KateXyo
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| 12 Sep 2013 11:56 AM |
There is a Princess called Lai. She WAS kind, sweet, loving, and smart, until one day...
She was sitting in the lush, private gardens of the palace where she was observing the lovely flowers grow around her, when she saw a brute man crash down the guards and slowly fly over to her. "W--Who are you?" she shouted, standing up and standing back from the strong and cruel man. She then saw the many scars he had gained throuought the years and felt sorry for him. The man then appeared to be an angel-type figure. The girl, very scared still, stood back and watched as the man descended onto the ground. "My name is Vir'Mortis. What is yours?" the man said, kindly to the girl. "My -- my name is Lai. Princess Lai." said the princess. Vir'Mortis walked over to the girl and put his hand around her shoulder. She immediately sat down on the grass and so did he.
Vir'Mortis slowly moved over to where she was, and morphed into a dark, demonic angel. Lai almost freaked out and shouted, "Get... Get away from me!" trying to move away. The dark angel then slowly looked her in the eye and put his hand around her shoulder again. The girl slowly calmed down. She looked him in the eye and then was set under the Dark Angel's trance. Her soft golden curly hair turned midnight black with red streaks of what looked like blood running through sections of her hair. She wore the same dress she had worn except it was black with a blood red trim. Her skin had turned pale and her cheeks had sunken. She was barefoot and was no longer pretty. She was hypnotic. If she looked anyone in the eye for at least 5 seconds, they were then a dark angel. The demonic angel then revealed himself to be the Dark Angelic Lord, but the princess did not know, as well, she was under a hypnotic trance that could only be broken if the 3 almost undefeatable Guards were defeated.
Each guard represented a different sin: The first one represented Wrath and was called the Guard of Wrath, the second represented Envy and was named the Guard of Envy, the third represented Pride and was obviously named the Guard of Pride. Their jobs were to stop any intruders and to guard the Gem of Cyrena, if the gem was taken it would destroy the guards and seal the princess and Dark Angel Lord in the gem forever, unless the gem let them loose. Now the world is in the utmost of dangers as the Hypnoticed Princess has enslaved her own castle and is threatening to wreck the world. Only the top secret orginisation of Irisa know about this, the rest of the world remain oblivious of the threats that face this world. Help us! -- Races -- Farmer [ human only ] Peasant [ human only ] Noble [ human only ] Assassins [ human only ] Bandits [ human only ] Orc Warrior [ orc only ] Orc Psychic [ orc only ] Orc Peasant [ orc only ] Orc Warlord [ orc only ] Orc Royals [ orc only ] Nymph Warrior [ nymph only ] Nymph Psychic [ nymph only ] Nymph Peasant [ nymph only ] Nymph Warlord [ nymph only ] Nymph Royals [ nymph only ] Dark Angel Warrior [ dark-angel follower who used to work in the castle ] Dark Angel Psychic [ dark-angel follower who used to work in the castle ] Dark Angel Peasant/Worker [ dark-angel follower who used to work in the castle ] Dark Angel Sin Guard [ dark-angel follower who used to work in the castle ] Dark Angel Royals [ dark-angel follower who used to work in the castle ] -- Rules -- No godmodding You must put in a CS with over 3 good sentences in Bio, Appearance and Personality to be even considered as a Dark Angel Royal/Dark Angel Sin Guard if you choose to be one. Use Grammar No Dating Ignore trolls Follow all other basic RP rules Follow all other ROBLOX rules By the way, Constructive Criticism is welcome, just not troll criticism. Put 'Read' in Others when making your CS to be accepted, Have fun! -- CS -- Name: Gender:
Age: Race [orc etc]: Bio: Personality: Appearance: Likes: Dislikes: Inventory: Other: -- Have fun! |
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KateXyo
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| 12 Sep 2013 12:00 PM |
Name: Princess Lia of the Dark Angels Gender: Female Age: Unknown, most likely in her 20's. Race [orc etc]: Dark Angel Princess Bio: She was born in the palace as a very kind girl, and brought up by very sweet parents who are now trapped in one of the many dungeons of the palace that is now inverted. Personality: Used to be kind, sweet, funny and smart, is now twisted, evil, sick and thirsting for destruction. Appearance: It has been explained what her appearance is. "Her soft golden curly hair turned midnight black with red streaks of what looked like blood running through sections of her hair. She wore the same dress she had worn except it was black with a blood red trim. Her skin had turned pale and her cheeks had sunken. She was barefoot and was no longer pretty. " Likes: To trap others, terrified screams of others, defeating others, blood [not to drink it, just the sight] Dislikes: The light angels and lava. She would also hate to be sealed in the Gem of Cyrena. Inventory: Nothing, she uses raw power. Other: Do I need to? Read. |
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KateXyo
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| 12 Sep 2013 02:34 PM |
| dark angelic lord = lucifer |
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| 13 Sep 2013 02:49 PM |
btw kat in my opinion,
roleplays like this kind of focus on protagonist vs antagonist which is why you should make a book rather than a roleplay k ty |
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KateXyo
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| 13 Sep 2013 02:52 PM |
| Meh, okay. No one's joining, anyhow. I'll make another thread with this and make it a story. |
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mars1224
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| 13 Sep 2013 03:12 PM |
CS -- Name: Matt Bylin Gender: M
Age: 25 Race [orc etc]: Human Type: Former Knight (Assassin) Bio: His bio is secret to most, he however, is a prince, from a different land, and has remnants from when he had the throne. He left after his mother died, the pressure of the kingdom fell on his shoulders, and though able to support it, it was to much responsibility for a young teen. So he had his trusted friend take over. Other then that, the rest is to crazy to tell without being locked up for being crazy. Personality: He helps the poor, or anyone in danger, because when he used to live on the streets, he had no one to fend for him, and despite some cruelty, he will not be ruthless to innocence. Long story short, he is a hero in every way possible. He is sarcastic, even with death at his doorstep, and goes on killing sprees, killing any evil he finds. Appearance: Matt wears a long robe, making him look wealthy, but underneath it is chainmail armour, from when he was a knight. He has short brown hair, some stubble under his chin, and a faint mustache. His eyes are a deep green that someone could get lost in. He is a built person, but rather skinny. He is rather tall, standing at 6'3. Back to his clothing, he has leather boots where he conceals a dagger, and a belt that holds a sword. Likes: Helping, tea, protecting. Dislikes: Snobs, evil, fear. Inventory: Clothes, weapons, a crown, and a lone arrow. Other: Read |
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KateXyo
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| 13 Sep 2013 03:25 PM |
| Terrible story. No offense. |
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KateXyo
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| 13 Sep 2013 03:27 PM |
| Oh yeah, you sense yourself. |
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mars1224
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| 13 Sep 2013 03:30 PM |
Shut it water. Nobody, keep you damn opinion to yourself.
Matt I took a sip of my ale, the tavern was the only place I felt truly relaxed. I could drink my troubles and fears away. The daily afternoon storm rolled in. I looked out the window behind me, it was dark now. I sat back in my seat, propped up my feet, took out my old rag, and started to polish my sword with a sigh. |
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| 13 Sep 2013 03:33 PM |
>Nobody, keep you damn opinion to yourself. Should I take that seriously? Should I listen to a guy with no grammar at all? No. |
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KateXyo
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| 13 Sep 2013 03:35 PM |
Lia I walked around my dark castle, watching servants stop scrubbing the walls to bow to me and to continue as I passed. I loved this life... it made my purpose in the world clear... so clear... I laughed to myself. I only respected one person in this world, and that one person was Vir'Mortis, the one who showed me how fun life could be. I looked down my nose at everyone else. |
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mars1224
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| 13 Sep 2013 03:35 PM |
omg u stoopid
i wood laf rel hrd if u mispled grammer lolol
do i rele need grammer? no i dont lololo omg nub |
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| 13 Sep 2013 03:37 PM |
| Water, tagging the simple phrase "No offense" onto the end of an insult doesn't make it any less rude. |
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mars1224
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| 13 Sep 2013 03:37 PM |
Matt
I remembered when I was a kid, roaming around the castle in awe, I remember when I found the dark storage room and got in so much trouble. Then I remembered mother, it brought sadness for a little while, but due to me being in a happy place and real world, it didn't last long. Then I wondered what the princess was like, I mean before the evil and all. |
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KateXyo
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| 13 Sep 2013 03:37 PM |
Hate to say it, but you do.
-- Rules -- No godmodding You must put in a CS with over 3 good sentences in Bio, Appearance and Personality to be even considered as a Dark Angel Royal/Dark Angel Sin Guard if you choose to be one. >> Use Grammar << No Dating Ignore trolls Follow all other basic RP rules Follow all other ROBLOX rules By the way, Constructive Criticism is welcome, just not troll criticism. Put 'Read' in Others when making your CS to be accepted, Have fun! |
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| 13 Sep 2013 03:37 PM |
>omg u stoopid
i wood laf rel hrd if u mispled grammer lolol
do i rele need grammer? no i dont lololo omg nub
Sorry, I can't understand Noobish. |
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mars1224
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| 13 Sep 2013 03:39 PM |
Are you that ignorant?
I was mocking you.
Oh well. I will now passively ignore you. :)
Goodbye! |
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KateXyo
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| 13 Sep 2013 03:40 PM |
Lia I sat down in my dark bedroom. I had turned into a true gothic, with pictures of vampires and dark angel warriors on the walls, painted by my finest artists. I looked at my bookshelf. I could read a book to pass the ticking time... or I could go and stand on the balcony... I decided to go to the balcony. I walked out and a large gush of wind made my hair flap in the wind. I loved the calmness of the dark castle at the balcony. I loved to watch over the servants. Heh. I flapped my large dark wings once, and went back inside. |
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mars1224
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| 13 Sep 2013 03:43 PM |
Matt
The rain was nice, I liked it, everyone thought I was evil too because I liked it, but secretly, it brought serenity to the small little village. It was then when I heard a scream. I went to the door and opened it. There I saw a girl being terrorized and almost turned into a dark angel. I quickly took out my sword and sliced at it's neck. It was weird because this thing didn't bleed red blood, only black blood. I helped the lady up, and she ran in fear. |
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| 13 Sep 2013 03:45 PM |
I decided to join.
Name: system32 Gender: None of your business. Ag3: Too personal, sorry. Race: Human Bio: bio.exe was not found. Personality: Super shy. Appearance: Blue eyes, blue hair, white armor. Likes: Beating other students at school. Dislikes: Poop, fart, sheet, etc. Inventory: AK-47, Grenades, Minigun, Flame Thrower, RPG, Excalibur, Darkheart, Outrageous Builders Club Other: Haven't read. ACCEPT ME YOU NOOB! |
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KateXyo
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| 13 Sep 2013 03:47 PM |
Lia I felt a sharp sensation in my neck. I felt this each time one of my warriors got hurt, and I get hurt by half in the same position where the dark angel got hurt, in this instance, my neck. I held it.
Dark Angel I flew after the two. I caught the lady and held her firm. I looked her in the eye. She tried to look away, but I kept her eyes firmly on mine. I dropped the lady to the ground after five seconds, and a large beam of darkness appeared. When it disappeared, the lady was also a dark angel. We flew in persuit of Matt. |
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