lkbirds
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| 30 Aug 2013 07:15 PM |
Intro: It all started when I was five. It's my only vivid memory from then. We were in the car, my mother and I that is. I don't know exactly what happened, but I heard an awful SCREECH. The world turned upside down, I closed my eyes, and didn't open them for another 2 years.
(This is the intro. I will add more chapters.) |
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gwebster2
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| 30 Aug 2013 07:18 PM |
Then I was seven
you gonna right a story from a 7 year old pov? |
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| 30 Aug 2013 07:20 PM |
you gonna right a story from a 7 year old pov?
Five year old actually. He spent 2 years in a coma (Presumably.) |
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lkbirds
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| 30 Aug 2013 07:26 PM |
Chapter 1: My mother died instantly. The airbag's what killed her. I hit my head when we flipped and was knocked unconscious. That's why I lived for another week. I went limp, saving myself from more serious injury. That, however could not save me from death. I was rushed the hospital, where they discovered that my brain had begun swelling. I would die soon. It was the government that 'saved me.' They were testing a new device to save veterans. It downloaded their memories and stored the in a digital format. They were looking for test subjects, my dad volunteered me. |
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lkbirds
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| 30 Aug 2013 07:39 PM |
| I don't think this is how a 5 year old child would talk. |
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lkbirds
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| 30 Aug 2013 07:45 PM |
(This is just background. He's not five anymore.)
Chapter 2: I officially died 7 days after the wreck. No, My brain died 7 days after the wreck. I lived. I lived as a program on a computer. My body lived. My body lived as a brick hooked up to life support. Two years I lived as a program. Two years of rummaging through the internet finding every bit of information I could. I those two years I developed intelligently to the level of a twenty year old. In those two years I developed emotionally to the level of a five and a half year old and physically I developed none at all. |
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lkbirds
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| 30 Aug 2013 08:16 PM |
(No more chapters. I'll just post more and more.) After two years they finally developed a new 'brain' for me. It was really a specialized computer made to contain me and allow me to control my body that hadn't aged at all. They hooked it up to my body and eventually downloaded me in. I opened my eyes. There were cheers from the entire medical staff. After that day I was famous. "The boy that survived death." I was also a target. You see being a computer comes with certain...perks. A. You can look anything you want to know up. Very useful if you end up on a trivia show. B. you can think much faster than a human, which gives the effect of slowing down time. C. you run multiple scenarios about what is about to happen and go with the most probable. All of these, the last two especially, make you "The perfect solider." Almost every country wanted me, some even wanted me dead, and multiple missions were attempted to capture or kill me. All of them failed. |
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| 30 Aug 2013 08:34 PM |
| At age 16, I joined the Military Academy |
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alpha8
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| 30 Aug 2013 08:36 PM |
| And at 18, I killed the officer after he berated he for besting him in everything. Then I joined the Taijoin Belt League of Power Rangers. |
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| 30 Aug 2013 08:39 PM |
| At age 20, I saved Mr. President from assassins. Zordon, and Alpha were very impressed because my fellow power rangers had been killed in a drink-and-drive, and I handled them alone. |
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| 30 Aug 2013 08:56 PM |
The problem with this is a single DNA strand takes up about a million GB,and it costs thousands of dollars per megabyte to switch computer memory to human memory or vice versa.
≈"I know,you gotta save space kids up in Canada and stuff"-Numbuh 4≈ |
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| 30 Aug 2013 09:00 PM |
@tehpwner
From what I understand his brain wasn't really a brain. It was a specialized computer placed in his body created to store his knowledge and memory.
"True courage is about knowing not when to take a life, but when to spare one." |
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| 30 Aug 2013 09:02 PM |
They put his ENTIRE BRAIN onto a specialized computer That is at LEAST(and I'm not kidding) 100,000,000,000,000 gigabytes
≈"I know,you gotta save space kids up in Canada and stuff"-Numbuh 4≈ |
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| 30 Aug 2013 09:06 PM |
Is that trillion?
"True courage is about knowing not when to take a life, but when to spare one." |
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| 30 Aug 2013 09:12 PM |
Probably not that high, but you get the point It's more than unrealistic.
≈"I know,you gotta save space kids up in Canada and stuff"-Numbuh 4≈ |
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gwebster2
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| 31 Aug 2013 12:06 PM |
It's a little genre called Sci-fi
science science FICTION
----> FICTION <---- |
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| 31 Aug 2013 04:06 PM |
That depends, is this a story in the future where the funds for brain-to-computer are much cheaper? If so, why are cars still dangerous enough to have cars crashing?
≈"I know,you gotta save space kids up in Canada and stuff"-Numbuh 4≈ |
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lkbirds
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| 16 Oct 2013 09:34 PM |
| :) It's not cheap. The government just has way to much money to burn and who would volunteer to be stuck in a computer (with a high amount of processing power, RAM, and storage. ) for 10 years while their memories are compressed then placed inside a smaller computer. This process, however, would take much less time with a younger child as they have less memories to copy.(hence 2 year instead of 10.) Some less important memories could be placed onto a server for later access. In fact now that I think about it I would personally think it more likely that they would have a micro-processor and a large amount of RAM rather than any storage at all in the unit that acts as a brain. It would be easier to run it like a Citrix box and have all hard drive space on a server, but who know what they will come up with. |
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