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| 21 Sep 2013 10:36 AM |
| The cold,Un-moving floor beneath my feet.I stand In my launch room,Thinking About How I Will Probably Die Within The next Few Minuets.A small Beep Signaling me To enter My Glass tube Sends Shivers Up my spine.I stand In the enclosed space,Looking back At my stylist,Court2000.I Am Nova,And 3 Years ago,Roblox turned,The popularity Became overwhelming in Roblox,And Now,Its a Real event,If we die here,We Die forever,Not like the old days,no Respawn,I wonder how It feels to die.My tube then starts to rise,I stare at Court,She has Helped Prepare me,But Now she has to Let me Go into this game.I Am from District 7,And I have a Pre-Alliance With my Friends Who I knew Before All this. Trusty23456,And SomEmoNsTEr.I have others,but I was Unable To Ally with them,they Have there Teams,And I have mine. The small space fills With natural Air,And I am surrounded by light.Everything comes Into Focus,I Can Eye trusty From here,I see starz4ever,Ryanbaxter,Skysurvivor22,and iPurplez,Those Are All the people I can name from my Spot,the cornucopia Shines in the Bright sun,Silver and Pointed,the countdown Has Reached 45.And my Heart pounds Even faster.I Scan,All I see Is Thick jungle,no water,And the circle Clearing of Grass I am placed in.I eye an Axe and some throwing Knives,A backpack,they Will be mine,Im a fast Runner.the countdown Ticks,5...4...3...2...1.The games have begun.A thundering Gong Sounds and I step of my pedestal And Sprint for the Supplies.Someone Comes up behind me,I turn and Swing the bag at there head,they drop,not dead,Its Shinxfur.I cant kill her,So I run,I see SomE running at Yelling with Rubytoooo I wanted her On our team,Shes a close friend,But We where Unable to find her,Now is are chance,I catch up with the Two and We run to the forest,I look back At Trusty's Body,I Think Hes dead,But I see people Slaughtering Each other here and there.I see jadeyn1 Take a knife to the arm,And Catch a glimpse of ZaraTiger,she Chopped SheMouse's Head off,A gruesome sight.Me Some and Ruby,Make it Deep into the brush. And with followers,Maddie867 Swings a Spear at SomE's Head,With one Move,Ruby Kindly Shoves a Knife In her eye Socket.I hear the cannon,And Grab the Supplies Off of her body.We keep moving,And Keep looking around Searching For my Next Chance to Defend,SomE's Next chance To Make ally's and ruby's Next chance to rip someones Eyes out. -End of chapter one- |
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ann510287
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| 21 Sep 2013 10:36 AM |
| fanfiction aaaaaa my eyes it burns |
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iceywind
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| 21 Sep 2013 10:36 AM |
| Learn how to use the proper punctuation and grammar, and go post this in OT. |
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| 21 Sep 2013 10:38 AM |
I would have enjoyed this better if you hadn't Capitalized Every Word, placed in a million unnecessary commas, and learned how to press the "enter" key every once in a while.
The inner machinations of my mind are an enigma. |
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| 21 Sep 2013 10:50 AM |
| Great job Nova don't listen to the haters .3. |
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| 21 Sep 2013 10:51 AM |
| WOW,MAde this 10 mins ago and Ive already been Insulted and Raiged at c: |
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| 21 Sep 2013 12:13 PM |
| OH HAIL TO THE NO! I can not Die already! I am flawless and amazing. One does not simply kill Trusty23456 that easily. |
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rubytoooo
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| 21 Sep 2013 01:47 PM |
Out. NOW.
I think you should read the rules before your section ends up being banned.
ⓊⓝⓘⓥⓔⓡⓢⓐⓛⓄⓑⓙⓔⓒⓣ |
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DippPines
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| 22 Sep 2013 10:21 AM |
| Good Story Nova! Dont Listen to The Haters They are Noobs |
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| 22 Sep 2013 10:29 AM |
| My grammar really is Suckish though |
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iceywind
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| 22 Sep 2013 10:38 AM |
"Good Story Nova! Dont Listen to The Haters They are Noobs" Says the user that joined three years after I did, you fail kid. |
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| 22 Sep 2013 10:38 AM |
too short
Join our forum! : http://awesomestudiosrbx.freeforums.net/ |
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| 26 Sep 2013 04:38 PM |
| No one cares about your Overage and how you still play roblox. |
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Voltorb56
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| 26 Sep 2013 04:40 PM |
| Too many commas. Who taught you LA? |
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moshai
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| 26 Sep 2013 04:41 PM |
| i read better stories on the back of an instructon manuel that was in chinesse |
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| 26 Sep 2013 05:07 PM |
| It's funny people say this is OT becuase it aint :P |
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jackson61
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| 26 Sep 2013 05:39 PM |
It isn't OT. But he could learn grammar and learn to press enter every few sentences. This is his word wall:
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iceywind
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| 27 Sep 2013 05:30 PM |
| @timmysucks32, this was in All Things ROBLOX. |
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