0Reborn0
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| 14 Sep 2013 06:39 PM |
As I am losing inspriration to write my story Inky's Affection, I have wrote three beginnings to three stories. This forum is to vote for which I will write, and it will go like this. The story with most votes will be written first, second most second, and so on.
The three stories with their respected names: Feather Serenity: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=112556779
Castle Lucinda: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=112785612
Eternia's Rose: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=113022630
Vote on this forum.
P.S:Yes, I know that there are lots of mistakes, my mind has been running too slow lately |
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Netprobe
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fathat121
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| 14 Sep 2013 07:51 PM |
| Personally, I would continue "Feather Serenity", as it appears to be the greatest developed piece out of all of your options. I enjoy the fictional genre to which you incorporated into your story. I know that you most likely, you won't be able to change this, but the title doesn't extremely "grab" me. That's all, for now. I've got work to do, so I can't post much, as of now. |
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Netprobe
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| 14 Sep 2013 07:55 PM |
| Good point, that is a weak title, won't grab any readers. Fathat, tell your brother to quit trying to force me to think cats are awesome, and I am entitled to my opinion. |
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0Reborn0
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| 14 Sep 2013 09:37 PM |
| Hmm.. I can't think of a title |
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Tikobe
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| 14 Sep 2013 09:43 PM |
| How about... darn. The only thing I can think of is worst then the last one. xD |
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0Reborn0
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Netprobe
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| 14 Sep 2013 11:53 PM |
| Better than the first, people may WANT to read it. |
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| 15 Sep 2013 01:02 AM |
You are inspiring me to make stories :P
COPY. AND. PASTE!™ |
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fathat121
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| 15 Sep 2013 05:12 AM |
| All right, Netprobe. I completely understand the value of opinions, and I promise that I'll tell hatfat to stop bombarding you with cat-related topics. Frankly, I've believed that everyone has a right to express their opinions. Just make sure that your opinions doesn't negatively affect others. |
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Netprobe
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| 15 Sep 2013 11:52 AM |
| Fine, just finished my last bombardment of title changes and stuff on creative's threads. |
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0Reborn0
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| 16 Sep 2013 05:05 PM |
| Hmm... Majestic Feather. Final title, beyotch o3o |
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