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| 21 Aug 2013 10:06 PM |
Ok, this is the reform. I'm now more familiar, ignore my older posts. Ok, now, for a few basic rules.
1. ALL Roblox rules apply
2. Please, no godmodding or powerplaying.
3. Please don't have direct posts about 'ODing' and other things. (If your expressing l.ove to an RP family member, or one of your RP pets, such as: 'Claire kneeled by the small rabbit, gently petting it lovingly'. I guess that's ok.)
4. No Pokémon please.
5. No trolling as well, it ruins the RP for others.
Ok, now onto the storyline.
~You live in the large village named Ibern, and just outside that village, is the royal castle, named Idonea. Very little know of the other villages surrounding you, but the only other thing you know is that your country's name is Sybilla. But very strange things have happened in the past years. Many more raids on the village, and yet the king has done all he can, sending out guards, sacraficing some of his most valued knights, and yet, the attacks seemed to grow more frequent, if not less.~
Now for the character sheet. Please type out one like this.
Name:
A.ge:
Appearance:
Personality:
Bio:
Extra Detail(s):
Please forgive me if I missed anything. I'm really new to this, and I just want a good RP. |
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| 21 Aug 2013 10:17 PM |
(I'll help you out along the way. I've had a few good RP's)
Name:Ramus Qontero
A.ge:29
Appearance:6'5 Not-quite-but-a-bit-ripped. Over my left eye their is a scar from an attack at a young age
Personality:Not very shy, gets angry easily.
Bio:Ramus's parents were killed when he was 6,he got his scar from the attack. He is two faced, which means his attidute will change without warning. Maybe causing a small attack on others, or destruction of property.
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| 21 Aug 2013 10:17 PM |
Name: Echo Ven Asceline
A.ge: 16
Appearance: (No, shes not goth) Long black hair, storm gray eyes, wears leaher garments with leather boots, and also wears a black and gray painted cloak. (The cloak is to help conceal her in the night, and in the shadows.) She is also rather tall.
Personality: Shy, mysterious.
Bio: Her parents died when she was only 10, and that night was the night she came across a small wolf pup, who was all black. She named her Spirit, hoping it was sent from her parents.
Extra Detail(s): Loves animals, very few friends.
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| 21 Aug 2013 10:34 PM |
(Going to start off the RP now)
Echo was out hunting, eyeing the deer thoughtfully, when suddenly, birds all around her took flight, and the deer looked up, and for a split second it looked frozen, until it started to bound away. Echo murmured a short command to Spirit, who took of running. Spirit launched herself at the deer, locking her teeth onto the deer's flank, when the deer collapsed, a gray shafted arrow sprouting from the deer's side. Echo walked over, her leather boots making no noise. She nodded at Spirit, who let go. |
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| 21 Aug 2013 10:55 PM |
Cliche.
Its too straight forward.
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| 22 Aug 2013 07:19 AM |
Name: Erik Teron
A.ge: 20
Appearance: Black Hair, Black eyes( Dark Brown) Usually wears Black clothing with a leather jacket and leather boots. Has a scar running from his eye to the edge of his mouth.
Personality: He is very loyal to his friends and those who are important to him but its hard for him to forgive. He is very respectful and friendly once you get to know him.
Bio: His parents were killed when he was 10 that was how he got the scar, he lived with his adopted family ever since.
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| 22 Aug 2013 07:21 AM |
This one is the real one not the other
Name: Erik Teron
A.ge: 20
Appearance: Black Hair, Black eyes( Dark Brown) Usually wears Black clothing with a leather jacket and leather boots. Has a scar running from his eye to the edge of his mouth.
Personality: He is very loyal to his friends and those who are important to him but its hard for him to forgive. He is very respectful and friendly once you get to know him.
Bio: His parents were killed when he was 10 that was how he got the scar, he lived with his adopted family and his wolf which he named Nero
Extra Detail(s): Loves Wolves and other animals. |
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| Joined: 20 Jul 2012 |
| Total Posts: 877 |
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| 22 Aug 2013 07:25 AM |
| Yeah, what Ninja said. It's too bland, there needs to be some kind of twist. |
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| 22 Aug 2013 10:36 AM |
(Everbody likes scars in these kinds of roleplays!)
Ramus
I trot around in the forest with my hunting knife, looking for ANYTHING edible to slaughter. I finally see a rabbit but decide it shouldn't be killed. I keep walking and fall into a ditch about eight feet high. My right leg (Which is my good leg). Is hurt badly. It might be broken . I try to climb out of the ditch but I can't . My leg is too weak. I yell for hours until my voice runs out and I fall asleep. |
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| 22 Aug 2013 12:52 PM |
| (I'm not good with storylines. e.e I can try and redo it, if that's what people want.) |
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| 22 Aug 2013 01:06 PM |
Echo
She had hears the hollers of someone- or something. She had sent Spirit out to try and track down whoever, or whatever it might be, but Spirit had come back, and the fur along her back was bristling as she nuzzled Echo's hand. Echo had murmured a command, and Spirit loped along the trail, veering sideways into the undergrowth, Echo following her. She came to the ditch, and saw a figure slumped down in the ditch, with his right leg twisted in a strange way. She watched, hoping to see some sign that he was alive. That sign came, and she could just faintly see his chest rising and falling. She told Spirit to go fetch the rope that was at their cabin, and Spirit took off running. She was back in just a few minutes. Echo had found a sturdy tree, and she made a tight knot round it's stump, then tying another end around her waist. She climbed down into the ditch, and attempted to wake the figure. |
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| 22 Aug 2013 05:37 PM |
Ramus
I wake and almost freak out when I see the woman. "Who are you?" I say, managing to keep my cool. |
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| 22 Aug 2013 06:19 PM |
| She threw back her hood. ''Im Echo. And you?'' |
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| 22 Aug 2013 07:15 PM |
Name: Vennis Than
A.ge: 29
Appearance: Knight armor painted black with a gold stripe down the middle of the torso, with a gold helmet with a black stripe , grieves/gloves, and shin guards/ boots. Black hair with a warrior braid. When not in battle he wears the cloths of a noble
Personality: Ruthless in battle, but when not, a generous nice person, Helped to build his own house, and sometimes builds houses for people who can't afford o buy one or make one themselves
Bio: N/A
Extra Detail(s): He changes between an Ebony great sword with a gold hilt with the handle wraped in red leather, and a double sided battle axe of the same design.
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| 22 Aug 2013 08:18 PM |
| "Ramus." I say suspiciously.I am trying my hardest not to go all two-faced. My face becomes stressed, half with pain from my leg and half with effort to stay calm. |
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| 22 Aug 2013 09:59 PM |
| ''You took a bad fall, mate.'' She said. She then kneeled down, pulling out a leather satchel (bag). She then took out a vial filled with blue paste. She put some on her finger and then smeared it on the mans leg. ''Should help with the pain.'' She said as she put the vial back into the leather satchel. She then took out some binding and wrapped it around his leg. She put the rest back and retied the leather satchel to the belt she wore. |
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| 22 Aug 2013 10:09 PM |
| (? http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=110746817) |
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| 22 Aug 2013 10:12 PM |
| (Anyhow, bookmark for later) |
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| 23 Aug 2013 11:37 AM |
| (@Nosy Sure you can join in. No need to ask.) |
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| 23 Aug 2013 11:39 AM |
| (@Hugeboo Erm...Don't know him. e.e) |
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| 23 Aug 2013 07:09 PM |
| (@Mouser Yeah. No need to ask to be accepted.) |
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| 23 Aug 2013 07:51 PM |
| I decide to try to walk. "Thanks ..." I climb out of the pit but wince in pain while doing it. |
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