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| 23 Aug 2013 10:57 PM |
The -[Piano Funny]- Original script So a guy walks through a door and he opens it and the sound effects manager (hidden up above) starts making funky sound effects like a huge crash and bang when he shuts the door. He puts his hat down and Points his finger up telling the sound manager to stop. He goes on and starts playing the piano, interuppted with a ringing phone. He pulls a banana out of his pocket and pretendedly answers it, where he gets in a fight with the banana, peels it, and its a bite of the inside and throws it, like he hung up. All of a sudden the banana makes the noise that happens when someone hangs up and its not on the phone thing, and he walks over, picks up the banana, and puts it on the phone thing, wondering why it didnt make the noise anymore. He now goes back to the piano and starts playing again, and this time when hes about to finish the Sound manager messes with his piano and starts making it play again (since he previously played it) trying to make the man look like hes dubbing it, ultimately trying to ruin his reputation. He claps once and the autotune stops. As of this stopping a walnut is thrown at his head and a sound effect happens. He picks up the walnut, and throws it onto a secret net hidden out of view, (as of picking it up he pulls it like a grenade where the sound effect goes off and Sound Manager #2 who is working out of view throws a skeleton down on strings. He starts to play the piano again and the skeleton reaches for his hat and another sound effect happens. Confused of this, he gets up, and throws a walnut at the skeletons head, and starts to laugh in mute. The skeleton puts on the hat and hides beside the couch. He gets up and says "You try to stop your sound director and just because hes a skeleton now doesnt mean I cant do the sound effects anymore", as of him opening a compartment from the couch, picking up a remote and playing all the sound effects at once. The smoke machines go off and the curtain closes. |
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ann510287
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| 23 Aug 2013 10:58 PM |
| http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i4ZHkxi-Rc0 |
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| 23 Aug 2013 11:00 PM |
| This is a serious thread, I want constructive feedback only. |
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| 23 Aug 2013 11:01 PM |
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ann510287
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| 23 Aug 2013 11:02 PM |
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| 23 Aug 2013 11:03 PM |
If your just gonna post lousy youtube links to your Forum 'Weapons', please just get out. This is a serious thread, again.
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| 23 Aug 2013 11:04 PM |
horrible out pls
Not constructive to me. Im not getting out nor do I think its horrible. |
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| 23 Aug 2013 11:04 PM |
no i mean in programming this would error u need halp in programming dis no program dis is a madness thing.
btw it still horrible nao outoutoutoutout plssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss |
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| 23 Aug 2013 11:05 PM |
horrible, get out.
or what sky said |
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| 23 Aug 2013 11:05 PM |
no i mean in programming this would error u need halp in programming dis no program dis is a madness thing.
btw it still horrible nao outoutoutoutout plssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss ----------------------------------------------------------------- 1."no i mean in programming this would error u need halp in programming dis no program dis is a madness thing." I have NO idea what your trying to tell me here. If your saying its not possible, well thats stupid. This is not constructive, so you cannot say this is horrible without a reason, and NO im not getting out.
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| 23 Aug 2013 11:07 PM |
Please stop saying "Horrible, get out"
For 1. Im not getting out, so thats to bad for you. 2. I dont care if you think this is horrible but PLEASE be constructive, I am here to be serious and discuss my script.
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| 23 Aug 2013 11:08 PM |
| Haven't you heard the phrase, don't feed the troll? |
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| 23 Aug 2013 11:08 PM |
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| 23 Aug 2013 11:08 PM |
"script" as in program? :D
for i=1,math.random(1,50000) do if 1+1 == 2 then print(math.random(1,6)) else print("crap i broke physics") end end while true do if 1+1 == 3 then print(math.random(12,3246) else print("nonopls") end end |
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| 23 Aug 2013 11:09 PM |
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| 23 Aug 2013 11:09 PM |
Haven't you heard the phrase, don't feed the troll?
Yes, I have. I dont want trolls here, im seriously here to be serious with my script, since ive always wanted to write comedy for all ages, and this certainly would entertain me. Ive been looking for someone out there who will actually reply with something meaningfull. |
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| 23 Aug 2013 11:10 PM |
"script" as in program? :D
for i=1,math.random(1,50000) do if 1+1 == 2 then print(math.random(1,6)) else print("crap i broke physics") end end while true do if 1+1 == 3 then print(math.random(12,3246) else print("nonopls") end end ------------------------------------------- This isnt a script ment for Roblox, LOL. Im seriously not replying to anymore now/
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| 23 Aug 2013 11:10 PM |
| I think it was okay, but I didnt understand it halfway through. Make it paragraphs, and maybe some more context about the situation. I feel special being the only one not sending stupid "Office" links with get out and u out now horrible when they didnt read it. |
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| 23 Aug 2013 11:10 PM |
"TROLL TROLL TROLL"
well then put this in ot not to many trolls der |
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| 23 Aug 2013 11:11 PM |
| If you haven't gotten the message yet.. |
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| 23 Aug 2013 11:12 PM |
I think it was okay, but I didnt understand it halfway through. Make it paragraphs, and maybe some more context about the situation. I feel special being the only one not sending stupid "Office" links with get out and u out now horrible when they didnt read it.
I will rewrite the middle to give more detail. This is a slapstick sound effect type of comedy, that Ive decided to persue. For most of the skits I write in the future will have TONS of sound effects, and no dialogue, and if theres dialogue, its usually 1-2 lines. What do you want me to explain more of? (Please quote) |
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