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| 21 Sep 2013 08:11 PM |
The mother kissed her newborn baby,alliona,on the cheeck one last time before knocking on the door of a nearby orphanage and running off.The mother knew she wouldn't be able to raise a child,so she decided to leave her baby at the doorstep of the nimborn orphanage. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Alliona sighed,thinking about his mother as he walked the streets of town.He'd known this town like the back of his own hand.It wasn't often he got to leave the orphanage when he was little,but he got to know the streets,nooks,and crannies of this town anyhow. |
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| 21 Sep 2013 08:16 PM |
| Alliona stopped when he reached the town's bar.He would come here often,and had even made friends with the bartender,allowing him to score some free gin every now and then.His bartender friend,james,tried to strike up a coversation with him,but alliona had told him he..he didn't feel like socializing today.His head was too full of thoughts of his mom.He often pondered about who she was,why she left him,or if she was even still alive.When he was a child,alliona had high hopes of meeting his mother someday,but he was no longer a child.He was a grown man and it was time to face the facts:he would NEVER have a mother,as badly as he wanted one. |
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| 21 Sep 2013 08:20 PM |
| Alliona bought an entire bottle of gin and walked back to his home.He lived in an old aparment building,which was infested with all kinds of critters.Alliona didn't seem to mind ,though.As far as he was concerned,all he needed was a place to stay,a good job,food,and water,and he'd be alright. |
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| 21 Sep 2013 08:25 PM |
| Alliona drank a bit of gin,and walked to his room.He plopped down,onto his bed,and fell asleep.Sleep often helped alliona clear his mind of his mother,as did gin.Other than james,all he had was gin.He didn't get drunk often,however.Even though he had no parents to scold him for getting drunk,he didn't wnat to have that lifestyle. |
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| 21 Sep 2013 08:26 PM |
| (replies are welcome,tell me what you think of my writing skills,and please,keep in mind,i am writing this on the spot,so if some parts aren't as good as others,you'll know why ^_^ thanks-sniper) |
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| 21 Sep 2013 08:29 PM |
| Alliona woke that evening,ready for work.He'd work the nightshift at a factory,which paid little,but yet enough to sustain alliona.His co-workers weren't the friendliest people around,but hey,he couldn't change em',right?This was the one thing he hated most.The fact that no matter how hard he tried,he couldn't change people,meaning if he HATED someone to thier very core,he'd have to grind his teeth and deal with it. |
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| 21 Sep 2013 08:39 PM |
| Today,the strange feeling returned to alliona.It was as if a volcano had formed in the very core of him,and it was ready to erupt.Alliona wasn't sure how to deal with this feeling,or what exactly it meant,so he just lived with it.The feeling didn't occurr often,but it still felt...well,he didn't know.It felt good..and bad at the same time.It was..confusing....very..confusing. |
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| 21 Sep 2013 08:48 PM |
| (Grammar could be better.) |
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