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| 12 Sep 2013 03:03 PM |
This is my first role-play that may possibly be successful, so if I'm a bad host, sorry about that. If this fails I will make a new thread and try to make it better.
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Welcome to the A.Y.S.(Association of Young Spies), we are an advanced organization of child spies, for missions we adults can't complete. We will start off with training, please head to room A1, the first training room. It is located in the basement, first door on the right, please do not get this confused with the bathroom, we've had a drunk teenager go there once... It wasn't pretty.
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~Rules~
1. You may only have one character. You may get a new one if your character "dies" though. 2. No godmodding, OPing(Secret Word: Spy Kids), etc. 3. Ignore all spammers and trolls. If you respond that only means they win. 4. Do not make up your own codename, we will make it up for you. 5. Use grammar. 6. Only join if you're willing to stay for at least 20 pages. 7. Obey administrators. 8. Talk in English, if you don't know English use a translator. 9. Have fun! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
~Character Sheet~
Name: Talents: Physical Appearance(Eyes, Skin, Etc.): Clothing: Grammar Test(Change to have grammar, puncuation, etc.): i wan 2 joyn How much time can you contribute(10 mins, 30 mins, 1 hour, etc.): What time zone do you use(EST, PST, GMT, etc.): When can you get on(Use EST, if you cannot find a converter, use your time zone): Secret Word: -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
~Administrators~
Asking some people, should have it by tomarrow. Just keep looking until you find it. |
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| 12 Sep 2013 03:04 PM |
| (Sorry about the extra 3 dashes, didn't realize it would do that... Dumb ROBLOX showed me it differently. :l Lol.) |
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| 12 Sep 2013 03:11 PM |
| (Oh, by the way, for people who misunderstand it, when it says "How much time can you contribute", it means in a day. Sorry for anyone who misunderstood that.) |
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| 12 Sep 2013 03:22 PM |
| (Errr... Does anyone want to join? Anyone at all???) |
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| 12 Sep 2013 03:25 PM |
| We are told to use grammar, yet the original poster can't spell tomorrow right. |
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JoshWesty
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| 12 Sep 2013 03:27 PM |
"Young spies"
PLEASE GET OUT!!!!! |
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| 12 Sep 2013 03:29 PM |
| (Sorry about that WiFI, I know how to spell it, but sometimes I spell it "tomarrow" instead of "tomorrow." |
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| 12 Sep 2013 03:34 PM |
| (Dude, you just ruined the grammar test... Stop replying if you do not want to join, I will be ignoring you now unless it is creative criticism.) |
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| 12 Sep 2013 03:36 PM |
| It is creative criticism. You just broke your own rule. |
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| 12 Sep 2013 04:12 PM |
Hmmm, Okay, you have yourself an admin. I guess I'll be joining then.
~Character Sheet~
Age: 14 Name: Ginny (Last name Classified.)
Talents: I wrote a long answer, treating it more like a bio, so I'll just put that at a younger age, she did Ballet, and about the time she turned 5 her dad wanted to start her out in Martial Arts. She was raised in a bit of a poor home, living in Queens, new York. She may or may not have gotten into some pick- pocketing... Last but not least, Shop lifting with friends. Shes had some bad impressions, and made some bad impressions on others. Namely, Shoplifting and lieing.
Physical Appearance(Eyes, Skin, Etc.): Ginny has frizzy red- orange hair, with a life of its own. her eyes are a dark shade of green, with a slight auburn ring around the iris. Her height is 5'5, a bit short for her age, and she weighs at 93, a bit underweight. Ginny has a crooked left finger from a slight fight when she was younger. You should see the other guy.
Clothing: Ginny doesn't own much, shes no fashion icon, though sometimes she does try, usually on more formal occasions. She prefers hoodies and sweaters in the winter, with most usually skinny jeans, her favorite pair being maroon. In summer, she prefers some shorts and a loose T-shirt, like her 'Mud Run 2013' Shirt.
Grammar Test(Change to have grammar, puncuation, etc.): I would like to join.
How much time can you contribute(10 mins, 30 mins, 1 hour, etc.): After school hours? I get on usually around four, if I'm having a good time, I may even end up on and off until 10.
What time zone do you use(EST, PST, GMT, etc.): Eastern.
When can you get on(Use EST, if you cannot find a converter, use your time zone): Four.
Secret Word: Spy Kids... |
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| 12 Sep 2013 04:16 PM |
| (Accepted, we'll wait until we get about 4 more characters. Also, I forgot to make my own... Lol xD) |
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| 12 Sep 2013 04:22 PM |
(I'm making 2 characters, one is going to be a high-ranked adult, for training and such, second will be my young spy.)
Name: Carinthir Recons(Yup, used it again ginny. Love that name. :P) Talents: Talented in Tae Kwon Do, Ju-Jitsu, and Chinese style Karate. Physical Appearance(Eyes, Skin, Etc.): Green eyes, pale skin, black hair(Read clothing for more about the hair) Clothing: Normally wears a black bandana, covering all his hair, given to him from his dead father. Grammar Test(Change to have grammar, puncuation, etc.): i wan 2 joyn(Why would I put that there? :l) How much time can you contribute(10 mins, 30 mins, 1 hour, etc.): Atleast 1 hour a day, minimum. Maximum, about 12 hours if I get on at 12:00PM, and get off around 12:00PM, rarely though. Normal time, about 8 hours. What time zone do you use(EST, PST, GMT, etc.): Eastern Standard Time(EST) When can you get on(Use EST, if you cannot find a converter, use your time zone): Normally, 2:00PM, sometimes earlier in the morning. Secret Word: Why would I put this here? :P
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| 12 Sep 2013 04:29 PM |
(Second character, the high ranking teacher and such.)(By the way, please add an age slot I forgot too. :P)
Name: Ronald (Last name classified)(I like Ronald too ginny, deal with it. :P) Age: (Classified, but looks in his 30s) Talents: 34 styles of martial arts, stealth, strength, and agility. Physical Appearance(Eyes, Skin, Etc.): Skinny, height about 6'9", brown eyes, tan skin, and short brown hair, just past the style of a butch. Clothing: When on the job, wears a Tuxedo, and that's about it. Does not include on the job of the A.T.S.(Association of Trained Spies) Grammar Test(Change to have grammar, puncuation, etc.): i wan 2 joyn(Nope.) How much time can you contribute(10 mins, 30 mins, 1 hour, etc.): ^Read Other CS^ What time zone do you use(EST, PST, GMT, etc.): EST When can you get on(Use EST, if you cannot find a converter, use your time zone): ^Read Other CS^ Secret Word: Nope. |
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| 12 Sep 2013 04:37 PM |
| (Oh, and by the way. Carinthir is 12 years old.) |
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Z0rr0w
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| 12 Sep 2013 04:40 PM |
Creative criticism? CREATIVE? Alright, you asked for it.
This RP is far too generic. Probably'll be less fun than playing a bloody Cleric. I mean come on, it's KID spies, how could this possibly be atmospheric? The stupidity is hysteric!
It's bad, It's sad, Huh, like your deadbeat dad. But still, I have much more to add.
Now I'll bet that I'll get a report. That'll have literally no intelligent support Go ahead, shove me in a criminal's court, But you're a sad kid if that's your last resort!
But even then, at least you tried. Seems like you could use a guide. Yeah that won't be me. Yeah, my rhymes are untied. Like Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde! And so I declare your RP separated from this forum, By a continental divide!
Yeah, uh-huh. represent.
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| 12 Sep 2013 04:42 PM |
| (LOL Z0RR0W! xD Talk about creative... xD Anyways, like I said, it's my first Role-Play that will hopefully be successful, that means I don't have experience in this yet... :P) |
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Z0rr0w
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| 12 Sep 2013 04:43 PM |
| (By the way, you probably meant "Constructive Criticism.") |
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| 12 Sep 2013 04:45 PM |
| (Err... Yeah, I did... Couldn't think of the word at the time. xD So thanks... I think. :P) |
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| 12 Sep 2013 05:01 PM |
| (Hrm, so Mister Hyde was a rapper, apparently. Aaaaand Sam decided to steal my ideas. Okay Sam, okay. I see Sam. He is right though, I think you should have consulted somebody before going through with the idea. But I'll help you with maybe getting some people, it may not be the crowd you want, be warned.) |
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Z0rr0w
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| 12 Sep 2013 05:02 PM |
8. Talk in English, if you don't know English use a translator.
... THEN HOW ARE YOU MEANT TO READ THIS IF YOU DON'T KNOW ENGLISH?! THIS IS THE WORST RULE OF ALL TIME OF ALL TIME i criticise because i care |
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| 12 Sep 2013 05:07 PM |
| Z0rr0w, don't be to hard on him. Kids deserve a hit to the butt, not a punch in the face. |
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Z0rr0w
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| 12 Sep 2013 05:08 PM |
Huh what. Children don't need to get hit ..except by nuns. |
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