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| 24 Apr 2013 07:49 PM |
So I'll share an intro that I wrote.
"Depression and confession are synonymous in my position, filthy 'cause I'm guilty, stay anonymous in my condition, keep an empty wallet 'cause you know the show is free admission, shut your mouth and zip it - welcome to the realm of my ambitions."
I won't bother to share the whole song, but that's the intro to it.
Still writing lyrics in my free time.
Sorry for the off-topic, ignore it if it actually upsets you.
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| 24 Apr 2013 07:50 PM |
here's how the rest should go
bippity bop bop boopity boop boop bop bip |
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| 24 Apr 2013 07:50 PM |
| wow the fact that you're actually good |
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| 24 Apr 2013 07:51 PM |
Lol thanks Erica.
I've kind of been writing lyrics for like a year now. It's a good way to express yourself. |
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Razghul
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Sleeting
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fred man
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| 24 Apr 2013 07:52 PM |
| i wonder if im still great rapper in ro rap >>>> |
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| 24 Apr 2013 07:52 PM |
Nice job. Sounds great.
~~~> TnU; That Trust Guy ~ |
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| 24 Apr 2013 07:53 PM |
@Sleeting
Maybe some other time. I'll be offline soon. |
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Yo911
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| 24 Apr 2013 07:56 PM |
| This is impressive. I could never do this. Don't have the imagination to think of what to write in most forms of poetry. |
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| 24 Apr 2013 07:56 PM |
Nice Eminem, Who do you listen to btw?
I like Kinetics ya. |
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| 24 Apr 2013 07:57 PM |
Pretty good man I could hook u up man you know what I mean
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| 24 Apr 2013 07:57 PM |
| that was a legit rap thing k |
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| 24 Apr 2013 07:57 PM |
Listen to some Otis Redding.
~Düx~ |
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| 24 Apr 2013 07:58 PM |
Yeah it does take a LOT of practice. I remember how bad my first lyrics were.
I call them rap lyrics, but they're honestly more like spoken word. I just refer to them as lyrics because I write them in song structure and I always have a random instrumental in my head when I write/read them. |
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