hotmess88
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| 07 Aug 2013 10:26 PM |
There once was a girl named Luci4700.She loved to play all sports.But the mean girls hated her!They pushed her,Punched,made fun of her.Her selfesteem dropped to...about a 1.Not to mention she was abused at home.She would hide in her bathroom and lock the doors,and this one time,she was mad at herself that she even broke her mirror.But then she met this new girl.She was like Luci4700 except she wasn't into sports,because she was called Fat.Her name was Truebloxxerforever112343 except the mean girls would call her TruebloxxerforNever.The 2 became good friends,but the bullying continued.But one day,3 girls that were cheerleaders came.They were more popular then the mean girls.Their names were paigeybear123,tigerlily59,and heartkiaragirly.They stood up for Luci4700 and Truebloxxer.The mean girls were in raged.They even had a breakout in school which made their popularity go down as the other girls popularity went up.Eventually Luci's abusing stopped and Truebloxxer lost all her fat.As for luci she got herself into some cheerleading as her extreme sport.They all became best friends and were never bullied again.As for the mean girls,They weren't that cool as they thought they were.
THE END!Thnx for reading! (idk if trubloxxer is real so yeah but the other people are real.This is a true story)Shout out to Luci4700 she made a story with me in it so be sure to check that out! |
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faultydex
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| 07 Aug 2013 10:36 PM |
bullies*
your story isn't that good.. infact I loathed it |
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Recesity
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| 07 Aug 2013 10:47 PM |
| But what of the "mean girls?" Many bullies are simply beaten and verbally abused at home, but don't know how to handle it and thus deal with the abuse by bullying people, like some sort of twisted reverse chain of command. |
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| 07 Aug 2013 10:50 PM |
| Recesity's post was more entertaining than the actual story. |
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timpookie
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| 07 Aug 2013 10:56 PM |
| What the hell? The story is resolved by the popularity meter? This is the worst excuse for I story that I have ever seen. |
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hotmess88
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| 02 Sep 2013 02:20 PM |
| You people are sick!You probably do this to every story.I know its a bit confusing but guess what!That doesn't mean you have to critise it!You should be ashamed of yourselfs!I just build up courage to actually post one of my stories on the forum and you guys just made my courage fade!And probably a lot of others courage too!Shame on you! >:l |
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AlphaX10
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JoshWesty
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| 02 Sep 2013 02:49 PM |
"Critise"
Come back when you learn to spell. |
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Recesity
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timpookie
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| 02 Sep 2013 06:49 PM |
| No, we do not criticize every story we encounter. We give out our honest opinions. But seriously, when posting a story, come up with a better ending then "and then teh bellehs l0st the1r pl0xing poplrity" |
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timpookie
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| 04 Sep 2013 03:04 AM |
| I sure as hell hope that that was sarcasm. |
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Olama5
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| 04 Sep 2013 05:06 PM |
Nope, Mario tells the truth!
How I know, Im his best friend (In RL) |
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| 04 Sep 2013 05:09 PM |
Just because you know someone in reality, and he seems nice doesn't mean that he's not a horrible person. |
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JoshWesty
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| 04 Sep 2013 05:14 PM |
Or the other way round.
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What? |
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Tobi6355
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| 04 Sep 2013 05:22 PM |
| I find the "she lost all her fat" part the worst part of this. Not that the rest of the story wasn't an awful abomination, but that one sentence just proves that the creator of this story is just as big of a pretentious, judging person as the awfully portrayed bullies in her story. |
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| 04 Sep 2013 05:22 PM |
| girls should not write stories when it's that time of the month |
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| 04 Sep 2013 05:38 PM |
As for luci she got herself into some cheerleading as her extreme sport.
Cheerleading is now an extreme sport! |
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| 04 Sep 2013 05:39 PM |
Fix
*Cheerleading is now a sport*
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| 04 Sep 2013 05:41 PM |
| Also to be completely honest...Luci was sort of asking to be picked on. What kid has numbers in their name? Can you even legally add numbers into your kids name? |
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