KateXyo
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| 06 Sep 2013 02:03 PM |
-- Wolves are strong and protective creatures. Most are loyal, some are not. The loyal wolves will always remain loyal to their packs. The unloyal wolves... will betray their packs. Anyway... let me explain the story.
It is 1763 and you and your fellow pack members are taking shelter from the harsh winter in a cave. This cave is cold, but it is shelter from the horrible snow. It is wet and it is just horrible, but you can survive. You are snow-wolves, so you are used to being in the harsh colds, but it was still horrible enough for you as it was for other wolves. Anyway, one day, an elder wolf mother gave birth to a tiny, adorable wolf pup. She was named Nixai and was a white wolf, as nearly everyone was. One day, the elder wolf mother to Nix woke up and she was gone. The whole pack went into panic and searched everywhere for her. Soon later, the pup was found as a stone statue outside the cave. No wolf had done this... and it was creepy. A day later, the elder mother went missing and was found as a stone statue outside the cave, also. The whole pack went into panic again and decided to split up, as they thought being in a pack brought them bad luck. Anyway, here you are now, as a loner wolf, fending for yourself. Where do you live? What do you do to live? Will you find a village and be taken in as a pet? Will you find a nice warm camp to settle down in? You decide! -- Anyone want to do this? First poster who gets their CS accepted gets it. -- The places you can start off in are...
-The Snow Forest- -The Snow Mountains- -- As you progress, you can find camps, etc, depending on the situations and paths you follow. -- CS -- Name: Original Rank in the Pack: Age: Pup or Adult: Extra Appearance - like scars, etc: Personality: Likes: Dislikes: Perks - Sharp Jaws or Good Eyesight - Only one: --
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| 06 Sep 2013 02:55 PM |
Name: cleo Original Rank in the Pack: just became adult before the pack got split up so she has no rank Age:16 Pup or Adult: adult Extra Appearance - like scars, etc: she is small for her size Personality:she is rather bossy and will fight anyone or anything ( including snow) Likes: play fighting with the younger pups Dislikes: heat and other rival packs Perks - Sharp Jaws or Good Eyesight - Only one: sharp jaws-- |
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KateXyo
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| 06 Sep 2013 03:13 PM |
| Use grammar in your CS and i'll think about it. |
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| 06 Sep 2013 03:23 PM |
"Use grammar in your CS and i'll think about it."
> Complains about other's grammar. > Does not use grammar.
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KateXyo
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| 06 Sep 2013 03:49 PM |
> Complains about other's grammar. > Does not use grammar.
> Uses grammar, wifiking on another planet > Win |
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| 06 Sep 2013 03:50 PM |
Your "i" in "I'll" is not capitalized.
Therefore, it is you that is in another planet. |
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KateXyo
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| 06 Sep 2013 03:55 PM |
| Uh? Other's is actually Others' so your point is once again proved invalid. Have a nice day! |
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| 06 Sep 2013 03:57 PM |
| Other, in this case, is singular. It remains "Other's". |
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| 06 Sep 2013 04:08 PM |
(I don't really care about the grammar,as this is the first wolf RP I've seen in months.)
Name:Xero Original Rank in the Pack:Elder Age:5(35) Pup or Adult:Adult. Extra Appearance - like scars, etc:A scar over his left eye,and missing some of his tail due to an encounter with a bear. Personality:Smart. Patient. Tactical. Likes:Order,Control,Happiness,Tactics. Dislikes:Disorder,Sadness. Perks - Sharp Jaws or Good Eyesight - Only one:Good Eyesight |
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KateXyo
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| 06 Sep 2013 04:39 PM |
Accepted. -- Hello, Xero! I'd first like to ask you, where do you begin in this RP? The forest or the mountains? |
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JoshWesty
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| 06 Sep 2013 05:05 PM |
| I will begin in the mountains. |
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KateXyo
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| 07 Sep 2013 02:31 AM |
Great! Now your adventure can truly begin! Welcome! -- You walk around the mountains, missing your old pack, wishing you had a proper home instead of out on the cold mountains. You wish you could feel the lovely warmth of a fire touching your fur to keep you warm, that you had in your old pack. What do you do next?
A) Go and hunt B) Stay where you were C) Look for someone to make friends with D) Try to build a shelter |
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KateXyo
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| 07 Sep 2013 12:34 PM |
You hunt around under the snow and find these.
A stick A yellow patch of snow - eww! A dead body - I suggest you eat it A large cardboard box - gotcha! You could fit under this, you know, despite it being a box.
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| 07 Sep 2013 12:35 PM |
| I eat the dead body and rest in the cardboard box. |
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KateXyo
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| 07 Sep 2013 12:37 PM |
There is some remains of the body, consisting of an arm and a leg, which you keep beside you as you rest in the somewhat warm cardboard box. You wake up refreshed, and near frozen at the same time. You get up.
When you poke your head up from underneath the dark box, you see 5 hunters around you each with very old guns.
What do you do?
A) Bite them B) Run like a coward C) Stay under the box D) Play dead
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KateXyo
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| 07 Sep 2013 12:39 PM |
Ugh! One of the hunters saw the box wriggle a bit. The hunter goes over and lifts up the cardboard box, he sees you.
A) Run for it B) Bite them C) Try to use the box as a shelter from their upcoming attacks. |
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| 07 Sep 2013 12:40 PM |
A.
B would be foolish as they would shoot me as I bite them.
C would be foolish because it is made of cardboard. |
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KateXyo
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| 07 Sep 2013 12:42 PM |
You run very swiftly. The hunters run after you but slowly tire out. After a long while of fleeing, you stop and remember you left the cardboard box behind.
You can either,
A) Try to sniff your way back B) Dig again and look for something else |
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KateXyo
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| 07 Sep 2013 12:48 PM |
You keep your head down near the snow, not looking ahead, but sniffing. You slowly begin to walk and your sense of trail is cut off completely when you bump into something - or someone. You look up and see the same hunter who lifted the cardboard box off your head. He aims the large gun at you, ready to strike. Do you,
A) Bite him B) Attempt to run, but can't run far, because you're weak from running before. |
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KateXyo
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