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| 19 Aug 2013 04:30 PM |
Well , looks like you want more dont you ? / Okay then/ I'll spit a flow so cold , Antarctica will burn / I wanna teach you a lesson but you never want to learn/ So prepare yourself cuz you're about to get schooled / Rapping isn't your size you need a different sized shoe / Rap really isn't my thing but if the shoe fits wear it / And why you always copying YMF like a confused parrot ? / Saying swag and always tryna brag claiming stacks / When you're really living with your grandma's in rags (Haha)/ I have to say your rhymes made completely no sense / It felt like Dr . Seuss made a fiction high on m(EDIT)th / And whats with you always saying your an MC ? On all your verses there was nothing you had to say against me / Your flow in rap is like a retar(EDIT)ded river/ Only 8 bars ? That make my verses look much bigger/ Tell biskit to stop riding your tic tac / Before I roast on him and leave him hanging on a bridge fast/ Rope around his neck , Push him off the bridge / Next thing you hear is "SNEP"/ Thats the sound of a reaper taking you in an instant / I told you im cold , call me non roast resistant/ You're a peasant , the feeling of fire isnt unpleasant / Better bring some cold water and a fire proof vest / Cuz we all know which MC is clearly the best/ |
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| 19 Aug 2013 04:34 PM |
| *Isnt Pleasant. Sorry bout that |
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| 19 Aug 2013 04:47 PM |
I'll spit a flow so cold , Antarctica will burn / ___________ yo i dont get it |
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| 19 Aug 2013 04:56 PM |
By that "I spit a flow so cold , Antarctica will burn" I meant that my flows make Antarctica look hot "Burn" Its like mind f(EDIT)ing |
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| 19 Aug 2013 04:57 PM |
| My lyrics are just that complex |
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| 19 Aug 2013 04:58 PM |
| Shady can only win by not replying. |
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johnb
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| 19 Aug 2013 05:03 PM |
| woah, my mind is str8 murked |
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YayoJo
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link6249
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| 19 Aug 2013 07:02 PM |
Of the 25 verses in this poem, only five rhyme. Two of them are the SAME THING. "Vest-Best"
"I'll spit a flow so cold , Antarctica will burn /"
No sense at all, and that isn't really a Complex rhyme, in fact, it isn't even a rhyme at all. |
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| 19 Aug 2013 07:04 PM |
this is horrible
please leave thx sir |
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| 19 Aug 2013 07:08 PM |
| @Link , "Burned" and "Learned" sound the same. This is hip hop not english class. And @Flipped , you're probably whacker than YoloMasterTrash for saying #HashTagYoloSwag Fa(EDIT)gget |
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| 19 Aug 2013 07:10 PM |
now now saying that word is very not nice y u mad doe
im sorry im laughing quite alot on how your trash talking and going ape on a virtual game sorry hang on |
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| 19 Aug 2013 07:11 PM |
| @Flipped , Listen , Your talking smack but you dont want to make a diss track cuz you'll get smacked |
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| 19 Aug 2013 07:11 PM |
lol. Like Bridge and SNEP sound the same.
Btw, Whacker..? And if you try to edit in curse words you're down right pathetic. |
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| 19 Aug 2013 07:13 PM |
| Like come on man. If he's lame for saying #yoloswag then what makes you think you're any cooler by saying "Fa(EDIT)gget"? |
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| 19 Aug 2013 07:14 PM |
| @Shaun I dont know who you are. But I can tell you're already you're a lil B(EDITh. Make me a diss track if you hate me so much |
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| 19 Aug 2013 07:14 PM |
true shaun
dissing on forums used to be fun until noobs like u show up |
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| 19 Aug 2013 07:15 PM |
Fine. Diss Track:
http://www.roblox.com/---item?id=10865083 |
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| 19 Aug 2013 07:16 PM |
| @Shaun you're pretty pathetic because you're still on my tip criticizing my flow when you cant do any better. Thats sad. I feel sorry for you man |
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| 19 Aug 2013 07:17 PM |
Criticizing your flow?
You do know I can't hear you right? |
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| 19 Aug 2013 07:18 PM |
| @Shaun , listen. You're probably some fat ass kid sitting on a computer tryna get me upset. But if thats so you're failing horribly |
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| 19 Aug 2013 07:19 PM |
Alright. You can feel sorry that I'm not pretending to be a rapper on a kids game. I understand you completely, it's all love man.
Have a perfectly great day. And enjoy my track. Here's another if you want.
http://www.roblox.com/---item?id=2042754 |
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| 19 Aug 2013 07:19 PM |
But if thats so you're failing horribly
you seem tense |
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| 19 Aug 2013 07:20 PM |
"fat ass kid sitting on a computer tryna get me upset"
In that case, and judging by you actually giving a damn about me, I think the fat ass kid is successful. :) Bye dawg. |
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