crplsteve
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| 08 Sep 2013 01:43 PM |
It was a quiet cold, dark morning at JC's fort fang, JC privates played cards in their building outside the forts walls, meanwhile in the background explosions could be heard as guests tried to get past the mined obstical course. "They never have any good food in these MRE's" One JC private said, his companions simply grunted at the remark. He felt a sudden stream of hot liquid trickle from his chest and looked down, there was a sword, its blade glowing red, protruding from his abdomen. "Hush embrace the darkness" A voice whispered behind him, he looked to his comrades for help but found them all dead, felled without a sound by Vaktovian solders standing half obscured in the dark pre-dawn light. He felt dizzy, his vision blackened, waves of nausea flooded over him, he closed his eyes for a eternal sleep.
Distant gunshots could be heard from psp's office, he looked up from his desk filled with half drank bottles of liquid, his head pounded and every ray of light filtering through his office's blinds made the sensation worse. Suddenly the outer gate exploded, shrapnel and bodies filled the air as the JC sentries were flung outwards, into the main courtyard. Over the commotion battle cries of "Hail the GSC" and "Glory to Vaktovia" could be heard. Panicking he leaped for the bases alarm system to activate the drone guards. Then the 2nd gate exploded in a sudden bright flash. the shock-wave shattered the bases windows and sent deadly jagged pieces of glass flying into the rooms, reaping all in their path.
He heard a pitched firefight outside his office, and rushed to the door with his pistol drawn, he slowly opened it and saw a group of JC sergeants holding the stairwell, but they were hopelessly outgunned and outnumbered. seeing no other choice he rushed to the top floor, hoping to rally what forces remained to protect the flag that proclaimed his possession of the fort. after climbing the stairs he found 5 out of the 65,000 JC solders stationed at the fort waiting for him, he knew that they could not hold out forever against the hundreds of thousands of hostiles that rushed his way, now unopposed.
He braced himself for the onslaught, and waited, then kept waiting. confused he looked up from his cover and found that no one had come up the stairs, the only way into the room from the ground, struggling to think why this could be he heard a beeping sound above him. He moved a crate from the guards room to the middle of the sound, and stood on it. Placing his ear on the ceiling he listened carefully, his eyes opened wide in fear and he lept from the box, as far as his muscles could propel him. The room filled with a brilliant white light and became white hot.
He recovered to see all the GSC clan leaders and Vaktus, but not Fruitbox, stood over him with their uzi's pointing at him, stunned he looked for help and saw the remainder of his men stood against a wall with several solders stood behind them. Then he saw Fruitbox make a hand gesture to the guards as he walked over to psp flanked by RSF's elites. On this signal the guards opened fire, cutting down the JC prisoners without remorse.
psp looked up and muttered "JC forever" before fading into blackness.
The end.
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Statfire
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crplsteve
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| 08 Sep 2013 01:44 PM |
| GSC/Vaktovian invasion of JC on January 1st, 2012. |
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SpyVortex
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crplsteve
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| 08 Sep 2013 01:45 PM |
| Late i know but still I decided to make a story based on it as few people have. |
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Alienous
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| 08 Sep 2013 01:45 PM |
| I stopped reading after the first sentence because it was a run on. I thought the whole story would be like that, so I didn't even bother. |
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nuke009
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crplsteve
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| 08 Sep 2013 01:46 PM |
| It cuts to the chase very quickly, the opening is just a scene setter. |
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Statfire
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| 08 Sep 2013 01:47 PM |
I didn't even read it
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steve are you going to college |
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crplsteve
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| 08 Sep 2013 01:47 PM |
| What do you guys N crossdressers think? |
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crplsteve
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crplsteve
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crplsteve
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crplsteve
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| 08 Sep 2013 01:56 PM |
this is what?
good, bad, average steven Spielberg? |
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crplsteve
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| 08 Sep 2013 01:57 PM |
| This more or less is what it was like actually, but there was respawns and AA. |
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crplsteve
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| 08 Sep 2013 01:58 PM |
| Spread the word, butter is back. |
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TomCat88
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crplsteve
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| 08 Sep 2013 01:59 PM |
Rage, ty for correcting me.
I got mixed up with year, we were supposed to all die on 24/12/12 |
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crplsteve
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crplsteve
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crplsteve
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| 08 Sep 2013 02:03 PM |
| ncu, ik I already realized earlier. |
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