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alexrace is not online. alexrace
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29 Sep 2013 03:42 PM
My Poem of Life.
By AlexRace

Been at that age when,
You go to the park daily,
And play with any kid
Whatsoever-
Who goes there that day.

That day,
When you didn't mind,
Going to school,
Since it was easy and fun,
Since all your Best mates,
Were there already.

That day,
When it all changes.
Soon as you hit the double digits,
Those days are long gone,
Life hits you.

Remember when you were young,
And your dream was to get older,
To have responsibilities,
To do what you want,
When you want.

When you hit the double digits,
Life hits you.

You stop going to the park daily,
With that same excuse;
"Can't today, got homework."
Or that day when you dread,
Going to school,
Due to homework which you never did,
A test which you didn't study for.
Or that one kid,
Who bullies you.

When we were younger,
We'd play with any kid in the park,
Without a care in the world.
Nowadays, everyone's;
"STRANGER DANGER"
What's a 6 year old going to do to you?
Stab you with his sippie-cup?

I remember the days,
When I'd go to the park,
Everyday,
And every night, day-to-dawn,
I'd play,
At night my mum will call my name,
I'd say;
"Night Lads!" and run home.

Now I can't leave home without my phone,
I now have a set time to go home,
I don't understand what happened,
To the days when,
I felt cool playing on the slide or with my new coloring pencils,
Now little kids think their cool since they have a 300quid phone.

Growing up has it's good points as well though,
You get the friends who will help you through anything,
You know who's not worth it,
And finally, that one who you want to live the rest of your life with.

Life's Poem,


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29 Sep 2013 03:46 PM
Tips? I want it to be the best to work on for Draft 3#
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29 Sep 2013 03:48 PM
I seriously want feedback! COMMON
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29 Sep 2013 03:50 PM
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