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Netprobe is not online. Netprobe
Joined: 04 Aug 2011
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26 Aug 2013 03:13 PM
Can someone point out errors for me on my Pokemon Universe thread? I keep finding massive errors.


Far into the future, the world of pokemon has developed greatly. Computers and nuclear energy, medicine, communications, and other forms of science have all advanced. But many things haven't changed, trainers still journey and villains still fight. But the villains are much newer and stronger, and the trainers are much more advanced. Wild pokemon have even advanced, in some areas rivaling human tech, even building cities of their own. Unfortunately, there is less habitat due to development. Will you rise to be a champion trainer, a hero of the wild pokemon, or the wickedest villain known? Or perhaps you simply want adventure. No matter what your goals are, no matter how far the goal is, you can make it to the top!

The world is pretty much the same, except almost every city has grown a lot, and pokemon are starting to build their own cities. New or greatly changed cities worth mentioning are listed here.

1. Goldenrod City
Goldenrod City has advanced greatly and has progressed into Ilex Forest some, but more to the north and east. I feel it is worth mentioning due to the fact it has increased greatly in size. Pollution has increased some, but not by much, and crime has lowered to almost nothing, the city quickly becoming friendlier and richer.

2. Saffron City
Saffron City has also grown, gaining a large amount of industry, but the air is quickly becoming very hard to breathe, and poison, electric, and steel types have taken over a small portion of the industrial areas. Sliph Co. is even bigger and more advanced. Crime is high, and the people are fearful, some leaving.

3. Sky City
A brilliant scientist created a propulsion unit powerful enough to keep a city in the air, so they decided to do exactly that. Sky City is the 5th largest city in the world. Both pokemon and people live here, and it is a center of science. It travels between regions and docks with special landing pads near each of the biggest cities in the region it is in, though it also hovers over the ocean a lot.

4. Ilex City
The biggest city made by pokemon is in the very center of Ilex forest, and it is as high tech as
Sky City, with massive towers that save space by not only reaching to the sky, but digging into the ground almost as deep as they are high, allowing the city to take up less space and minimize environmental impact. Only pokemon live here, and many still live in the wild, so this city is not as populated as most cities made by people.

There are smaller towns in forests, mountains, and caverns, but they are very small, lower tech, and impossible to mention, though many pokemon, as mentioned before, retain their wild habitats.

Rules
1. No godmodding.
2. Follow Roblox rules.
3. Listen to Netprobe and the admins.
4. Ignore trolls completely.
5. Legendaries are for admins only.
6. Use common sense. "It's not in the rules" is no excuse, I cannot think of EVERYTHING.
7. Put "Pokemon Universe" in "Other" if you read the rules.
8. DO NOT ASK TO BE ADMIN. If you are skilled at roleplaying and follow the rules, I will make you admin.

Admins will be added as I notice the best role-players who follow the rules.
They Accept CSes and can use legendaries and major plot elements such as villainous teams.

Trainer CS

Name:
Age:
Appearance(Including clothes):
Personality:
Short bio:
Items:
Other:
Skills:
Location:

Pokemon CS
Nickname:
Species:
Gender:
Age:
Level:
Bio:
Items:
Personality:
Other:
Skills:
Location:


THIS IS NOT THE ACTUAL THREAD, THIS IS A CHECK FOR ERRORS.
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Netprobe is not online. Netprobe
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26 Aug 2013 03:15 PM
I keep finding errors that ruin this massively. Someone point them out, I will soon make the final version and finally stop the embarrassing repostings, in this version I put locaiton in CSes.
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MacGruver2 is not online. MacGruver2
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26 Aug 2013 03:15 PM
No problems. It's like Creativemysterys except it isn't copy paste.

I would join if I didn't hate pokemon.
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Netprobe is not online. Netprobe
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26 Aug 2013 03:16 PM
Thanks, but I did copy and paste it from the text document I worked tirelessly on it on.
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Netprobe is not online. Netprobe
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26 Aug 2013 09:37 PM
Anyone help?
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Netprobe is not online. Netprobe
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27 Aug 2013 02:37 PM
Please?
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duck14 is not online. duck14
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27 Aug 2013 04:38 PM
Ilex City? Isn't that copying the Pokemon village in Pokemon World?
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fathat121 is not online. fathat121
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27 Aug 2013 05:10 PM
If you're talking about grammatical errors, then I fixed some of them. I also altered a few statements with better word-choice. This is your work, so I won't change it, so that it looks comparable to what I wrote.

Far into the future, the world of Pokemon has developed; greatly. Computers and nuclear energy, medicine, communications, and other forms of science have all advanced, however many things haven't changed. Trainers continue to journey, whilst villains still fight. Even so, the villains are much newer and stronger, as the trainers are much, more advanced. Wild Pokemon have even progressed in some areas; rivaling human tech, or even building cities of their own. Unfortunately, there is less habitat due to development. Will you rise to be a champion trainer, a hero of the wild Pokemon, or the wickedest villain to be known? Yet again, perhaps you simply wish to adventure. No matter what your goals are, no matter how far the goal is, you can make it to the top!

The world is pretty much the same, except almost every city has grown a lot, and Pokemon are starting to build their own cities. New, or greatly changed cities worth mentioning are listed here:

1. Goldenrod City
Goldenrod City has advanced greatly, and has progressed into Ilex Forest some, but more to the north and east. I feel it is worth mentioning due to the fact it has increased greatly in size. Pollution has increased some, but not by much, and crime has lowered to almost nothing. The city is quickly becoming friendlier and richer.

2. Saffron City
Saffron City has also grown, gaining a large amount of industry, but the air is quickly becoming very hard to breathe, and poison, electric, and steel types have taken over a small portion of the industrial areas. Sliph Co. is even bigger and more advanced. Crime is high, and the people are fearful; some leaving.

3. Sky City
A brilliant scientist created a propulsion unit powerful enough to keep a city in the air, so they decided to do exactly that. Sky City is the fifth largest city in the world. Both people and Pokemon live here, and it is a center of science. It travels between regions and docks with special landing pads near each of the biggest cities in its current region. Still, Sky City also hovers over the ocean; a lot.

4. Ilex City
The biggest city created by Pokemon is in the very center of Ilex Forest, and it is as high-tech as
Sky City, with massive towers that save space by not only reaching to the sky, but digging into the ground almost as deep as they are high; allowing the city to take up less space and minimize environmental impact. Only Pokemon live here, and many still live in the wild, so this city is not as populated as most cities; made by people.

There are smaller towns in forests, mountains, and caverns, but they are very small, lower in technological advancements, and impossible to mention. Still, many Pokemon, as mentioned before, retain their wild habitats.

Rules
1. No God-Modding.
2. Follow Roblox rules.
3. Listen to Netprobe and the admins.
4. Ignore trolls; completely.
5. Legendaries are for admins only.
6. Use common sense. "It's not in the rules" is no excuse, I can not think of EVERYTHING.
7. Put "Pokemon Universe" in "Other" if you read the rules.
8. DO NOT ASK TO BE ADMIN. If you are skilled at roleplaying and follow the rules, I will make you admin.

Admins will be added, as I notice the best role-players who follow the rules.
They Accept CSes and can use legendaries and major plot elements; such as villainous teams.

Trainer CS

Name:
Age:
Appearance (Including Clothes):
Personality:
Short Bio:
Items:
Other:
Skills:
Location:

Pokemon CS
Nickname:
Species:
Gender:
Age:
Level:
Bio:
Items:
Personality:
Other:
Skills:
Location:
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fathat121 is not online. fathat121
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27 Aug 2013 05:11 PM
so that it doesn't look comparable to what I wrote*
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Laserbeak89 is not online. Laserbeak89
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27 Aug 2013 05:15 PM
I like it. I would post it on a thread as a join RP. Not bad.

postpls
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Netprobe is not online. Netprobe
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27 Aug 2013 08:27 PM
I have to admit, I took some inspiration from that jerk creative when I made it, since his thread was the main one I worked on for a while. Okay, if 2 more people report no errors, POKEMON UNIVERSE WILL HAVE A FINAL REPOST!
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Quasar99 is not online. Quasar99
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27 Aug 2013 08:36 PM
i only didnt join because you kept attacking creative's pokemon RPs for basically no sensible reason
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Netprobe is not online. Netprobe
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27 Aug 2013 09:39 PM
Because he won't let me hate cats and nearly started a war with my group with his stupid minions.
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Netprobe is not online. Netprobe
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27 Aug 2013 09:47 PM
Pretty sensible.
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Netprobe is not online. Netprobe
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27 Aug 2013 10:26 PM
How did the CNers insert their posts to the middle of the page? They weren't there before...And no duck, it's just the best location I could think of.
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Netprobe is not online. Netprobe
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27 Aug 2013 11:05 PM
By errors, I meant things like forgetting "locations" on CS that will have a massive effect.
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duck14 is not online. duck14
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28 Aug 2013 02:56 AM
He said you couldn't hate cats but instead that you shouldn't say that other people should and take the, out of their places. He never started a war either.
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fathat121 is not online. fathat121
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28 Aug 2013 04:06 AM
Here's the argument about cats. Some of these statements are unnecessary.

AbCatchem: I met the most gorgeous cat today. It was really nice to me. Then a dog came over and ruined everything.

Netprobe: Yeah right, are you sure you didn't get that backwards?

AbCatchem: The dog just scared off the cat. It wasn't trying.

Netprobe: Cat's are gross, not gorgeous.

AbCatchem: Your opinion.

CreativeMystery: ...Net; I don't know what cats did to you but you seriously have problems. Every time someone brings up cats you have to come in and insult them and bring everyone down.

CreativeMystery: Makin' me sad. :(

Hydreigons: The Great Cat War continues...

Fathat121: I don't see why you guys are debating about cats and dogs; when there are pigs in this world that gorge upon human flesh...

CreativeMystery: I actually prefer my Cockatiel.

AbCatchem: ...I want flesh-gorging pigs.

Recesity: WHO HAS INSULTED CATS TELL ME SO I CAN MURDER THEM

Netprobe: What is a Cockatiel? And dogs are ALWAYS nice unless provoked or previously bullied, they want to please people. Cats HAVE no emotions due to being nonsocial. They are simply mindless predators, the same as bacteria.

AbCatchem: Cats are good company, it's interesting to watch their behavior. And dogs are just as good. Oh, Recesity, that was Netrobe.

Netprobe: Behavior? Cats are just BIOLOGICAL ROBOTS. They aren't COMPANY, they see you the same as they see a falling leaf, just a moving object they don't care about.

Duck14: So why are we talking about cats?

AbCatchem: ...I made a small comment about how I saw a very nice looking cat. From there it escalated. Drastically.

Fathat121: Here are ten reasons that cats are better than dogs. Cats treat your guests more politely. Cats smell better than dogs. Cats are funnier than dogs -- even if the cats don't know it. (Funny Cat Videos) Even the loudest cat is quieter than any dog. Cats are a natural insect repellent. Cats take much better care of their toys. Cats don't need to be walked. Cats enjoy bringing gifts to their loved ones. Cats and Laser Pointers: FUN

AbCatchem: aaaaw yeee laser pointers

Netprobe: My dog smells wonderful, her smell calms me down. Cats are funny because of some guys with picture editing plus cats just act dumb. Many dogs are very quiet, cats just don't have a reason to make noise. My dog eats bugs, cats just spit hair. Dogs also are more interactive and PLAY with you. Exercise is good for you. Gifts? Hair spitting or other people's blood? Cats are high intensity plasma beams:more FUN

AbCathcem: ...why are we even giving a damn about this?

Fathat121: It's for the children.

CreativeMystery: I have bot ha dog and a cat. Net; what you are saying are just stereotypes. My small tabby cat actually sleeps with my German Shepard at night.

CreativeMystery: People who say ALL cats are bad, in all honesty, they are just stupid. Disliking most cats is reasonable but saying ALL cats are violent and hateful is just wrong.

Hatfat121: guys I just read all this cat dog thing and you people must all be incredibley stupid. Both cats and dogs suck equally -_- pets are the fire that burns your cash their like children ungrateful little pests

AbCatchem: guys I just read all this cat dog thing and you people must all be incredibley stupid. Both cats and dogs suck equally -_- pets are the fire that burns your cash their like children ungrateful little pests

Foxesrcool554: HEY HAT! My dogs are freaking adorible. So shut up.

AbCatchem: He's saying they just don't really have a use, and are a waste of space.

AbCatchem: I sometimes feel that way about pets, but not so much anymore.

Hatfat: @foxes the ugly ones are mutts the "adorable" ones are balls of fluff either way their both still terrible little animals

Netprobe: Beagles aren't fluff, mine defends my yard too. A giant rat the size of a wheelbarrow once got in and was quickly cornered. I didn't say they were violent and hateful, I said they are too dumb to have emotions. Even if they did have intelligence, it would be predatory, not social.

Fathat121: I hope that the wheelbarrow that you're comparing the rat to is really small...

AbCatchem: My family has a dachshund-beagle and a golden retriever, along with two cats. The dachshund-beagle once barreled over a fence to attack a dog...statue.

Fathat121: Once, my grandfather killed a badger with a shovel because it was eating his plants. Afterwards, he buried it underneath a rock; as its grave.

AbCatchem: ...what was the badger's name?

Fathat121: Bob... Bob the Badger.

AbCatchem: What a beautiful name.

Hatfat121: fine the beagle isn't a furball it is a vicious monster that will eat anything that moves like say a rat the size of a wheelbarrow

Netprobe: Nope, large wheelbarrow, maybe a medium go-kart or one of those really really small 1-seat cars. You won one of those rip offs? And my dog didn't eat it. It is very loving and HAS THE CAPACITY TO DO THIS!

Fathat121: Once, a dog attempted to murder me. I think it was being defensive. Note: This comment is not a stereotype for all dogs.

CreativeMystery: Why are we still complaining about this? It is clear netprobe is wrong and he clearly just has past issues. All pets are cool...Except alligators; they'll kill you.

Fathat121: Agreed. Let's end this with some white confetti.

CreativeMystery: Fathat; I keep my white confetti in the third drawer to the right of my fridge; but for the love of God don't look in the second to the right. DON'T LOOK IN IT!

Netprobe: Creative, I'm not wrong, your wrong. Cats are the exact same as goldfish:biological robots. Thoughts of cat:eat, walk, sleep, sleepwalk, sleep, eat, sleep, bite, yell.

CreativeMystery: Thoughts of a dog: Bark, Run, Lick, Lick, Lick, Bark, Sleep, Bark, Chase a squirrel, Lick, Eat, Drink, Lick, Lick, Poop, Lick, Eat poop, Chase another squirrel.

CreativeMystery: Netprobe; you are very 'racist' claiming all cats act the same. That is like saying all dogs are vicious killers.

Netprobe: Dogs have social ancestors, therefore they have developed intelligence. Cats ancestors just thought:Eat. Kill wild animal. Eat. Stalk prey. I hunt. Hunt. Hunt.

CreativeMystery: Most big cats are social. So now you are not only wrong but you are messing up facts.

Netprobe: Most? Other than lions, nothing...They just sit there like goldfish. Compare them to a piece of paper, no matter what color you paint it, it only sits there. People should eat cats instead of keeping them as pets.

CreativeMystery: Disliking cats is fine; but what you are saying is completely 100% ignorant. Cats are just like dogs only smaller. I have a one-eyed cat that seriously picks up leaves and gives them to me as presents. He sits and plays with me until I get bored. You are just ignorant.

CreativeMystery: Normally, I would ignore people when they are clearly just be stupid; but you not only stopped a very innocent conversation but started an argument. Stating all cats are the same and they are all just killing machines is just dumb. You lost every little bit of respect I had for you.

CreativeMystery: -cough- -cough- Awkward time is over.


BONUS ARGUMENT

Fathat121: I taught myself how to rap... with a book.

Netprobe: Isn't rapping that really irritating noise?

Netprobe: That thread broke roblox rules... (I posted a thread with my rap... eh heh heh).

AbCatchem: Well done Fathat!

Fathat121: Yes, I know. Rapping is actually speaking or chanting rhyming lyrics, so it's somewhat like reciting poetry in a sing-song tone. Still, over the years rapping has been changing a lot. So, rapping is primarily used in hip-hop music; these days. I wouldn't say that rapping in general is an irritating noise, but I must admit that I don't enjoy much of it, either. It only depends on your taste of music.

Fathat121: Thanks, Ab.

Netprobe: If it sounds good, that does not make it music.

Netprobe: an art of sound in time that expresses ideas and emotions in significant forms through the elements of rhythm, melody, harmony, and color.

Netprobe: that is the definition. Yelling and spitting for money is not in that category.

Netprobe: either way, the thread broke the rules.

Fathat121: Music is an art whose medium is sound, and silence. Its methods can include melody, rhythm, harmony, etc. So, technically it would have to be considered music. Music is not a judgement of human opinion; that I agree upon. Still, if something SOUNDS good, then it would be considered music. This is not because of the enjoyment of the tone, but instead the generation of the tone.

AbCatchem: Art can, technically be anything depending on how you view it. Say a urinal with a crude signature that has been sent to an art gallery.

Fathat121: Thanks Ab. You put that in a beautiful way.

AbCatchem: You're welcome.

CreativeMystery: I agree with fathat; music is pretty much anything you hear as music. The term; "Music to my ears." Is there for a reason.

The argument went on, but... it's just too much... Anyhow, you can get an idea of our revolts, now.




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wasabimasta is not online. wasabimasta
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28 Aug 2013 04:11 AM
Did it rain while you guys had this war?
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MacGruver2 is not online. MacGruver2
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28 Aug 2013 04:19 AM
"Here are ten reasons that cats are better than dogs. Cats treat your guests more politely."

Depends.

"Cats smell better than dogs."

That is because they rub their smell off on you. Making you the one that smells bad.

"Cats are funnier than dogs -- even if the cats don't know it. (Funny Cat Videos)"

Cats don't have a sense of humor.

"Even the loudest cat is quieter than any dog."

Now this is a interesting one. Dogs have to shown they are around by making noise, but Cats have to keep trying to grab your attention by touching you and such. Dogs can easily shut up after you've shown him you are aware of him but Cats won't stop till you give them attention.

"Cats are a natural insect repellent."

Dogs can protect the Human.

"Cats take much better care of their toys. "

Dogs need to destroy their toys, its in their nature.

"Cats don't need to be walked."

Because Cats don't need to get rid of energy. While the dog does.

"Cats enjoy bringing gifts to their loved ones."

Depends. It's also a proven fact that is most of the time a Bird or mouse.

"Cats and Laser Pointers: FUN"

It also hurts the cats brain functions and confuses them.
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duck14 is not online. duck14
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28 Aug 2013 07:50 AM
This was not about dogs vs cats though to my knowledge it down to tolerance and accepting others opnions even if they oppose your own.
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wasabimasta is not online. wasabimasta
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28 Aug 2013 08:50 AM
Seriuosly though, was it raining?

[Please say yes....]
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italdude is not online. italdude
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28 Aug 2013 09:26 AM
The only reason I'm not joining is because you left the role-play because we like cats and you hate us for liking cats. You called me and the other role-players of PW 'jerks' for what? Us liking cats?
It was my idea to create a futuristic Pokemon role-play and I was expecting Creative to make it with me and the others but you liked the idea and took it.

Also, fathat, there were even more arguments in a chat with me and Netprobe.
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awesome234 is not online. awesome234
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28 Aug 2013 09:34 AM
So, in the end.

Net was mad for being banned about his endless need to fight about cats and other things.

So he pretty much copied the threads he was banned from in a time era that he liked.

I think he regrets quitting the threads, which is why he made that one alt, and continues to post on them pointlessly.

-Smile, it scares people...-
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Netprobe is not online. Netprobe
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28 Aug 2013 01:23 PM
Ital, I was a part of that idea and it was denied anyway. I do not NEED to fight about cats. I hate you all for being jerks and not allowing me to believe cats are only good for cheap internet humor. IT IS about tolerance, the fact you tried to convert me to cat loving so many times and not accepting my feelings.
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