! :D
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StanAdam
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| 16 Oct 2013 01:40 PM |
Bump. I need to make sure it's seen.
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Detailers
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| 16 Oct 2013 01:45 PM |
tl;dr
short version: Bonjour. :3 |
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