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Re: Crash Landing - Uncharted

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coolcoolkidcheseey45 is not online. coolcoolkidcheseey45
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21 Sep 2013 06:46 AM
This is a repost of my RP called "The Unknown" that didn't really do well. You don't HAVE to read this line of story text, but it'll let you understand the RP a bit better.

(TL;DR version: your plane crashes and you're on an uncharted island.)

This is about your plane crashing in an unknown area. You were on your way back from a school trip/field trip/whateveryouguyscallthem.
(This may be a bit "scary" for young people, be warned.)
CUE OPENING STORY!

You look out your window, tired. It's dark. You can see the plane's wing, and sea. Endless amounts of sea. You get out your iPod, and put in your headphones. Before you have time to play music, you see a flash of light. You look out your window, confused. You see a storm. You're flying into a storm. It looks bad. You can see the bolts of lightning and hear the cracks of thunder. You shrug it off and try and reassure yourself. 'It's nothing,' you think to yourself, 'it's only a tiny storm.' While you're putting on your seat belt, you hear the captain's voice on the speakers. "We are flying into a storm, please fasten your seat belts. Everything is going to be fine." You yawn and finish fastening your seat belt.
Then you put a song on, turn up the volume, and shut your eyes. You sleep.
*CRACK*
You wake up to a loud noise. You're in the storm. You look outside just in time to see a bolt of lightning hit the wing. You gasp as you see the engine ignite. The plane starts to veer uncontrollably to the right. The speakers go off again, and the captain says "We've lost an engine. Everything will be fine, we have to make an emergency la-" You hear the sound of glass smashing and screaming through the speakers. You look to your left to see panicking passengers. You notice the left wing is on fire, too. The plane starts to point down, first a little bit, then almost vertical. Stuff goes flying everywhere. You see someone falling, and hear his legs breaking. You look away, disgusted, and look at your friend. He's screaming, too. After 20 seconds of this chaos, the plane smashes into water. The doors are opened, only to let the rushing water into the plane. Oxygen masks pop down from the ceiling. You decide - you have to get out.

You quickly unbuckle your seat belt, grab a few items, and shout at your friend to follow. He shakes his head. "COME ON!" You shout, "LET'S GO ALREADY!" He won't go. He's frozen with fear. You unbuckle his seat belt and force him out. You then start to go towards the door, half carrying, half dragging your friend. "Hold your breath!" You shout, then you dive in. You drag your friend with you, then after 10 seconds of being submerged, of total darkness, you surface. You look back at the plane, a burning wreck. People escape and get on these lifeboat things. You climb onto one. Someone seems to be shouting at people, trying to get everyone out and everything arranged. People go onto the lifeboats - but they soon run out of space.

One guy, a particularly large, muscly guy, comes up to you. "Off you get." He says in a very deep, booming voice. You shake your head. He says again, "Off you get!" but with a little more anger. You shake your head again, then he picks you up by the neck. You start to struggle, clawing at his hands that are stopping your air supply. You feel weak. He throws you overboard. A couple of passengers notice this and start attacking him. You fall into the sea, tired, exhausted, and you don't have the strength to swim. You try, and keep on trying to resurface. It's no good. You black out.

*Sometime later*


You wake up, and see everyone on a desert island. You're on the lifeboat again, beached on the island. You get up and join the others.


WOW THAT WAS LONG.
OKAY.

Time for the C.S.

Name:
@ge:(10+)
Physical appearance:
Clothing appearance:
Gender:
Biography:(optional)
Items:
Other:(Anything I missed?)
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coolcoolkidcheseey45 is not online. coolcoolkidcheseey45
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21 Sep 2013 11:39 AM
Bump.
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coolcoolkidcheseey45 is not online. coolcoolkidcheseey45
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22 Sep 2013 04:23 AM
Bump. If you guys like it, I'll make it into a book, including your replies. :D



"When life hands you lemons, GET MAD! I don't want your damn lemons!" - Cave Johnson, Portal 2.
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timpookie is not online. timpookie
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22 Sep 2013 04:24 AM
This is a rip-off of Dex10awesome's "The Island".
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coolcoolkidcheseey45 is not online. coolcoolkidcheseey45
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22 Sep 2013 04:38 AM
Name: Jack Smith
@ge:(10+) 15
Physical appearance: Normal height, grey/green eyes, slightly muscular, brown hair, fringe swept sidewards.
Clothing appearance: Black shirt, cargo trousers, and watch that's slightly damaged from the crash.
Gender: Male
Biography:(optional) His mum and dad died in a plane crash (ironic), is fostered by James and Aleks Smith. His mum and dad were fairly wealthy, and left a lot of money in his will. Using this money, he took archery lessons and has bought a good bow and arrows. He also knows how to craft a bow. He also took fencing lessons. He lives in a fairly large house with some land. He also knows first aid.
Items: Mobile phone (cell phone), food, water, games device, and a first aid kit. Salvaged a broken bow, quiver, and a couple of arrows from his suitcase that he made on the school trip.
(New addition to C.S!)
Pros: Good with a bow and melee, strong, good eyesight.
Cons: His hearing isn't as good, and he can get hungry/thirsty easily.
Injuries: A graze to his right arm is currently bleeding lightly, has some scrapes on his face, and a burn wound on his left leg.
Other:(anything I've missed?)
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coolcoolkidcheseey45 is not online. coolcoolkidcheseey45
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22 Sep 2013 04:38 AM
@Tim, um, it's a version like it.
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timpookie is not online. timpookie
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22 Sep 2013 04:39 AM
To be honest, I'm surprised that your immediate action wasn't to say "Who's Dex10awesome?"
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coolcoolkidcheseey45 is not online. coolcoolkidcheseey45
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22 Sep 2013 04:41 AM
I think read some of his RP and it inspired me to make this. And I can't find his RP anywhere? Has it died or something?
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timpookie is not online. timpookie
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22 Sep 2013 07:02 AM
It hasn't even taken off. He was posting the half-finished copy that he and eight other people were working on for about two months.
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JoshWesty is not online. JoshWesty
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22 Sep 2013 07:19 AM
Crash Landing RP's=Cliche

Done here.
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timpookie is not online. timpookie
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22 Sep 2013 07:19 AM
Then I guess you haven't seen The Island.
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