mjb17
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| 06 Sep 2013 08:42 PM |
The cry of the fallen But did they deserve to die What justifies it Should they be allowed to live Have we done enough killings Do we think fear of us is not enough Should we keeping n going till there is no more
What justifies the death What justifies the pain What justifies the way we are today |
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mjb17
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| 06 Sep 2013 08:45 PM |
The cry of the fallen But did they deserve to die What justifies it Should they be allowed to live Have we done enough killings Do we think fear of us is not enough Should we keep going till there is no more
What justifies the death What justifies the pain What justifies the way we are today What justifies our ways
How come we think killing one isn't one to much Why can't we do soemthing better " then what has to be done" |
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mjb17
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| 06 Sep 2013 08:46 PM |
| Its not a song until you sing it. |
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mjb17
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| 06 Sep 2013 08:48 PM |
The cry of the fallen But did they deserve to die What justifies it Should they be allowed to live Have we done enough killings Do we think fear of us is not enough Should we keep going till there is no more
What justifies the death What justifies the pain What justifies the way we are today What justifies our ways
How come we think killing one isn't one to much Why can't we do soemthing better " then what has to be done"
We hear them die but we don't cry Isn't that sweet enough I get they did bad things and they should just give up But sometimes we miss them and kill the wrong ones I don't think that is fun |
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mjb17
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| 06 Sep 2013 08:49 PM |
| I keep thinking, SCREAMO!! |
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mjb17
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| 06 Sep 2013 08:50 PM |
| It should sound like linkin park |
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mjb17
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Typocrite
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| 06 Sep 2013 08:51 PM |
| Do you have the chords laid out yet? I think this song has a lot of promise! |
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| 06 Sep 2013 08:52 PM |
7/10 not creative lyrics it would seem very sad and too patriotic
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mjb17
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| 06 Sep 2013 08:53 PM |
its more u patriotic because I'm saying we are going over board on drone attacks
And no I just started writing ten minutes ago |
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mjb17
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| 06 Sep 2013 08:55 PM |
Okay okay I got it wrong but its too sad and boring i dont even want to check the lyrics anyway by judgement it doesnt seem to have any backbone of the music (as in instruments, to conduct it into music and a great song) |
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| 06 Sep 2013 08:55 PM |
"Not all songs rhyme"
so true
in fact some songs don't even have words... take Kid2Will's songs... not a single word sung but (IMO) it can still have an impact, like whenever I listen to Earth Aura I get all... idk it sjust weird |
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Typocrite
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| 06 Sep 2013 08:55 PM |
| If I had a criticism though, it would be that it's too direct. The lyrics are. Only a few people could read this and not think "Syria". |
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| 06 Sep 2013 08:59 PM |
@Typocrite Needs more of the figurative language thing right? Its pretty much a typical sad song.
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mjb17
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| 07 Sep 2013 07:10 AM |
No not really
The cry of the fallen But did they deserve to die What justifies it We have ignored it for too long
What justifies the death What justifies the pain What justifies the way we are today What justifies our ways What justifies the way we have done anything
We hear them die but we don't cry Isn't that sweet enough They are starving and dying for nothing They are being lead by someone who just doesn't care Why can't we free them from this oppression
There now it's about starving kids in North Korea so shoo |
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