BroBro264
|
  |
| Joined: 12 Jul 2011 |
| Total Posts: 28121 |
|
| |
|
darkjinx
|
  |
| Joined: 31 Jan 2011 |
| Total Posts: 2531 |
|
|
| 12 Nov 2013 01:36 PM |
No.
But we expect research for it and correctness. |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 12 Nov 2013 02:36 PM |
"Like to see you do something better in two hours."
Well that's why you don't write crappy fan-fics in two hours. Now doesn't that just make sense? Doesn't it, hon? |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 12 Nov 2013 08:53 PM |
| Thank you. And why do some of you come back and read (or not) the same story again if you hate it JUST to post a discriminating comment about it? |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 12 Nov 2013 09:00 PM |
Thats how the forum works.
One guy bumps it just to have it all explode over again.
Congrats on the two pages of replies though. |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 14 Nov 2013 01:22 AM |
| Why thank you! This is so much fun seeing how you guys just really hate things people do. If you dont like it, give me feeback on how I can improve rather than just SAY it sucks. I realize that already. Gosh people. |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 14 Nov 2013 02:09 AM |
It's not so much that the story sucks, it's just that it's a fan fix. While some fanfics can be very creative, most are terrible and show how much you love the series.
MTVB has seen too many Hunger Games Fanfics and that is why there are so many negative responses. To improve the story just proof read before you post it.
Remember to read the whole story aloud, it makes it ten times easier to spot mistakes. |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
darkjinx
|
  |
| Joined: 31 Jan 2011 |
| Total Posts: 2531 |
|
|
| 14 Nov 2013 11:11 AM |
I suggest sit and for ages make sure every fact you're not sure on to research it.
Also, description is everything. |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
| |
|
|
| 17 Nov 2013 01:20 AM |
| So much Hunger Games Threads. |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
darkjinx
|
  |
| Joined: 31 Jan 2011 |
| Total Posts: 2531 |
|
|
| 17 Nov 2013 05:44 AM |
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=117730203&PageIndex=1
watever you dew
dont do this |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
| |
|
|
| 18 Nov 2013 11:27 PM |
| It was a good fan fiction of the Hunger Games. |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
| |
|
|
| 19 Nov 2013 03:30 AM |
Azn, always being to good guy.
+10 for you. |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 19 Nov 2013 06:16 AM |
I give her props.
Only because I expected to throw up and didn't. |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 19 Nov 2013 07:50 AM |
What? You want me to say it's good, fine listen to this.
It's a piece of writing, now as an artist I would say this is good.
Sadly every artistic piece inside of me is controlled by rules and equations, meaning that I most often choose to see the mistakes rather than the idea behind the story.
Writing a story, is like guiding cattle, you need to set the course for them to follow, and make sure they stay on track (never driven cattle). If you write from your heart then make sure to go over it, contain it, perfect it so that the reader can read it calmly and without bumping into bumps along the way. |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
|
| 19 Nov 2013 11:40 PM |
| Naww swift, it's ok to not like something, and now I wholeheartedly don't care if people don't. I would just rather feedback than putdowns. |
|
|
| Report Abuse |
|
|
| |
|
| |
|