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| 29 Aug 2013 06:52 PM |
(Metroid rp. Im longshotting this.)
You wake up in your ship. You raise your chair and press a button on the wall. You activate the thrusters and fly towards norion. You heard there was a phazon metroid outbreak there. Your PED is attached to your suit still. You land and step out. A door explodes, and 3 space pirates run at you. You kill them all. You run through the door and see a metroid queen. You kill it. A phazon metroid sneaks up on you and drains your abilitys, knocking you out. You awake in a GF ship. You look down, and see your chest is ripped open, blue liquids are comeing out. You look at the GF scientests, and pass out again.
Rules: No mary gary sues. Put "Miniroids taste like glowsticks" in other to prove you read this.
CS: Name: Age: Zero suit appearance: Suit appearance: Special beam (Ice beam, wave beam, ect.): Other:
My cs: Name: Michael Okami Age: 20 Zero suit appearance: Black with red wolf markings on the hands and back. Suit appearance: Like the varia suit, but more blue. Special beam (Ice beam, wave beam, ect.): Ice beam Other: Miniroids taste like glowsticks
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JoshWesty
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| 29 Aug 2013 06:54 PM |
| Godmodding is basically mary gary sue. |
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| 29 Aug 2013 07:07 PM |
Name: Roy Age: 16 Zero suit appearance: Silver Blackish couloring looks like Samus's complete suit Suit appearance: Gold the place where the arm cannon shpuld be on samus's suit is a beam that has the appearance of a sword when nessesary, most of the time its an arm cannon. (The sword beam thing is a special instalment that wasn't removed ) Special beam (Ice beam, wave beam, ect.): Sword beam thing, Turns into diffrent types. Other: I froget what it was...i think it was "Miniroids taste like glowsticks" or something....
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| 29 Aug 2013 07:08 PM |
| Accepted. We can rp now. You start. |
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| 29 Aug 2013 07:13 PM |
| I use my special sword instalment and my sword glowing with energy as it shot out, I look to see if there was anyone else stranded where he was, he saw 20 Pirates storm into the room, He switches his sword to Arm Cannon and blasts them back, he then switched to sword and killed them, He went out of the room to see if anyone was captured or not. |
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| 29 Aug 2013 07:30 PM |
| I wander the room and slaughter lots of Pirates |
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cloneguin
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| 29 Aug 2013 07:49 PM |
Weak/ lacking story :(
Especially because you're basing it off of something else.
Try harder |
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pigIScool
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| 29 Aug 2013 07:54 PM |
| it reminds me of a metroid game for gamecube.... |
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| 30 Aug 2013 03:41 PM |
Its based off of metroid prime corruption 3. I just added a few things like "Phazon metroid outbreak". Anyways,
I set my beam to ice, and shoot a space pirate. He gets knocked over. I run over to the space pirate and charge my beam. I shoot him, and he freezes. I shoot a missle at him, and he shatters. 2 more space pirates run at me. I trip them and shoot them both. The were just militia, so they were easy to kill. I shoot open a door and see a room slathered in phazon, with mushrooms and other phazon plants on the walls and floors. I notice a huge hole in the ceiling. Some miniroids seem to be flying out of it. I shoot them all, and hear a huge roar. I look at the hole, and 10 phazon metroids come out along with a queen. I shoot the queen with a charge beam, attempting to freeze it. It takes a heavy amount of damage, but not enough to kill it. A phazon metroid comes at me from behind. It attaches to my head. I go into morph ball mode and lay a bomb. It had drained an energy tank from me. I got up, and shoot the queen a few more times. It gets knocked to the ground. Acting fast, i get a chance to scan it. The scans say theres a weakpoint on the very top of the head. I run over, charging my beam. I stick the beam in the weakpoint, and release. The queen freezes. I shoot the other phazon metroids, easily killing them. Though, i only killed 8. I shot a missle at the queen and walked towards the door. A phazon metroid suddenly gripped onto my head, draining my energy faster then ever. I fell down to the floor, and woke up in a GF lab, phazon being drained from my chest. I pass out. |
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