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matthew3323 is not online. matthew3323
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31 Aug 2013 11:39 PM
He gazed into the distance, his armor shining by the moonlight, galloped forth on his horse, the sound echoing through the valley slightly as he advanced. An arrow grazes his hair, Clifford jumps off his horse, falling onto his side upon the gravel road and stands upright.

Clifford rolls behind a tree, his sword falls from It's scabbard. "Not good." Clifford muttered as he stared at the sword. "Come out, come out, little mouse!" A gruff voice shouted from afar, a sweat bead rolled down Clifford's face, he darted for the sword.

He grasps the sword, an arrow pierces his shoulder. Clifford grunts, and while darting he glances left to see the bandits fifty feet away. Clifford smirks.

Clifford slides behind a tree, tearing the arrow out from his shoulder and looks, a somewhat deep wound, for his chainmail had received some of the force.

Clifford then slings around the tree, an arrow grazing his face, he darts to the bandits, he plants his foot onto a rock and leaps into the air, his sword up.

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Should I continue on? Please tell me, ^ ^
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matthew3323 is not online. matthew3323
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31 Aug 2013 11:44 PM
I'm sorry If you got a bit confused, but I don't want to spoil the story for you guys when It comes out.
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matthew3323 is not online. matthew3323
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31 Aug 2013 11:45 PM
If you guys want a little more info on the story, just tell me and I'll send it in a message.
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timpookie is not online. timpookie
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31 Aug 2013 11:46 PM
Isn't Clifford a big red dog from a childrens TV show cartoon thingy?
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matthew3323 is not online. matthew3323
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31 Aug 2013 11:46 PM
That IS a character, yes.

But no, I'm referring to Clifford Blackshire, my main protagonist.
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matthew3323 is not online. matthew3323
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31 Aug 2013 11:47 PM
It's just a WIP, but I'm thinking of changing the main male protagonists name to Cedric, what do you think?
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Flame240 is not online. Flame240
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31 Aug 2013 11:55 PM
Both names sound actually pretty good, I think Cedric seems more medieval-like though.
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matthew3323 is not online. matthew3323
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31 Aug 2013 11:57 PM
Thanks, I actually looked for a few more. Here they are:

Giles.
Thaddeus.
Godfrey.
Edward.
Everard.
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mageofpower is not online. mageofpower
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31 Aug 2013 11:58 PM
but I don't want to spoil the story for you guys when It comes out.

I doubt this is getting published...
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TieFighters is not online. TieFighters
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31 Aug 2013 11:59 PM
it sucks
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matthew3323 is not online. matthew3323
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31 Aug 2013 11:59 PM
It's only a section.
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skullx is not online. skullx
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01 Sep 2013 12:00 AM
There's no need for negativity here...Speaking realistically, yes, it may take time. But this is shaping up to be better than a LOT of books I see on shelves nowadays, believe me.
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matthew3323 is not online. matthew3323
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01 Sep 2013 12:09 AM
Thanks.
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