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Wuten
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| 28 Aug 2013 04:51 PM |
i'll read this to my grandchildren
20/10
~http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BvZgzDiBFYQ |
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ObsideanZ
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whats164
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| 28 Aug 2013 04:53 PM |
@obsid
No I actually don't but I enjoy writing. This is the reason I try to write semi-decent bonuses. |
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PugglePie
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| 28 Aug 2013 04:53 PM |
oh god what
dont you dare make one with me
i will set up lego bricks glued to your house's floor, put so many spider eggs in your house, then laugh
go step on a lego brick |
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Unication
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| 28 Aug 2013 04:54 PM |
10/10
My body was sweating a lot while reading this.
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=109335024 <-- Please support this for OT. --- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hod0WtYE4SA <-- What's really good!?!?!? |
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| 28 Aug 2013 04:55 PM |
@unication
Oh i know it was ;) |
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calao11
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| 28 Aug 2013 04:57 PM |
| you should find a random oter x emilylacee |
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| 28 Aug 2013 04:57 PM |
@calao THANKS SO MUCH it took me like 30 minutes because my mom walked into the room so I couldn't type the rest until she left |
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| 28 Aug 2013 04:57 PM |
sounds too much like: this happened. that happened. this happened
some awkward language which suggests you didn't read over it
but less mistakes than most roblox stories
you didn't overuse adjectives
the story was fine |
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PugglePie
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| 28 Aug 2013 04:58 PM |
i hate that
when im typing something (not really bad, but i dont want my mom to see it) and she walks in then i have to stop doing it and go in another tab
i will say though, you are a pretty good writer, no matter how much this disturbs me
go step on a lego brick |
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| 28 Aug 2013 04:59 PM |
@iimad
yeah this one was kinda hard to write. I didn't read it over since I was already taking forever to post it and I didn't want Calao to go offline. I did more proofreading with my Richie bonus |
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calao11
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| 28 Aug 2013 04:59 PM |
| seriously I can't stop laughing at this omg ily op |
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| 28 Aug 2013 05:00 PM |
@calao
YOU ACTUALLY LAUGHED?
omgomg this is an amazing OT moment |
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calao11
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| 28 Aug 2013 05:01 PM |
| YES I WAS LAAUGHING like an idiot realy loudly and stuff omg |
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| 28 Aug 2013 05:01 PM |
this is one of my best OT days
/tracking |
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Wuten
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| 16 Sep 2013 07:59 PM |
still quality thread to this day imo
wнaт'ѕ good ιn тнe нood |
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Laieka
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| 16 Sep 2013 08:00 PM |
ahhh yes the good old days
ʳᵒˣᵇᵘʳʸ ʳᵉᵖᵖᶦᶰ' |
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Laieka
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| 16 Sep 2013 08:13 PM |
bumping for jack
ʳᵒˣᵇᵘʳʸ ʳᵉᵖᵖᶦᶰ' |
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