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gilzar is not online. gilzar
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25 Aug 2013 08:09 PM
"A long time ago, long before the time of man there was a race. A race that had settled all of its differences, and devoted all of its time into learning, and self-gain. This race was known as Aspera, and its ruins are still present today. Hmm, getting ahead of myself am I? Back to the lesson. Where was I? Oh yes, the Aspera was a culture that was around long before our own, they had settlements all over the world, and their technology was greater than any of us could even imagine! We also know that the Aspera had....'special' powers. We believe that they could learn, run, and do almost anything better than any run-of-the-mill human. This wasn't just because of their form either, countless years of genetic engineering went into the perfection of this race. But anyway, I'm getting off topic yet again, all we really know is that they were a great race, peaceful, strong, and had beautiful cities that now lie in ruins. We don't exactly know what happened, but they died off...Somewhat.

Now we get to us, man. We cannot settle our differences, and are still in conflict with one another. Yes, we have colonized the world, and have beautiful cities, but nothing compared to Aspera. We seem somewhat...neanderthal, compared to them. Or so we thought, 136 years ago we found something out that changed the world forever.

A select few have the powers of the Aspera buried within. I know it sounds crazy, but bear with us here. We have found out that certain individuals have the bloodline, or DNA that partially contains Asperian DNA. These individuals are special, and can wield the same powers the Aspera once did many years ago. See, we wouldn't know that much about the Aspera if we didn't find this out. The most important thing we have figured out about the Aspera was that they were excellent warriors, and could wield fabled 'magic'. It's not exactly the same as the stuff of children's tales, but it is still different and has changed the world beyond any of your understanding.

These cetain individuals are called the children of Aspera.

That ends today's lecture."

Story: In a world similar yet different then ours, there is man. (This is going to be an Anime-like RP, meaning there will be funky clothes, hairdos, and all that. If that is not favorable you have all the right to leave.)

Note: This does not take place on earth, this takes place in an entirely different planet and galexy.

It has been thousands of years since the time of the Aspera, and now man dominates the world. Their intellect is great, but they still don't seem to get along. Right now there is a bloody war going on between two major factions, and tons of small factions.

Since this is war, there are weapons.
The weapons of Favor: Swords. Reliable, quick, simple (Sometimes) and can vary majorly. There are guns, they just aren't favored by the Children Of Aspera. You can't focus your energy into a gun, like you can a sword. Simple soldiers may use guns, but the Children of Aspera tend to use their abilities to its fullest. They, meaning the Sanctum (Governement), have figured out that a C.A. (Child of Aspera) will be approximately 3x as effective with a sword, than a gun.

You're probably wondering what the Sanctum is. The Sanctum is one of the dominant governments of the world, covering roughly three and a half continents, and has the technology and manpower to keep those continents. An average Sanctum city is predominantly white, filled with futuristic buildings, soldiers, and have just a peaceful look to them. They are widely renowned for their cities in the sky. Litterally entire cities floating in the skies! Entirely man made, filled with everything a city needs. These cities are made only for special people however, mostly C.A's live in them, as they serve as a safe, peaceful place for them to learn. The Sanctum is strictly a republic, and even the smallest issues can take months to be resolved as they have to pass through the house of commoners, then the house of elders, then if important enough, the council of the Pheonix. Then finally, it must be passed by the Empress, or it will have to start ALL over again from the bottom. You probably can see why things take a while to get done. Laws are fair for all, mostly to say. Of course if a person is a noble (Wealthy) they are probably going to hold more power than the common citizens. The Sanctum seems to be the ideal empire, if one were to ignore its flaws, but no empire is perfect. The Sanctum has fought many wars, and has won most of those wars to stand where it is now.

Sanctum also has the necessary military it needs. (This will be focused on later) They have Airships, gunships, advanced soldiers, advanced weapons, and of course Children of Aspera, who the Empress has just recently allowed to finally join the military after it was shown that Children of Aspera can do almost anything a soldier can 3x better. Their technology is mostly futuristic, as most is.

The Sanctum, however, is not the only government, there are many others, but one stands out the most; The Sovereign Nations of Terian Socialist. The S.N.T.S is a nation completely different than the Sanctum. The S.N.T.S is a police state, meaning that the military and the government control EVERYTHING. Their cities vary, in fact you could have a hard time finding their cities because the majority of them are underground. Why underground you ask? When your city is underground it is quite hard to bomb it, raid it, and capture it. Plus, their cities have dirty air, filthy streets, and strict laws. Of course, some of their cities are beautiful, since their entire Political System is off of a single idea that the world would be a better place if the governement controlled the people, to stop them from fighting, and they have to show sometimes that this kind of government can be beautiful. Of course to do this, the governement has to control ALL the people, thus starting the conflict.

Sovereign Nations of Terian Socialist have an oustanding Military. Every citizen has to serve in their military at least for three years when they turn 16, and then can go off to be a scientist or whatever they want to be...Or they can be a good citizen and stay in the military and earn their family extra food rations. S.N.T.S has everything a military of the time needs, and they specialize in it. Even their soldiers wear special armor made for protection. Their armor is made of a light, fiberglass material with a special mask with a small computer in it to help in combat.

Aside from all of this, the world outside of cities is still quite untamed. Only special people are let outside of the cities most of the time. Outside of the cities lies a wilderness that is filled with ruins, bandits, strange creatures of many sizes. Citizens are not permitted to enter the wilderness unsupervised, and only Soldiers and C.A's are allowed to because they have the proper skills to survive out there. The wilderness varies from forest, to plains, to jungles, to all kinds of climates and even entire abandoned city ruins! Out in the wilderness fortunes are made, and lives are lost.

Military Technology: Throughout the world lie various military technologies, but here are the main ones.

Guns: There are guns of various types all around. I shouldn't have to explain what a gun is. All you need to know is that Guns still shoot bullets, not plasma.

Gunships: Gunships are plane-like vehicles, but far more advanced. They are faster, (Different looking), stronger, and much more effective. They are the vehicle of choice for wars and exploration. Gunships can be custom, or just stocked. Most Childen of Aspera have custom Gunships made just for them. They have an aerodynamic shape, and then Proton Thrusters on the back. Gunships have futuristic weapons, and can shoot a futuristic material that is plasma. Plasma is blazing hot, and is used primarily in weapons, engines, and thrusters.

Airships: Airships are GIANT gunships that are made for large bombardments of cities and other Airships. Most importantly however, Airships carry Gunships, basically they are aircraft carriers. They vary in shape, and have GIGANTIC proton thrusters on the back. Airships are basically flying fortresses capable of reducing cities to ash.

Swords: Shouldn't have to explain this too much. Swords vary greatly in shape and size, and Children of Aspera can put their energy into it giving them unique properties. (Example: C.A. puts his fire energy into the sword, the sword lights on fire.)

There may be more in this category later.

Children of Aspera

The Children of Aspera are unique individuals, that can be of any age, race, or gender. A Child of Aspera can either look completely normal, or look completely different than the average person. Children of Aspera are extremely skilled and posses unique powers. Prodeminantely the powers are of basic elements, however there are other powers that are yet to be discovered. What gives a Child of Aspera their power is that somewhere, deep inside of all of that DNA, they are related to a being of Aspera, and thus gaining their unique abilities. There is a limit to how much a person can use their abilities, for they all have an inner pool of energy that using their ability will deplete. If their inner energy is depleted, they cannot use their abilities. These abilities at first are dormant until they are activated. If they are not activated they cannot be used and the Child of Aspera may never know they are special. Powers become activated usually through periods of great emotion or concentration, making it difficult for a person to figure out if they are a C.A or not. Most people however know they are a Child of Aspera if they are, because in modern times most Children of Aspera are born into families that know they are Children of Aspera. (Basically there are clans of Children of Aspera to make it simple). These families know how to activate their powers, and their powers are usually similar.

All C.A's grow up, and learn in one of the few floating cities. One of the most magnificent of them all: Cilestia. The floating City of Cilestia is home to the Empress, all three of the councils, and most importantly the Univisersity of Cilestia. The University of Cilestia is a school strictly for Children of Aspera, this is where they get their education and training, and they even live there if they do not have a home in Cilestia. It is also where rookie missions are assigned to the newly graduated Children of Aspira.

Once a Child of Aspira has graduated (Age varies, but it is on average around the age of 16) the C.A will put their gift to use for the greater good and be given missions. These missions either involve the bloody war that is going on, or task that need to be done in home cities or the wilderness. There are different ranks, and perks of the ranks for Children of Aspira.

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Apprentice: Apprentices are the lowest of all the ranks, they are simply university students that have yet to graduate.

Scarlet: Scarlets are basically fresh-graduates. They are identified by a scarlet band somewhere on their clothing. Scarlets are allowed on missions and can head into the wilderness if on a mission. Scarlets receive a relativley low pay for mission.

Soldier: Soldier rank is mid-rank. They are allowed to go on missions and even have the freedom to personally select them. Another perk of being a Soldier is the person gets their own custom Gunship. Soldier's are also allowed to run squads of either regular soldiers or other Children of Aspira. They are also allowed to enter the wilderness whenever they please when they have free times. Soldiers are identified usually by a white band. Soldier's receive moderate pay.

Knight: Knight is one of the highest ranks. Knights are some of the most skilled and powerful C.A's, and are identified by a crescent moon that gets engraved in the users sword. Knights have all the perks of Soldiers and even more. Knights are given their own personal homes on Cilestia and are very skilled and powerful. Knights receive great pay

Master: Master is the highest rank. Master's receive luxery homes inside of Cilestia, can take person students, and can lead multiple squads. Masters are extremely skilled and powerful, and receive amazing pay for missions. Few however, make it to this rank. Masters also have the ability to create missions and can enter the wilderness whenever they please.



To gain a rank up, there are two options. One option is to participate in the annual tournaments, filled with tests that you must pass, and other people of the same rank you must defeat in order to get your rank up. Those who get their ranks up will also get an upgrade to their abilities through modern science!

There are those who choose to missuse their gift however, and defect from Sanctum, and either join the enemy, or become criminals. There is the popular group of well renowned and dangerous criminals known as Bushido, they are all identified by a tattoo of a scorpian with 10 legs, usually in the upper-right of their back. The tattoo has the member's number on it as well.

Rules

No Gary Sues or Gary Sues

No Godmodding

No arguing with admins or me.

You don't have to keep track of your energy level (Meaning you don't have to do math) Just keep a general idea of what it is and what certain techniques will cost for it, and apply it into dialogue. (Example: A character says "Energy levels are running low..." or "Plenty of energy...")

Ignore trolls

There may possibly be a limit to how many players can join.

Put effort into the CS, things have to make sense and the bio has to be at least a paragraph or more.

You have the privalege of making your own techniques to use with your powers just don't go overboard.




Child of Aspera CS

N.am.e:

A.ge:

A. ppearence:

Faction (Sanctum, Bushido, S.N.T.S, etc.)

Power: (Basic elements, or maybe something different but nothing too O.P.)

Personality: (How your character acts and feels, and maybe a reason why they are that way.)

Weapons: (Usually a sword then a gun of some sort)

Rank

Bio:

Other:

If there is anything that you think should be added into the CS, let me know.

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gilzar is not online. gilzar
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25 Aug 2013 08:10 PM
Child of Aspera CS

N.am.e: Rokuro Kimura

A.ge: 14

A. ppearence: a very young looking appearance. Rokuro has fair skin (Caucasian) and is of average height and build. He has brown semi-long hair with blue beads on a few stands on the right side. He has blue eyes, and to the left of his left eye he has a small scar. For clothes Rokuro wears a white t-shirt, and dark blue jeans, with combat boots. Over the white T-shirt, he wears a black vest with straps and zippers all over it, with a robe-like bottom to it that goes down to his knees. He wears a black, fingerless glove on his left hand.

Faction: Sanctum

Power: Ice

Personality: Rokuro has a rather nice personality. He is usually kind to strangers and people he knows but not to people he doesn't like. Rokuro is also extremely impatient, while in the university teachers would always note how impatient he is. Other than that Rokuro also does what needs to be done unless his morality won't let him at all. Other then that Rokuro is a great pilot and has some of the top gunship scores in the university

Weapons: A very dark grey katana that is made of a hard, but sharp metal. Along with that Rokuro carries a pistol-shapped SMG that's good at close ranges, but has a small clip.

Rank: Apprentice (Promotion Soon)

Bio: Rokuro grew up in one of the normal sanctuary cities, with his elder brother Riku who was about 4 years older than him. He had two parents, and his life seemed quite normal. That was until he turned 10, when his city was target to a famous bombing incident known as 'The Swarm' in which a barrage of bombs came out of the sky and bombarded the city, many people died upon impact, and many parished in the rubble. One of those bombs caused Rokuro's home to collapse down, and his parents parished. He would have as well, if not for his older brother Riku who tackled him out of the way just in time. It was in that moment that Rokuro and Riku's powers were activated, as lightning started to flare off of Riku's body, and Rokruo was crying tears of ice.

It wasn't long before his neighbors took a notice to the two boys strange powers, and when Sanctum soldiers came to give aid to the town the two boys were taken to Cilestia, where they began their new life as Children of Aspera.

Other: Nothing Really.
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Supermariomania is not online. Supermariomania
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25 Aug 2013 08:10 PM
Child of Aspera CS - Supermariomania

N.am.e: Kenmuko Dorugagon

A.ge: 14

A. ppearence: Kenmuko has unkempt, dirty blonde hair, occasionally spiking up in random spots. His eyes are white, with only a single black rim showing it as a difering part of the eye. He's very thin, but not weak - rather the opposite, with quite a lot of athlete muscle. He often has blackened hair or clothes from some sort of explosion somewhere in his "garage" as he calls it. He wears practical clothes - a thick, leather and cloth vest, made from different shades of brown, and travelling leather pants, matching the vests' color. They both have cuts on them. He wears some dusty goggles on the top of his head, with a few technical arms around them. His shoes were hard for him to get, but "cool" as he says - made from a very light metal, with two small jets on the back. That's right, rocketboots.

Faction: Sanctum

Power: Shadow

Personality: Kenmuko is rather unstable right now. With his family wiped out, and basically nothing left of his life, he struggles to survive in the cruel wastelands. No one knows what he's really like.

Weapons: A makeshift "battlesuit" - about his size, but a lot bulkier, and with random mechanical bobs parts put on it. It has a guuuochrm drdom other weaponscattered around. However, they're all either breaking apart or faulty.

Rank: Apprentice (Promotion soon)

Bio: All that is known about Kenmuko is that he's a mechanical genius. He invents stuff every day that no one has ever heard about - just to survive. However, he disappeared after the destruction, by bandits, of a small Sanctum town outside of the floating cities. He now roams the land below the cities, trying to reach one, and escape from the killers of his pursuers. However, he lives unknowingly that he's actually a Child of Aspera.

Other: Kemuko is currently in his refuge from the attakers - his "garage" as he calls it, where he keeps all the bits and bobs he scavenges.
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gilzar is not online. gilzar
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25 Aug 2013 08:12 PM
(accepted and Admined)
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wiggleyourtoes is not online. wiggleyourtoes
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25 Aug 2013 08:16 PM
Child of Aspera CS

N.am.e: wiggle

A.ge: 500

A. ppearence: completly white

Faction all

Power: has power to kill everyone and destroy everything and every other power

Personality: always awesome

Weapons: all

Rank highest

Bio: super cool

Other: all
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mageofpower is not online. mageofpower
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25 Aug 2013 08:27 PM
Darn, I was actually about to make a character sheet. Then I read the Anime bit...Shame. Well take this free bump I suppose.
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Supermariomania is not online. Supermariomania
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25 Aug 2013 08:28 PM
Why not? It simply allows for more creativity. It's not going to be any less realistic or anything like that.

Well, than it already is.
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mageofpower is not online. mageofpower
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25 Aug 2013 08:31 PM
Why not? It simply allows for more creativity. It's not going to be any less realistic or anything like that.

Well, than it already is.

I just don't like anime in general. I understand why people enjoy it and think some of it looks fantastic. I just never found an anime that really "clicked" for me.
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gilzar is not online. gilzar
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25 Aug 2013 09:02 PM
Fair enough.

Thank you for at least reading it.
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mageofpower is not online. mageofpower
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25 Aug 2013 09:06 PM
Agh, I feel really bad for passing this up. It looks well put together. It's just... I..Hmph, I might stick out slightly, the name of my character/backstory/appearance may be more...Westernized.
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gilzar is not online. gilzar
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25 Aug 2013 09:09 PM
In my opinion none of that will matter.

All characters should stick out slightly, it will just make your character more unique.
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Tikobe is not online. Tikobe
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25 Aug 2013 09:11 PM
Child of Aspera CS

N.am.e: Fredric Torch

A.ge: 18

A. ppearence: Silver hair, and one of those long, tan trencher jackets with black jeans, and flat, short hair with turquoise eyes.

Faction (Sanctum, Bushido, S.N.T.S, etc.): Sanctum

Power: (Basic elements, or maybe something different but nothing too O.P.) Air

Personality: (How your character acts and feels, and maybe a reason why they are that way.) Determined, focused, and lacking a sense of humor. The Torch family, where he got the C.A. gene was as proud and strict as a military. Growing up in it, Fredric didn't really play around much, but trained in his powers a lot.

Weapons: (Usually a sword then a gun of some sort): A rapier and a SMG

Rank: Soldier

Bio: He's rather simple, and talks when needed. Being born into a family like his it's no wonder really. He spends his free time training, and tries to become a Knight. While he is skilled for his age, he isn't enough to climb up that one step and that disappoints his family severely. Else wise, he has no issue with anything, but he still lacks a sense of humor.

Other: Nothing really, so I'm gonna say HIYA! :D
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gilzar is not online. gilzar
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25 Aug 2013 09:13 PM
(Accepted, I have a knight character as well that I'm working on but I won't post him until tomorrow.)
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25 Aug 2013 09:19 PM
(Forgot to mention, he wears his white band around his neck like a choker. Considering it's white, it isn't much of a fashion statement, but it's out of the way and easily visible, so why does he care?)
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mageofpower is not online. mageofpower
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25 Aug 2013 09:49 PM
Alright. Sure, I'll join then.

N.am.e: Quintius Valarion.

A.ge: 17

A. ppearence: Quintius has a ragged, dirty looking appearnce. His skin is a pale white (He lived undergound his whole life after all) With dark dirty hair resting just above his eyes, one eye his former light blue color with another being dark black, changed after he learned of his powers. For clothing Quintius tends to wear simple garments, preferring black, usually wearing a black jacket with dark jeans.

Faction (Sanctum, Bushido, S.N.T.S, etc.) Former citizen of the S.N.T.S

Power: The ability to control Darkness or shadows.

Personality: Quintius is a rather quiet, meek individual. His former personality was lively and energetic, though after the traumatic death of his parents and activation of his powers he became much quieter, preferring not to talk to others unless necessary. (Whether the activation of his powers did this or the death of his parents is anybodys guess.) Quintius does have periods of anger, where his meek personality is replaced with a rage that causes him to lash out at random. Though this is rare and only occurs in extreme scenarios.

Weapons: (Usually a sword then a gun of some sort) A Dark black blade with a silver hilt. Owned by his father then passed down to him after his death. He never parts with it being the last memory of his parents he owns.

Rank Apprentice.

Bio: Quintius was a former resident of the S.N.T.S, living with his father and mother, both Children of Aspera. This fact was unknown to Quintius, as his parent, both former Knights and well respected Children, fled to the S.N.T.S just before the birth of their first son, feeling life with the burden of such powers was not what they wanted for their children. As Quintius aged, he looked up to his brother, (6 years older then him) and a loyal member of the S.N.T.S military.

Wanting to follow in his footsteps such a life was taken from his during his 15 birthday. His parents, not sharing their children``s love of the S.N.T.S became much more vocal of the lack of freedom and hardships in the nation. Quntius, learning of his families unpatriotic and downright treasonous nature left his home, informing his brother of this and begging for mercy. (He stilled loved his parents, but he naively believed he had a duty to preform for his country, and that all would be forgiven. Being nearly 16 Quntius was escorted back to his house... and watched as his parents were given an opportunity to surrender peacefully. His parents spit in the face of this mercy, saying they would sooner die for their beliefs then accept the oppressive rule of the S.N.T.S They were both killed, Quintius brother firing both bullets. In a rage Quintius unlocked his powers, killing every the solider, as well as his brother in a trance like state. In the aftermath of this, Quintius was taken by a family friend and another former Knight, to the Cilestia. Fearing the wrath of the S.N.T.S.

Other: Sorry for the long Biography?
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26 Aug 2013 12:43 AM
N.am.e: Alki Ilakonen

A.ge: 17

A. ppearence: Jason has raven black unkept hair that is slightly longer then he would like it he has a tanned face and silver focused eyes he's slim he has a mole on his nose and he wears a white T- shirt a Red jacket he also wears jeans usually.

Faction (Sanctum, Bushido, S.N.T.S, etc.) Sanctum

Power: (Basic elements, or maybe something different but nothing too O.P.) lighting or electricity

Personality: (How your character acts and feels, and maybe a reason why they are that way.) Alki is nice and polite he is smart for his age but he acts like a bit of a know it all he has a big sense of humor usually most things can make him laugh he likes to show off a bit, he also does not like being the center of attention.

Weapons: (Usually a sword then a gun of some sort) Jason has a personalized sniper with a piercing bullet and a silencer on it it's blizzard camoflauged and he has a deep silver sword that has a greyish handle

Rank

Bio:

Other:
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26 Aug 2013 12:50 AM
N.am.e: Alki Ilakonen

A.ge: 17

A. ppearence: Jason has raven black unkept hair that is slightly longer then he would like it he has a tanned face and silver focused eyes he's slim he has a mole on his nose and he wears a white T- shirt a Red jacket he also wears jeans usually.

Faction (Sanctum, Bushido, S.N.T.S, etc.) Sanctum

Power: (Basic elements, or maybe something different but nothing too O.P.) lighting or electricity

Personality: (How your character acts and feels, and maybe a reason why they are that way.) Alki is nice and polite he is smart for his age but he acts like a bit of a know it all he has a big sense of humor usually most things can make him laugh he likes to show off a bit, he also does not like being the center of attention.

Weapons: (Usually a sword then a gun of some sort) Jason has a personalized sniper with a piercing bullet and a silencer on it it's blizzard camoflauged and he has a deep silver sword that has a greyish handle

Rank: Scarlet

Bio: Jason was born in a mid class family, He usually had chores every 2 days to do like cleaning the dishes or pooper scooper from their dog. When he was around 9 he found out the his abilities when learning basic electricity in class he sparked up the light bulb by touching one end of the wire. Jason went to a private school and he made some friends his buddy Alex but when he moved to ( Insert Empress's city here ) To go to the school the children of the Aspera he graduated the school and became a Scarlet.

Other:
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Supermariomania is not online. Supermariomania
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26 Aug 2013 05:14 AM
(Not accepted, k3rl. Firstly, it doesn't simply happen. You find out about it in times of intense emotion - normally terror or anger - not out of nowhere. Secondly, there's no full stops. At all. It's just one "sentence" per section. Finally, you need to make it a bit longer for his appearance.)
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Supermariomania is not online. Supermariomania
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26 Aug 2013 05:22 AM
(@mageofpower no, no, a long bio is great. Glad to see you joined! Try to keep it to just shadows as a low rank, though. I just need to check with Gilzar about one thing, and once he gives the a-ok I am quite sure you'll be accepted!)
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gilzar is not online. gilzar
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26 Aug 2013 05:50 AM
(Meageofpower, accepted!)

(Well, I stated that they become activated either under conditions of emotion, or great focus if the person is aware they are a child of aspera. Other than that everything else looks fine K3rl.)
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26 Aug 2013 06:12 AM
Child of Aspera CS

Name: Aryer Kite

Age: 15

Appearance :choppy black hair that goes to her cheek bones, blue eyes which turn to black when using her powers. right now she is wearing a green\olive combat jacket ,a black under shirt and navy blue skinny jeans and black sneakers

Faction (Sanctum, Bushido, S.N.T.S, etc.) right now she doesn't trust anyone so she is a loner in a santum country

Power: )she is able to unwind recent events (like mini time travel)

Personality: (How your character acts and feels, and maybe a reason why they are that way.) cold, unforgiving, sarcastic but on a good day she is rather funny (see bio).

Weapons: (Usually a sword then a gun of some sort) 12 stain less steel throwing knives

Rank

Bio:Aryer trusts no one at all not even her family because she knows they want to lock her up to experiment of her. when she was 12 nakindo one of her friends who was also a child of Aspera was killed out side her house. she ran into the house grabbed a dozen kitchen knifes , a blanket roll, all her life's savings and some matches and started life on the run. right now she is lisping through the country unnoticed

Other:she has a fear of snakes
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kattnisskid is not online. kattnisskid
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26 Aug 2013 06:14 AM
*slipping not lisping
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26 Aug 2013 10:46 AM
(Alright great, I just noticed that Super also has Shadow as a power. I could change mine if you don't want two characters with the same power.)
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26 Aug 2013 12:39 PM
(If you want to, sure. It would make it more interesting, having different abilities. If you want a recommendation, I'd say a cool ability would be Ice. :P)
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26 Aug 2013 12:44 PM
(It seems somebody has taken Ice as well, I had an idea, the ability to control a sort of "ethereal force" the ability to harness this force into offensive weaponry or at higher levels of skill actually enter this realm. Though I do know if it might be seen as a bit "overpowered" or fits in with the story.)
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