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| 15 Sep 2013 04:18 PM |
It will be FREE, PROFESSIONAL writing. I will write any of these.
- Articles (groups, persuasive advertisement, review) - Guidelines (groups) - Description (game, groups) - Other things
I will not write any fan fiction or that kind of stuff. |
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| 15 Sep 2013 04:25 PM |
| I always write on Roblox and real life so it will be fast and professional. |
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| 15 Sep 2013 05:01 PM |
professional writing?
on roblox?
uhh... dud
people with basic knowledge of writing can easily make any of these things
- Articles (groups, persuasive advertisement, review) - Guidelines (groups) - Description (game, groups) - Other things
nobody really needs this, everybody counts on dimensionrip for guides |
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| 15 Sep 2013 05:03 PM |
| Make me a persuasive advertisement please |
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| 15 Sep 2013 05:04 PM |
| I'm offering this free service to lazy people. It's also for people who can't use grammar like you. |
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| 15 Sep 2013 05:06 PM |
| Pfffft. I get A's in English all the time. It's the Internet, not grammar bet. Get over it! |
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| 15 Sep 2013 05:10 PM |
This is fun, instead of trying to teach kids you're just offering services for free?
I make bases for kids but that's because building is something that isn't easily understood or taught. Writing, however, is.
Instead of just flat out saying "Professional," maybe you should post some of your own, original, professional writing as proof.
But keep this in mind: Give a man a fish and you feed him for a day, teach a man to fish and you feed him for life.
~Mydarkrai246~ |
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| 15 Sep 2013 05:17 PM |
@Zack That was at blood. @My All of my Roblox writing is for other people and groups. It is theirs, so I can't show it. |
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| 15 Sep 2013 05:25 PM |
| Because you have nothing to show. A true writer could create anything out of nothing, entire worlds out of simple letters, glistening lakes and rivers that flow with the rhythm of the page. A true writer could prove their skill anytime anywhere, so I repeat, show us what you can do. |
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bloodbred
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| 15 Sep 2013 05:25 PM |
@mr
You're funny. Is it really that hard for a "professional writer" to tell that was lazy dialog I was putting out? Tsk, tsk, tsk. |
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| 15 Sep 2013 05:54 PM |
I have just finished advertisement for a group that just started.
"VenomClaw Legion {VCL] is a legion based war clan that respects all of its members and believes you must work for your rank! We always accept new soldiers and do our best to train them to the fullest extent! Our holo training facility is professional with advanced sword fight, gun fight, obstacle, and scenery simulations. Although we have just started, we are commencing mass-recruitment. VCL is strict, but fun as well. It will be a great experience for all members. Our high ranks are very nice and active, so there will be many trainings and other activities every day. We will always accept alliance requests from clans with great skill. As long as you help us, we will help you. Our technology is really advanced aswell; more advanced than other clans. If you do not believe us, join and see for yourself. You will not regret it."
It is just a quick little advertisement. Happy now? |
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| 15 Sep 2013 06:44 PM |
A few pointers (since you claim to be professional, here's a professional review) . It sounds dull dull dull. Yes, it's supposed to be informational but that doesn't mean it has to be boring. This is my version:
"No Sacrifice, No Victory," this symbolizes not just an aspect of life but it is our core, our foundation. We fight with honor, respect, dedication, and loyalty in order to stand against those who oppose us. Throughout the world lies numerous deceitful leaders whose only objective is power. Power, this double edged sword always comes back around for those who seek after it. Those who put their own goals before their men, those who will sacrifice anyone in order to gain what they desire, this is not our belief. This is the belief of those who dwell within a sea of their own lies, those who dwell within their own destruction.
We guard against these corrupted seeds from the start always nurturing and growing our leaders into the fine role models they are. Caring, kind, open to opinions, justified, these are our leaders. But who are the soldiers that they lead? Willing members, eager fighters ready to defend ideals and truths that they believe in themselves. Armed with technology that is only but a dream to most, trained in a facility that is capable of creating vast mountains that rise to the heavens, open fields that stretch for miles, raging oceans that never rest, we train our soldiers without hesitation and without hatred.
Our allies are never forgotten and never left behind. True strength lies within those willing to have our backs, this is what we believe and follow. Some say it's weak, spineless, to gain the support of allies, that we can't defend ourselves, we think otherwise. Only through the bonds of those we call brothers can wars be won, only through immense trust and loyalty can we stand, arms linked, against the raging wind and tempests that is to come. We will raise you as you raise us, both standing tall in the face of destruction until we can finally grasp that everlasting light of victory that beckons to us within our own desire.
Who are we? We are Venom Claw Legion. We stand as one, fight as one, we are one. We are brothers, comrades, friends, and family. We always have each other's backs and we never abandon a fallen soldier. Take our hand and grasp the light within the void of despair, join our side and walk into the light of truth and the feeling of acceptance. Join Venom Claw Legion and you won't just be joining a group, you'll be joining a family!
^ This is just my version created from scraps of yours. You need to put emotion into it, make them want to join. Don't just spit out random facts, make the message flow together. Add in descriptive details that paint images into the reader's minds, create valleys and oceans that they travel through while reading, generate emotion and feeling so that they are tempted to join. This, my friend, is closer to "professional."
I'm not saying I am one, I'm far from being one, what I am saying is that if you claim to be a professional then don't give them 6th grade material. Again, you claimed to be a professional so this was a "professional" review.
~Mydarkrai246~ |
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