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| 29 Sep 2013 11:44 PM |
On a scale from 1-10, also constructive criticism would be appreciated.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O7ZmKd8F-0Q&feature=youtu.be |
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| 29 Sep 2013 11:45 PM |
Title fix: Rate my video.*
The title makes me sound like a 7 year old.. |
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| 30 Sep 2013 03:34 AM |
7.5/10 - Good For a beginner film maker
------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Youtube: Jack Z-A (300,000 Views) (1.5K Subs) Z-A Studios, The Biggest Film Studio on Roblox- |
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| 30 Sep 2013 06:56 AM |
8/10, your the only one that knows how to edit videos like a real film maker.
Not like the other ones in our group :) Keep up the work. |
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| 30 Sep 2013 06:59 AM |
I forgot to add my constructive criticism.
I don't know if does are free models ( I HAVE NOTHING AGAINST FREE MODELS ) but creating your own models would show simplicity and originality to your videos. For me, I try to make my own but if I can't make it ( like a car ) then I'd just use free models. |
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| 30 Sep 2013 07:00 AM |
Thats some very nice edit work, my only advice would be, maybe add some sound effects rather than just the music.
Very well done though. |
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| 30 Sep 2013 02:17 PM |
| Thank you to the both of you! And next time I will make sure to hire a builder/scripted so I can stop using free models (I can't build for crap :p) |
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| 30 Sep 2013 08:59 PM |
Abysmal. By the way, not all people that dislike your video are trolls. |
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| 30 Sep 2013 09:57 PM |
| some r some arents i give it a 5.9 |
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| 01 Oct 2013 06:26 AM |
@youtube I know that, but just the way he put "-9" and no criticism on how the videos can improve pretty much means he probably didn't watch it, and he's just here to leave a hate comment. I don't care if people don't like my videos, but maybe if they tell me why, than I can try to improve it so maybe then they can like them, that would be better instead of just saying "-9" or in your case "abysmal" |
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| 01 Oct 2013 06:59 PM |
7.5/10
Rather then using large stretches of music through the entire video, try using sound effects (As mentioned above). Also try using voices. That would make the video look more realistic.
Kthxbai. |
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| 01 Oct 2013 10:05 PM |
@dark Thanks, but I'm not much of a voice actor heh |
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| 02 Oct 2013 12:15 AM |
Hmm, the camera points aren't bad at all. The dialogue seems a little unnatural especially the monologue when he receives his power from the 'Power Core', also he sounds a little arrogant and the part where he has to fight the guards just sounds like a cliched anime and why did they tell him where the power core would be if they ultimately didn't want him to have the power core seems like a plot hole.
There are some parts where I see the cropping was done correctly although the editing seems nice. The last scene could have been played out better I like how a lot of things in fact weren't answered seeing this is a two part but like I said before, the dialogue seems unnatural now this can be a bad thing seeing how with a lot of ROBLOX films we can't allow on actual emotion to be put in the usual face or tears so we have to rely on the dialogue to make people feel that emotion.
So, overall this seems like a good series not many bad things about it and about the dialogue I think it could actually be a lot better if you transition it right and have it for a certain amount of time. I give it a 6.5/10 it is definitely way better than what I usually see and I am interested I want to see the next episode and the ones before this one there is a couple of plot holes and editing mishaps but the script and the idea doesn't seem bad it is actually really good. One thing that I do have to praise you on is your directing skills nothing was delayed the actors are doing the best they can with the roles they are given and I hope to see more from you. |
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| 02 Oct 2013 07:16 AM |
@Cool Thank you so much! I will make sure to keep your points in mind, and I agree the dialogue could be a lot better, I'll work on it next time and make sure things make a bit more sense. But thanks for all the tips!
@sonic Thanks for the rate! :). |
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| 02 Oct 2013 06:01 PM |
Nice vid it made me watch the whole series!!! 10/10 |
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