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Re: Justify (a song I made)

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mjb17 is not online. mjb17
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06 Sep 2013 08:42 PM
The cry of the fallen
But did they deserve to die
What justifies it
Should they be allowed to live
Have we done enough killings
Do we think fear of us is not enough
Should we keeping n going till there is no more


What justifies the death
What justifies the pain
What justifies the way we are today
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mjb17 is not online. mjb17
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06 Sep 2013 08:45 PM
The cry of the fallen
But did they deserve to die
What justifies it
Should they be allowed to live
Have we done enough killings
Do we think fear of us is not enough
Should we keep going till there is no more


What justifies the death
What justifies the pain
What justifies the way we are today
What justifies our ways


How come we think killing one isn't one to much
Why can't we do soemthing better " then what has to be done"
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jedi8527 is not online. jedi8527
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06 Sep 2013 08:45 PM
needs to be longer
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mjb17 is not online. mjb17
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06 Sep 2013 08:45 PM
Working on it
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Superme555 is not online. Superme555
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06 Sep 2013 08:46 PM
Its not a song until you sing it.
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mjb17 is not online. mjb17
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06 Sep 2013 08:48 PM
The cry of the fallen
But did they deserve to die
What justifies it
Should they be allowed to live
Have we done enough killings
Do we think fear of us is not enough
Should we keep going till there is no more


What justifies the death
What justifies the pain
What justifies the way we are today
What justifies our ways


How come we think killing one isn't one to much
Why can't we do soemthing better " then what has to be done"

We hear them die but we don't cry
Isn't that sweet enough
I get they did bad things and they should just give up
But sometimes we miss them and kill the wrong ones
I don't think that is fun
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mjb17 is not online. mjb17
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06 Sep 2013 08:48 PM
Fine lyrics
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HunterXl4d is not online. HunterXl4d
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06 Sep 2013 08:49 PM
I keep thinking, SCREAMO!!
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mjb17 is not online. mjb17
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06 Sep 2013 08:50 PM
It should sound like linkin park
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slayer9991 is not online. slayer9991
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06 Sep 2013 08:50 PM
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mjb17 is not online. mjb17
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06 Sep 2013 08:51 PM
Not all songs rhyme idiot
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Typocrite is not online. Typocrite
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06 Sep 2013 08:51 PM
Do you have the chords laid out yet? I think this song has a lot of promise!
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Superme555 is not online. Superme555
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06 Sep 2013 08:52 PM
7/10
not creative lyrics
it would seem very sad and too patriotic
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mjb17 is not online. mjb17
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06 Sep 2013 08:53 PM
its more u patriotic because I'm saying we are going over board on drone attacks

And no I just started writing ten minutes ago
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06 Sep 2013 08:53 PM
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mjb17 is not online. mjb17
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06 Sep 2013 08:53 PM
Unpatriotic
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06 Sep 2013 08:55 PM
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Superme555 is not online. Superme555
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06 Sep 2013 08:55 PM
Okay okay I got it wrong
but its too sad
and boring
i dont even want to check the lyrics anyway
by judgement it doesnt seem to have any backbone of the music
(as in instruments, to conduct it into music and a great song)
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tornadowatcher42 is not online. tornadowatcher42
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06 Sep 2013 08:55 PM
"Not all songs rhyme"

so true

in fact some songs don't even have words... take Kid2Will's songs... not a single word sung but (IMO) it can still have an impact, like whenever I listen to Earth Aura I get all... idk it sjust weird
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Typocrite is not online. Typocrite
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06 Sep 2013 08:55 PM
If I had a criticism though, it would be that it's too direct. The lyrics are. Only a few people could read this and not think "Syria".
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Superme555 is not online. Superme555
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06 Sep 2013 08:59 PM
@Typocrite Needs more of the figurative language thing right?
Its pretty much a typical sad song.
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mjb17 is not online. mjb17
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07 Sep 2013 07:10 AM
No not really



The cry of the fallen
But did they deserve to die
What justifies it
We have ignored it for too long



What justifies the death
What justifies the pain
What justifies the way we are today
What justifies our ways
What justifies the way we have done anything




We hear them die but we don't cry
Isn't that sweet enough
They are starving and dying for nothing
They are being lead by someone who just doesn't care
Why can't we free them from this oppression



There now it's about starving kids in North Korea so shoo
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