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Re: The 29th Hunger Games; A fan-made fanfiction; Episode 5

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tastyshadow is not online. tastyshadow
Joined: 10 Apr 2011
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02 Sep 2013 06:36 PM
I wake up with a painful hunger pain. I eat a tiny bit of roots and berries, leaving the rest for Thomas and Phillip. When they wake up they split what's left, and we look at eachother, scared of starvation. I quietly go outside to the river and wash my mud-stained clothes and clean my hair, which literally has twigs and leaves in it. The girl also has our weapons, another problem. I walk back to the hole wondering how we'll survive another day. I look in side and they're gone. Maybe they went out for food? I linger on the thought until I see large footprints...like a...bear's? Then the footprints of the identical boots of Phillip and Thomas. I start to panic and follow it quickly. What happened? I didn't hear a cannon. And then a scream. I look up to see them running from a huge beast; something between a boar and a bear. It's faster, and quickly catches up. I panic and walk backwards, terrified. My leg gets twisted into some loop of rope and I'm yanked into the air and hanging from my foot. Thomas and Phillip run under me, but Phillip trips on a log and the beast gets to him. It stabs its huge horn through him. Horrified, I hold my breath. The blood trickles down his stomach and the beast rips him apart. BOOM! Thomas dashes away, his adrenaline pushes him faster then usual, and then he's out of sight. After the boars done with Phillip, he darts off after Thomas. I lost consciousness from shock. My eyes flutter open. The first thing I feel is that I'm sick from hanging upside down. A little boy and then a circle of careers around him. "How did you do this?" the seeming dominant career asked him harshly, pointing at me. "I-I don't know I j-just know how to." He pulls out a dagger secretly, hiding it behind himself. "Well you better think, or else." Another one said. He pulled the dagger out and stabbed it into the girls face. I lost consciousness as I hear the brawl going on.
I wake up again to see three bodies. The girl who was stabbed, the boy who got me in this trap, and a male career. Well he put up a good fight at least. My stomach felt like it was ripping away at my lungs and kidneys I was so hungry, and my headache was horrible from dehydration. I grabbed my knife and started to saw away at the rope. Finally I fell to the ground, leaving a nasty bruise on my back. I felt so dizzy, but grabbed the careers and boy's supplies. I ate all of the food and water, as they didn't have much on them. At least I feel better now. I crawled to a close-by little area where it was sheltered and slightly camoflauged. As it was getting dark, I decided to prepare for sleep. "TRIBUTES!" I jolted awake at the announcers booming voice. "Tomorrow at dawn...head to the cornucopia for the finale...goodluck and may the odds be ever in YOUR favor."










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iPurplez is not online. iPurplez
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02 Sep 2013 06:43 PM
Very Good O:!
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Robomauler246 is not online. Robomauler246
Joined: 18 Jun 2008
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02 Sep 2013 06:52 PM
No offense, but i dont find even a tiny bit of interest in this story... #Dissapoint
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tastyshadow is not online. tastyshadow
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02 Sep 2013 07:59 PM
No offense, but I'd like to see YOU write a fanfic on HG. It'd probably be as boring as reading a dictionary. Shut up and keep your comments to yourself.
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dralion is not online. dralion
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02 Sep 2013 09:15 PM
@tasty if you're going to become a writer then you need to learn how to take criticism without being childish.
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tastyshadow is not online. tastyshadow
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03 Sep 2013 06:44 PM
@Dral I'm just doing this for fun, and what I was trying to say was I don't insult someone if I can't do it better. any person with more than 3 brain-cells usually do the same,

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WiFiKing42 is not online. WiFiKing42
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03 Sep 2013 07:04 PM
A human with 4 brain cells is not going to live that long btw...
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zepher32 is not online. zepher32
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04 Sep 2013 06:58 AM
Tasty, just take some damn criticism.
Yes, it's boring and unoriginal.
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Robomauler246 is not online. Robomauler246
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04 Sep 2013 06:23 PM
I agree with zeph, and tasty. I could make a fan fic much better than this, though you'd just go on and on about how boring it is because you know that i myself have better ideas. Oh and i'm more than willing, to bet that your little cronies will spam the forum saying how bad it is because they have fear of being kicked out of your games. Kick me out, it will only prove how unprofessional you are, and how immature you are.
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Robomauler246 is not online. Robomauler246
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04 Sep 2013 06:24 PM
I'll go ahead and start now, smartass.
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tastyshadow is not online. tastyshadow
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04 Sep 2013 06:35 PM
Ooh, I'm so threatened. I'd think someone who crawled back twice now would try harder to actually stay this time. Trust me I wouldn't think twice about kicking you out of my group.
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Robomauler246 is not online. Robomauler246
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04 Sep 2013 06:43 PM
I didn't crawl back twice, i only came back once. And not because i wanted to see you again, you just remind me of the ignorant people that roam around this site, and i bet you wouldn't think twice, but i have actually broken my 'loyalty' streak towards you, go ahead and kick me out. That would just prove me correct, thus; me winning this whole conversation.
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Robomauler246 is not online. Robomauler246
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04 Sep 2013 06:45 PM
It also pleases me to be so rage-induced due to the fear of me being a better writer, and being able to deal with criticism the mature way.
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tastyshadow is not online. tastyshadow
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04 Sep 2013 06:47 PM
Okay yeah that's a great reason to come back, moron. I don't need loyalty from a stuck-up brat who tries to use big boy words. I guess you won.
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WiFiKing42 is not online. WiFiKing42
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04 Sep 2013 06:53 PM
Stop fighting...... just have some story competition or something. Write-off!!
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Robomauler246 is not online. Robomauler246
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04 Sep 2013 06:56 PM
Stuck up? Wow. Apparently i'm stuck up for outsmarting tasty. Well, i'm done here.
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Robomauler246 is not online. Robomauler246
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04 Sep 2013 06:57 PM
WiFi, if we did a write off then i'd win, and tasty go 'ultra rage mode' high pressure is not safe for people, i'd rather not. But if you insist, then okay..
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tastyshadow is not online. tastyshadow
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04 Sep 2013 06:59 PM
Lel
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dralion is not online. dralion
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04 Sep 2013 07:01 PM
@tasty you don't have to be better than someone to dislike what they make

ex: if you don't like Picasso, you don't have to paint better than him.
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tastyshadow is not online. tastyshadow
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04 Sep 2013 07:09 PM
Yes, I know. But to go as far as to comment on their work is bad. It just makes you look stupid and immature. Kinda irritating getting a comment from someone who is more boring then a rock.
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dralion is not online. dralion
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04 Sep 2013 07:10 PM
"But to go as far as to comment on their work is bad."

but people have opinions

you can't expect everyone to love you stuff

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iPurplez is not online. iPurplez
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04 Sep 2013 07:16 PM
Guys, he's not a "Writer" He's a human who wants to write a fun story for his friends, to be honest I can't use as much detail as him. And you guys don't know Robo like we do, he's a pointless noob.
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WiFiKing42 is not online. WiFiKing42
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04 Sep 2013 07:18 PM
@iPurplez

lol'd
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Robomauler246 is not online. Robomauler246
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04 Sep 2013 07:20 PM
If you could add 40 more IQ points to that, then you would realize that i joined in 2008, therefore... making me the opposite of a noob. And also, there is no such thing as somebody who is pointless. We all have a meaning, just like you and tasty were created to enforce ignorance and stupidity.
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MarioDude0123 is not online. MarioDude0123
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04 Sep 2013 07:21 PM
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