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Re: The Last Communication (creepypasta)

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Comander116 is not online. Comander116
Joined: 14 Feb 2009
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11 Oct 2013 11:34 PM
Hello! for those of you who are familiar with Star Wars you may remember the old Anime Micro series called Star Wars Clone Wars, well recently i got a hold of a never-released Lost Episode for that series titled "The Last Communication" the picture on the DVD was of Anakin Skywalker, Ki-adi-mudi, Commander Cody, and Captain Fordo fighting off what appeard to be Zombiefied Clone Troopers, without any hassatation i put the DVD into the DVD player, it went to the selection screen, i selected the "Play Movie" button, then it started out normal, same music alot of nastalgia came over me, however, something went weird, instead of showing familiar face's it went to what looked like an abandoned star cruiser, then it went to a Rough Jedi, who mutterd the words "They called me evil, we'll see who's evil when ZED is released..hehehahaha!" after that the movie went to a screen that said "Meanwhile" it then went to a Republic Venator-Class Star Destroyer, it looked brand new from the cartoon detail, then it focused on Captain Fordo and Commander Cody! "Hows the search for that missing Venator going?" Commander Cody asked with a grin, "Oh pretty good i guess, my crew here are working hard to find it!" Captain Fordo respounded with his helmet on, next the "Red Alert" syran came on and the Clones were all over the place, then one of Fordo's Radio Opperator's found out what the problume was. "Sir i think we found our missing Venator" the Radio Opperator stated, Commander Cody went to the Hanger Bay to inform Anakin Skywalker and Ki-adi-mudi about their discovery. "Hmm...i see, we need to send a search party on that venator if there is to be any hope as to finding out what happend to that ship" Mudi said, after that Commander Cody respounded with "Yes Sir!" then left the room and went back to the bridge, after Fordo was informed of the orders he took 5 of his Arc Troopers and 6 of some random regular Clone Troopers to explore the "supposed" Abandoned Venator, after a while of seeing Clone Troopers walk around a Star Cruiser and not finding anything, i got bored, thats when things went... creepy, a blast door opened and some Clone Troopers went in it, in side it was a big room, it was a mess, there was blood on the walls and on the floor, along with some body parts and entrails, one of the Clone Troopers vometed at the sight of all that, then a blast door opened in front of them, and what walked in was another Clone Trooper, a Captain or Commander by the look of it, he was holding a sharp knife in his hand the knife had dried blood on it, the Cloone Troopers helmet and armor were scratched, coverd in blood, and had some dust on it, the Clones helmet was zoomed in on, his visor was broken revealing his face, his face was scared, and burnet, his eyes were hyper-realistic, which is strange because this was an animated cartoon, his eyes were black with red dots for the puples, the Clone Troopers shot at what they thought was a Trandoshan in Clone Trooper armor, the blaster fire hit the creature, but all it did was enrage it, it cut the Clone Troopers down to size, afterwards the surviving Clone Troopers including Captain Fordo returned to their Venator, after informing the Jedi that they didnt find anything the Clones decided to take more troopers back to the abandoned ventor so they can cover more ground, at this point Commander Cody, Anakin Skywalker, Ki-adi-mudi, and Captain Fordo all board the Venator with more Clone Troopers. "Ok we need to get to the bridge of this venator if we're going to find out what happend here!" Captain Fordo said, after awhile the screen got static, then went back to normal, it then focus's on that same Rough Jedi this time he says something scary "So the Jedi want to play do they? well im sure they also want to...GO TO SLEEP!!" the Rough Jedi pushed a button and gas was released into the area where a large amount of Clone Troopers were, the gas appeared to have killed the Clones, the screen then flashes to a Clone Trooper (possibly fron the now abondoned Venator) who is being held up by a hook, his armor is torn, his helmet is broken revealing his mangled face, and he appears to have lost some skin, the screen flashes back to the Jedi. "So Anakin what do you belive happend here?" Mudi asked with a confused look. "Smugglers, Trandoshans, Bounty Hunters, and/or Battle Droids" Anakin reasponed with a concerned look. the screen then goes to Captain Fordo, Commader Cody, and their Troops. "So sir's where is the bridge?" a random Arc Trooper asked, "Hmm...it should be through that blast door!" Captain Fordo pointed to a blast door at the end of the hall, the Clones moved to the blast doors passing dead Clone Troopers, and broken pieces, after getting to the blast door the Clones opend the doors and got into the lift, apon reaching the bridge, the Clones were shocked by the horror they saw! there were dead Clone Troopers all over the place, all killed in the most grotest ways, most of them had their entrails laying on the ground, shacking off the scene the Clone Troopers got all the ships data and sent it to their Venator, opon that toxic gas was released all over the ship, only half of the Clones were affected by it, afterwards the Clones aboard the main Venator found something strange, as it turns out a Rough Jedi by the name of Jarek stole the Venator and useing his creation he killed all the Clone Troopers and took the Venator over, however the toxic gas also got aboard the main Venator, all aboard it were infected and died, after that a Scout was sent to find "ZED" the creation of Jarek they hoped that maybe ZED would put a light on the mystery, however the Scout returned with ZED but ZED was dead the Scout said he found ZED's body in one of the closed off areas, then the most scariest thing happend, those Clones that died along with ZED, the Jedi and Clones were forced into a battle for survival, however only Anakin, Mudi, Commander Cody, and Captain Fordo lived to tail the tale, however before they left the Venator, one last communication was made, it said "You win! i Jarek The Rough, Shall be dead! p.s Anakin, you will end up just like me BWHAHAHAHA!!!!" the video ended and at the very end of the end credits were the words "The Last Communication" i had no idea what it meant but right after i stopped the DVD i could have swore i heard the words "I go by the name of ZED!" i have no idea what that meant......
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aznguyitran is not online. aznguyitran
Joined: 23 Jul 2006
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12 Oct 2013 04:09 AM
10/10 with story
but put with paragraphs next time please.
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Comander116 is not online. Comander116
Joined: 14 Feb 2009
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12 Oct 2013 04:35 AM
k! will do! P.S this is so far my first creepypasta the doesnt invalve ponies at all!
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aznguyitran is not online. aznguyitran
Joined: 23 Jul 2006
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12 Oct 2013 04:38 AM
Yes I noticed

But i would of read it anyway

still great :P
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GoodChiuaua is not online. GoodChiuaua
Joined: 22 May 2010
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12 Oct 2013 01:50 PM
good job command :3
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Comander116 is not online. Comander116
Joined: 14 Feb 2009
Total Posts: 152
12 Oct 2013 03:12 PM
thanks! its not 100% complete but its still good!
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GoodChiuaua is not online. GoodChiuaua
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12 Oct 2013 03:32 PM
i like the direction ur taking it :P
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